A Family of Demons and Monsters

These two men are not good people... If Chen Wen ends up falling in love with them, she will definitely be a bitch.

I think Chen Wen is actually the cannon fodder. . .

It can't be over like this, it's too sudden!

... Is there HE in this... Chen Wen is so miserable...

Review of "A Family of Demons and Monsters" It's quite enjoyable to read Su Su's writing, which is written in one go. Although it talks about monsters, they are humanized monsters. There is no grand framework, and the story is entirely about the world around us. Because of this, it is not difficult to bring it in. There are no different restrictions on gods, monsters, ghosts, and people, so it seems very easy. Next, let's start from the beginning. From the first chapter, it can be seen that the author hopes to create a sense of humor, but it is a little wordy. The heroine is entangled by a cute dog demon that can transform into a human and a dog. If the author can use more concise language to describe this scene, and add the character's demeanor and expression, the appeal will be stronger. Let's talk about language. If repeated language is used well, it can bring a different atmosphere, such as the classic Westward Journey, but in the first chapter, because there is no background atmosphere, I don't recommend using it. The author's concept is quite unique. It is different from the popular simple world of monsters or gods and monsters hiding in the human world. This kind of setting where humans, monsters, gods and ghosts live together, and non-human beings are loved by humans because of their aura is unconventional and very innovative. In terms of characters, the author also carefully designed some cute features, such as the dog demon who played a lot of scenes in the beginning. The puppy is always lovable, and the humanoid child with fluffy ears and tail is really lovable. Of course, there are also monsters with a cold temperament, a bull head who can cook, and a mischievous horse face... After reading briefly, you will always find your favorite characters. For the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the kitten wants to poison the snake. The emperor appears in the first few chapters. I haven't figured out his character yet. At first, he is an iceberg type, and then he becomes sensitive and irritable. His mood will change completely because of the heroine. These are all okay, but later on, he feels a little childish. Any one of these characters alone can create a very successful image, but together, you must have a deep foundation to integrate them into a reasonable, sensible and living character. Otherwise, each character has a bit of it, but each one is not in-depth. Readers who like a certain type will not love this character because of this little superficiality. More than ten chapters later, another man appears. The definition of the male protagonist is a bit vague, but excluding the male protagonist that the audience identifies at first sight, either the man at first sight is wrong, or the man at first sight met the female protagonist late, otherwise, there will always be a grievance for the one who came first. For the heroine, I didn't find many advantages, but because of the popularity of ordinary beauty and destiny, it doesn't matter. But what should I say about the heroine's emotions? The kitten feels a little messy. Not everyone can resist the charm of a handsome boy. When she rejected the emperor at first, she could be considered to be angular, but nothing happened, and she suddenly accepted it, and it developed too fast, as if the lines on the paper suddenly turned a few corners. I thought there would be a direction, but ended up scribbling again. Everyone is familiar with Internet language, and the reasonable use of some Internet terms can also create a sense of humor. Susu has done a good job in this regard. The use of Weibo comments is very consistent with the style of this article. When added to the article, it can well bring out the character of the character, which is much better than flat description. To sum up, here are some simple insights from Mao Mao. I hope the writing will get better and better. Mao kitten review

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When I read this chapter, I had a feeling that I couldn't stand it... I felt that the author wanted to write a confused and strong character~ but overall it was a bit of a failure... But please continue to work hard.

I can't see this chapter. Besides, Chen Wen is not a green-waisted girl, right? I always feel that she is the passionate queen. Did a certain great emperor make a tragic mistake?

Who is the male protagonist? . .

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