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Duanmu wanted Shi Po Lou to give up the fight for the country. Furthermore, Shi's style was not suitable for being a king. It turned out that Duanmu had long wanted to join hands with Shipolou, but Shipolou accidentally did what a dog did. How could a person like Duanmu commit himself so easily. In the end, the battle was nothing more than - "Winning or losing, we are determined to join hands with Tiao Xi. We will fight together on a bright moonlit night. What is deep in our hearts has nothing to do with Jin Ou." If I get this wonderful person, I would not want to lose my country, hahaha. After much deliberation, I finally figured out the "secret edict" part. Su Qin Yuzhong was not stupid and was a great hero. He knows his son better than his father. If the late emperor handed Shi Po Lou's "Secret Life Edict" directly into the hands of the prince, the prince would definitely kill Shi Po Lou, so he handed it over to his confidant Su Qin. Then why didn't Su Qin take it out as early as the Shipolou rebellion? Because the late emperor's last wish was not to kill Shi Po Lou, but only to restrain him from rebelling, Su Qin could only try to find a way between the two. Su Qin also thought carefully and found Duanmu. And this silk book was clearly handed over to the crown prince by Su Qin in the end and was burned on the spot by the crown prince. How come it still ended up in Duanmu's hands? It can only mean that there are actually two copies of the silk book. . . The late emperor was also a shrewd old ghost. He must have known that a battle would eventually be inevitable and Shi Po Tower had to withdraw, so he gave one share to him so that he could keep his long-cherished wish; the other share was given to the prince, still as a bargaining chip to hold the opponent hostage. In this way, the context is clear. None of them are simple, but everyone has never calculated that the drunkard in Shipolou is not interested in drinking. It's so funny.

The writing, layout, and plot are all excellent. As one of the protagonists, Prince Shi Po Lou was the first to appear and grab the spotlight, but then everyone's understanding of him became a side description for a long time, and then he officially participated in the plot about one-third of the way through the text. Although some people doubt whether the CP with Duanmu is Prince Shi Hong who fled to him from the beginning, but doesn't this mean that he is attacking in a sinister year, cold and calm, and the trick is that the prince in trouble is rescued by a hidden master in the world who initially hated but later admired him and gave his life to him = = But obviously Master Qili has shown from different details (including Prince Shi Hong's words, expressions, and behaviors) that the unique, amazing, indifferent and peaceful Duanmu Immortal and ordinary Shi Hong are incompatible with each other in terms of temperament, character, and values~~ Duanmu escorted the prince out of Chongshan to Shangdang and finally to Yanzhou. No matter it was mountains, rivers, or towns, the author wrote a lot about the process of being chased along the way, and the description of the fight and escape process was very exciting, concise, clean, and very graphic. The supporting characters who appear in it all have distinct personalities and their own unique skills. Some of them have stories behind them, which makes it hearty to read and makes people unconsciously sigh at the fate of various characters. The expression of emotions in the article "Jin Se" is also unique. The focus of the article is obviously the ups and downs of the plot and the shaping of the characters' psychology and personality. But the hidden thread of emotion slowly unfolded. Shi Po Lou's life experience, the past between Shi Po Lou and Duanmu, and Shi Hong's own character as a future emperor were formed and perfected... If Shi Po Lou's appreciation and love for Duanmu can be clearly detected from his expressions and words, then Duanmu's deep love for Shi Po Lou is only hidden between the lines: Su Qin has repeatedly hinted at the mystery within Jin Se, Let Duanmu guess the mystery of ShiPolou's life experience that should be on his mind, Duanmu frowned when he saw Shipolou's injury, Duanmu talked about Shipolou's anger when he killed more than a thousand monks in the trap, and Duanmu finally answered Su Qin's affirmation and calmness of Shipolou's trust at the riverside... Duanmu's strategy bet on Shipolou's trust and sincerity, and on Shipolou's side, he longed for Duanmu deeply, and was determined to win after losing. It turns out that the most important goal of Shipolou's action is to find Duanmu, who has been missing for many years; it turns out that Duanmu's coming out of the mountain seems to be to return a favor to Su Qin and repay Yan Fa's grace of survival. With the protagonists and supporting characters desperately chasing, desperately escaping, and desperate calculations, the two extremely powerful handsome guys finally put aside the world, put aside the mundane things, and put aside the suspicion and uneasiness hidden deep in their hearts. They stayed together sweetly among the green mountains and green waters, accompanied by the sun, moon, stars, and pine tea and fresh fish~~~~ The extra chapter of this article is a very sweet married life. It draws a happy ending for the two immortals who are shouting and killing in the main text. More importantly, it also makes the readers happy^_^ (I whispered that it would be better if there were more extra chapters~~) Also worth mentioning are the names of the characters in the text. Master Qili gave almost every character a very unique and nice name, which also added a lot to the color of this article. Finally, I would like to thank Mr. Qili for writing such an amazing article. As a reader, it is a very enjoyable reading process. ^0^

Nice! Or is this kind of old novel able to solve my literary shortcomings?

