[Anime Crossover] A Traveler in the World of Anime

After reading this article, I was moved, excited, and sad (the author is a stepmother?_?). I am really grateful that I persisted in completing this article. Every time I see that my favorite article has been completed, although it is a bit regretful, I am more moved and stimulated. There are so many pitfalls these days! As for the extras, someone likes either Passion or Pure Love Cure!

I want to travel back in time to Naruto or a manga to be a Super Mary Sue~~~~~~~~Ah~~~~~God~~~~~Just grant my wish·

Is it possible that I am incompetent in romance? Is it because I have watched too much Danmei

When I saw the words 'it tastes great', I somehow felt cute... (Covered my face and ran away)

Still can't see the cuteness, and I feel a little tired after reading this article. Definitely get a negative score. (Suddenly I discovered that I have the potential to have a poisonous tongue!) I would like to remind the author that when writing about characters, even if everyone cannot be fully described, the personality of the protagonist must be written out~ Generally, novels focus on the differences between the protagonist and others. In fact, the author occasionally makes complaints or something, which can not only increase the cuteness, but also increase the harmonious atmosphere. (My personal favorite is essays that make people laugh and cry.) If you have special hobbies, don't mind if the author explores his own style of writing. This will be better. But read more of other people's essays and learn from other people's strengths, and you will slowly improve. A small flower to express encouragement.

I have a taboo when reading novels, that is, I really don't like disguised spoilers such as 'how will they be after many years' in the novel? Most of the time, when I see such words, I have seen the ending, and have no desire to read anymore. Therefore, the author should pay attention to not spoiling as much as possible, just to let readers guess what you will write next. Also, after writing so much, the plot has not yet unfolded, and it feels like it is dragging out, and it feels like a propositional composition is off-center. This chapter will not be graded.

Good writing has either cuteness or surprises, JQ or QJ, but it's four chapters long and I haven't seen it yet. Also, it feels a bit cliche. Good writing is meant to make readers want to stop and not guess the rest of the story. It's malleable. I seem to have almost seen the ending. So don't hesitate to buy bricks.

Kakashi was shocked. How could Kakashi, a cautious person like him, be so nice to a woman and say so many words when they first met? What I couldn't accept the most was that there were words like "Miss Sir" in it. It felt very immature. (The author said that he doesn't mind the venomous tongue, so he's a weirdo)

The characters are not outstanding enough and the first chapter is not attractive enough. But the layout is pretty good, so I'll just give this chapter a point. Finally, I hope that Sesshomaru will not be written off.

Kakashi probably also likes Xinyuan, otherwise he wouldn't have said so many words.