Do you dare to make the next one?!! It's been a year, okay!!
Came after Xiaoyin. Big cheers. Wouldn't it be better if these extra contents were quietly included in the main text? It would be a bit boring to take it out specifically like this.
The writing is good.
It's a pity that I can't tell a story! The constant foreshadowing and going in circles in order to be fascinating only makes the story blunt and ugly.
First draw up an outline to outline the story frame, and then go wild with details and highlight the highlights.
The story was so good that I was tortured. I have to say that the emperor is the first scumbag, and the male protagonist is the second scumbag.
Love at first sight? Sort of. . Weird
Can you not stop abruptly every time? . . . The miserable heart-gouging
Suddenly I realized that no matter how clean I am, the male protagonist doesn't please me anymore. He can't protect his woman and sends her to die. The female protagonist is so pitiful... It's more difficult to wait. T_T
I want to read the story of Yu Hui, Nan Zhu cleans up the emperor and instantly becomes a scumbag.
Although I knew He Yu had his own reasons, I still couldn't forgive him. I think that no matter how difficult he was, he shouldn't have hurt the heroine like this (although I think the heroine is a little extreme). If he loves her so much (I'm not questioning the fact that he loves her), even if he can't accompany her when he comes home on the second day of the second year of junior high school, he can apologize in person instead of just a cold note; he proposed to the emperor and doted on her so much, why didn't he listen to her later? I can't say this even if I have difficulties. It makes sense, because he has doted on her so much before, and he is still afraid that others will not know that she is his weakness? Or does he not have the courage to see her? Why marry Suli and just follow her will, shit! Is there any woman who wants her husband to marry another person? It's just for his protection. Moreover, Suli stayed with her all day long and did not go out because Suli scolded the heroine twice. Is the sister (?) More important or the wife?... It is rare to find a good one in a short story. I went too far into the drama. This is purely my personal opinion so far. He Yu has not been a good husband. I firmly support the heroine at all costs. Don't shoot me... Routine reminder
Zi Ning is the emperor?
Okay, let's not worry about the emperor or not. How to deal with it in the next chapter? Could it be that the male protagonist has some compelling reasons?
Do you dare to make the next one?!! It's been a year, okay!!
Came after Xiaoyin. Big cheers. Wouldn't it be better if these extra contents were quietly included in the main text? It would be a bit boring to take it out specifically like this.
The writing is good. It's a pity that I can't tell a story! The constant foreshadowing and going in circles in order to be fascinating only makes the story blunt and ugly. First draw up an outline to outline the story frame, and then go wild with details and highlight the highlights.
The story was so good that I was tortured. I have to say that the emperor is the first scumbag, and the male protagonist is the second scumbag.
Love at first sight? Sort of. . Weird
Can you not stop abruptly every time? . . . The miserable heart-gouging
Suddenly I realized that no matter how clean I am, the male protagonist doesn't please me anymore. He can't protect his woman and sends her to die. The female protagonist is so pitiful... It's more difficult to wait. T_T
I want to read the story of Yu Hui, Nan Zhu cleans up the emperor and instantly becomes a scumbag.
Although I knew He Yu had his own reasons, I still couldn't forgive him. I think that no matter how difficult he was, he shouldn't have hurt the heroine like this (although I think the heroine is a little extreme). If he loves her so much (I'm not questioning the fact that he loves her), even if he can't accompany her when he comes home on the second day of the second year of junior high school, he can apologize in person instead of just a cold note; he proposed to the emperor and doted on her so much, why didn't he listen to her later? I can't say this even if I have difficulties. It makes sense, because he has doted on her so much before, and he is still afraid that others will not know that she is his weakness? Or does he not have the courage to see her? Why marry Suli and just follow her will, shit! Is there any woman who wants her husband to marry another person? It's just for his protection. Moreover, Suli stayed with her all day long and did not go out because Suli scolded the heroine twice. Is the sister (?) More important or the wife?... It is rare to find a good one in a short story. I went too far into the drama. This is purely my personal opinion so far. He Yu has not been a good husband. I firmly support the heroine at all costs. Don't shoot me... Routine reminder
Zi Ning is the emperor? Okay, let's not worry about the emperor or not. How to deal with it in the next chapter? Could it be that the male protagonist has some compelling reasons?