This silk book that I made an appointment with Su Qin from the beginning finally made me feel that Duanmu has been in love with Lao Shi for a long time ~ What a great article!

I just found out today that there is a sequel to this article. I was very excited. This time it is complete.

My favorite is still this one, HE is great. It's a pity that the author didn't write it anymore!

I love this article so much. Duanmu is stunningly beautiful. The big stone loves the beauty but not the country. It is so beautiful to finally get married. The lack of fate of the water and fire makes people sigh. Qili's writing style is strange, witty, clear and charming. It leaves a lingering fragrance after reading it. I like it! But adults prefer BE. Border Town is so traumatizing to watch. A Flower is also a tragedy. Although there is a small side story, I feel that the meaning is still unfinished... My childhood sweetheart is very cute, I strongly hope there will be a follow-up... Your writing is very outstanding, and your stories are particularly vivid. I sincerely hope that you can keep writing!

At the end of the third chapter, Duanmu officially appears. Then in Chapter 15, Duanmu and Shi Po Lou reunited. From beginning to end, Mu is the only protagonist of this article. In fact, the fugitive prince met the courtiers from many years ago, which can completely write this CP. But then, in about seven miles, there will be a BE that the rabbit is dead and the dog is cooked, right? Or intrigues or the like, it would be very bloody... In the first chapter, Shi Po Lou investigated the case and gave guidance to the situation, which was already a heroic image. Listening to the music and recalling people, laughing over a glass of wine, and having a good temperament, it can be seen that he does not stick to trivial matters. Lian Zhao is beautiful, and there is no trace of charm on the side of the hero. Liao Shan calmly also behaves like a counselor, and being a servant counselor is like this, which further shows the character of the master. Even though the person playing the harp is no longer around, the sound of the harp remains in everyone's heart. Even before Duanmu appeared, he was already on par with Shi Po Lou. Shi Hong's escape is a bit like the death of Chong'er. The difference is that although Chong'er is arrogant but kind-hearted, he has a great cause but is also lazy and unstable. After some training, he finally becomes a wise king. Although Shi Hong was young, he was ambitious. Although various trials in the future made him grow, his ruthlessness remained unchanged. Can't let go. But writing should be like this, otherwise there are too many outstanding people and it will be difficult for readers to choose. I always feel that it is overshadowing and not much good. The main line must be very clear. The fighting scenes are all written concisely and smoothly, basically pursuing the beauty of streamline, so the writing has a flowing style. The whole thing is fast paced. Therefore, Duanmu came out to stop quietly. It's flowing water and leisure. Generally speaking, the most powerful people should speak less and be more wanton. This is especially true of hermits. In fact, Duanmu is a very up-to-date person, and he doesn't speak with a gun or a stick. Generally speaking, it's the prince's classmate who is too arrogant that makes people not talk well to him. However, Duanmu asked about water usage as soon as he appeared on the stage, which was really impressive. The setting of the five elements is very bright, and even their names are very beautiful. Zhu Cijing's final appearance is also very beautiful and sad. It fits her character very well. The five elements are different in number, and the descriptions are smooth and very like that. Adults probably prefer the earth element and the water element, these two are written about the most. Although Liao Zhang was the leader of the Wood Industry, his status as counselor was the most important. The confrontation between Duanmu and the Five Elements involves the cause and effect. It also highlights his talents. To create characters, the plot must speak for itself. Just seeing the comments from the characters' mouths is too thin to hold up. But for the first dispute here, I still feel that Fotucheng's setting is a bit redundant, and I wonder if there is a more appropriate possibility. However, the part where he evaluates his disciples is used to highlight Duanmu. I like it very much. It's really a good line of praise. Regarding love, the whole novel seems to be lacking, so tenderness is rare. Neither Shi Polou nor Duanmu are hypocritical people, so the love is also clean and neat. Therefore, the reunion was not lingering, and there was no entanglement afterward. The accident many years ago was not a tie. Between the words, all the past events came to light, but Duanmu was ruthless, and Shi Po Tower didn't know how to take a roundabout way, and finally we parted. I love watching "Reunion after a Long Time"... Shi Po Lou is very lovable regardless of his character or behavior. Naturally, such a lovable person cannot blend into the emperor's status as a dye vat. He doesn't want the country but only loves beauty, which is quite right. The extra story at the end is pornographic but not pornographic. Duanmu has always been very abstinent (it seems like adults like to write about sex with a strong sense of abstinence)... So actually I still can't get enough of it... I'm not in a good state today, I'm in a bad state... So what I wrote is incomprehensible... Cry to death

Good!!!!! There are so many locked up!!!!! But so good!!!! (Incoherent)

Sure enough, no one is as cunning as him, hahaha