One-Night Tower

I really, really, really like this short story. The meaning is still unfinished, and the layout is exquisite. Although there is basically no direct inscription of the psychological process, the emotional development is neither vulgar nor abrupt, and is very smooth and natural. Oh, Ah Qi, how can you write so well!! After reading this article, your taste will suddenly be spoiled!

Very talented and very touching

I came back to nag. A good ending is HE I have always liked adult writing, so I sincerely hope you can fix all the pitfalls as soon as possible.

In fact, it would be better if there is a side story

I read the article a few years ago, and it was really emotional to read it again.

The ending is so unexpected... The idea is very good~ and Guangzhou is so friendly~

So pretty~~ Touched

No wonder you feel so familiar with Hexiangju... Could it be that Ah Qi is from Guangzhou? ... But it seems that Guangzhou is an open city all the way, so there should be no deportation in 1998...?

I'm sorry to the author of the article I read two years ago. . .

Ah~~What a great article, happy~touching~, Ah Xing is so cute!!