Zeyang really likes her current deskmate. She speaks plainly and directly, and can be sharp at times.
Zeyang wants to get closer to a girl like her. But from Lu Yao's words and actions, she can tell that Lu Yao doesn't like her. She can't tell whether this is the opposite of liking, meaning not liking, or a synonym for hating, meaning not liking. Either way, she feels hurt.
[Unmasking] is followed by [Understanding], which I'm slowly writing. Unmasking can also be read as a standalone story.
Theme:
The first sentence: "She is not good at striking up conversations with others, so she can only sit there." I couldn't understand this sentence. When I saw this, I shut down decisively. This is rubbish.
Well written. I watched it with great joy. . . The author can try a long novel.
Your writing is okay, don't be discouraged. I support your new article.
I finished reading it in one afternoon, but it wasn't enough. You can write about what happened after college and work! It's also good to develop novels>3