Saint Seiya: The Lost Canvas, Ultimate Cosplay

I feel so disappointed when I see the author from seven years ago replying to me xx

Ah... It was 11 years ago... I feel like I can't wait...

I feel so disappointed when I see the author from seven years ago replying to me xx

I feel so disappointed when I see the author from seven years ago replying to me xx

Damn, when will you update? ? ? The writing is really good! ! !

Why not update? ! !

Hahaha, Sage, are you willing to marry your son? By the way, is the divine body of Meng Xuan's sleeping god male or female? It's even better if it's a man!

Comment on "Saint Seiya LC: Ultimate Cosplay" Dylan, first of all, Xiaoyi wants to apologize to you. I am currently preparing for the final exam. I don't have much free time. The order was issued a little late. I am really sorry for making you wait for so long. Coming to the topic, let's talk about the topic first as usual. The article is a fanfic based on the Saint Seiya theme. Judging from the title, it highlights the cosplay theme expressed, which is very good. But there is something that Xiaoyi doesn't quite understand. What does this "ultimate" mean? Shu Xiaoyi couldn't fully understand. If the modifier highlighted the cosplay team's high abilities, and even the character's abilities could be cosplayed, it would serve to highlight the center of the article, and it would be in line with the meaning of the question. Although the word "ultimate" may cause misunderstanding, the topic is generally very attractive and worthy of encouragement. [Cos is a highlight] Next, let's talk about copywriting. Personally, I believe that copywriting must play a role in stimulating readers' interest in reading. Of course, this can be in a variety of styles. For fan fiction, it is better to divide it into different versions. For example, there are literary editions, summarized editions, funny editions, etc. Each reader has different preferences, so they are divided into different editions. [2/2] Readers can look at the type of copywriting they like, and they will naturally be interested in reading the article. It can also give full play to the phenomenon space, which is much better than a single type of copywriting. It is recommended to add copywriting that summarizes the main plot of the article. The original funny copywriting can be in the same column, or can be added to the article chapters together with the notes about the time-traveling characters. More introductions will make the article worse. [1/2] Collusion, more coherent. At the same time, don't forget to use fonts of different colors and types to mark important points! Article content. Dylan does a good job in describing the relevant characters, with a lot of verbal descriptions, and the dialogues are lively and interesting, which will not make people feel bored, and they perfectly complement the current environment. The action description is detailed, especially the fighting part, which is wonderful. However, psychological description cannot be ignored! [The description of the psychology of the parties involved in the article is too unclear, and the characters' personalities cannot be reflected by words and actions alone] It is recommended that the following articles pay more attention to this aspect, and there is also the issue of article style. Xiaoyi feels that Dilan's writing has a very obvious feature, it's funny! You can tell from the title of each chapter, and the article style is set to be relaxed. Nowadays, fan fiction with many people wearing it generally follows the Honkai Impact route, so Xiaoyi suggests that you change the style of your work to a hilarious one, which is more in line with the characteristics of the article. In terms of plot sequence, each chapter has its own focus, which makes it look messy. It is recommended to work on the overall segmentation, or to organize the chapters written by each person in the cos group together and label them. We also need to have a flexible degree of control over the sequence of plot development. [2/2] It is best not to write here and then suddenly run over there. It must be organized. As for the plot, it is still in the side story part. The specific plot has not been developed yet, so I cannot make too many comments. But one thing is very important. Fan fiction must follow the plot, not deviate, and change the plot as little as possible. If the plot is changed too much If there are too many, you can't call it fan fiction. Please grasp the plot carefully! The above is just Xiaoyi's personal opinion, I hope it can be helpful to Dilan. Then, cheers for Dilan, Xiaoyi supports you, and you will write more interesting articles in the future~ ——The 12th Brothel—— Xiaoyi

It's about time there's a sequel~ Come on~

Can I venture to guess that the author is from Jiandilan Society in Dashan?