Rebirth in the Secret Realm

Three times, I love this book so much! I don't remember how I came into contact with this book. At that time, I seemed to be a junior high school student who could only read pirated articles, ORZ (now I'm back to make up for it!), And now I'm going to graduate school in the blink of an eye. It's so fast, but I still like this book as much as the first time I read it. I also like to watch Dada's speeches. I feel that most of the time his ideas are similar to Dada's. I'm so happy >< In fact, I still poke and poke at the superimposed battlefield every few months, hoping that one day the "update" will be displayed... But even if the second part fails, I will still remember it. Being able to travel through the Internet for so many years and find this place must be fate, and it is a very deep fate, so I hope this fate can last a little longer. I also hope that everything will go well in reality and live happily! I remember Dada said that this book is your dream. If you don't update it, you might have found a new, bigger, better dream or something. Anyway, I wish Dada's dream come true! I don't know what to say in the middle of the night, so I cover my face, and apologize in advance if I say anything bad.

Forgive me for living a life of debauchery and love! I didn't understand the previous ending at all! Forgive my low IQ! Finally the two protagonists are together, showering! ! Perfection! If there is any meat, I'm sorry, I made an excessive request, just ignore me! The writing is very thrilling, the plot is very tense, and the rhythm is clear. It's great! ! ! However, I always feel that in fact, the two of them are in conflict with each other, life and death are intertwined, and finally entrusted to each other, living alone may be more exciting. There is always something strange about me when I read new literature. That is, the people who were good to me in the previous life will definitely treat me well in this life. The people who are good to me in this life may not be good to me in the previous life. In short, there is a fixed image! However, you are no longer the same person you were in your last life. How can you ensure that others are still the same person you were in your last life? Unscientific! Of course, rebirth is inherently unscientific. The above are some of my thoughts, please correct me! Thanks for the great article! ! ! !

I can't see the response, so I'll post it again. First of all, I'm really sorry for taking so long to comment. [Bow] When I first read this article, I was attracted by Infinite Flow. There are not many articles on JJ Infinite Flow, but there are quite a few. However, most fanfics are written with "Infinite Horror" in large letters, and there are very few truly original Infinite-flow novels. First let's talk about settings. The setting is very good. When JQ didn't appear at first, I read it based on QD's writing. The more I wrote, the more attractive it became. The strong type is definitely my favorite, and the protagonist's character is also pretty good. The evil one suffers, and the loyal dog attacks. The first chapter of the book describes the involvement between the two. The more Ying wants to escape, not wanting the two to get to know each other and prevent the future from happening, the more the relationship between the two is promoted. Everything changed long ago when he wanted to become stronger. There are elements of Goldfinger, but not offensive. However, bad guys and little fools are really not suitable to appear in strong stories. When I saw the little fool, I was shocked. Sometimes the cuteness can turn into a surprise. Then there's the background. I'm actually a little confused as to why Heaven is used as the background, even if it doesn't refer to that Heaven, but there is always a sense of substitution, and the title does not match the content of the article. A Chinese-style background and title, placed in the plot of most foreign movies and games, made me a little uncomfortable at first. Especially the "Tianyun Overlord Gang Qin Tianwang" in the first chapter, I will tell you that I read these words several times... I really thought that the gang was called Tianyun Overlord Gang before, and I was still struggling with how to choose a name that was so similar to a game gang. I have to say that the name of the gang always feels lower and not as powerful as the names of the forces written in QD's articles. Next comes the most important plot. A good plot can support an article, especially in such a long article, a good plot is necessary, otherwise there will be no desire to read. Xiaoyue, except for Plants vs. Zombies, I have never played or watched any of the games and movies you wrote, so I just read them as originals. The introduction you wrote is very good and thoughtful, but sometimes it is too much and sometimes I feel a little incomprehensible, especially the first chapter. , It will be very confusing, and there is also an introduction to the protagonist's skills after getting them at the beginning, and another introduction when using them. As a result, I really love and hate it when watching Dandantang. That chapter is my favorite chapter, and it is also the chapter I have the least patience to read. The span between each plot is a bit big, but Xiaoyue you managed it very well. You didn't change the style of the article because of the plot itself. There's no need to talk about the writing style. It's absolutely OK. Such a huge structure seemed to be written with ease, and there were no major fluctuations or bugs. One more thing I want to say. I don't know if it's because Xiaoyue is almost finished. The last few chapters are a bit confusing, and I feel like I'm not up to the task, so I have to feel a little regretful. Finally, I wish Xiaoyue's second part of this book will have good results and bring more surprises to readers. Also, I actually prefer Nai's book "Adou Can Afford to Help" [PIA Fei] Produced by the cheating Changping Shop [Fushengzi]

First of all, I'm really sorry for taking so long to comment. [Bow] When I first read this article, I was attracted by Infinite Flow. There are not many articles on JJ Infinite Flow, but there are quite a few. However, most fanfics are written with "Infinite Horror" in large letters, and there are very few truly original Infinite-flow novels. First let's talk about settings. The setting is very good. When JQ didn't appear at first, I read it based on QD's writing. The more I wrote, the more attractive it became. The strong type is definitely my favorite, and the protagonist's character is also pretty good. The evil one suffers, and the loyal dog attacks. The first chapter of the book describes the involvement between the two. The more Ying wants to escape, not wanting the two to get to know each other and prevent the future from happening, the more the relationship between the two is promoted. Everything changed long ago when he wanted to become stronger. There are elements of Goldfinger, but not offensive. However, bad guys and little fools are really not suitable to appear in strong stories. When I saw the little fool, I was shocked. Sometimes the cuteness can turn into a surprise. Then there's the background. I'm actually a little confused as to why Heaven is used as the background, even if it doesn't refer to that Heaven, but there is always a sense of substitution, and the title does not match the content of the article. A Chinese-style background and title, placed in the plot of most foreign movies and games, made me a little uncomfortable at first. Especially the "Tianyun Overlord Gang Qin Tianwang" in the first chapter, I will tell you that I read these words several times... I really thought that the gang was called Tianyun Overlord Gang before, and I was still struggling with how to choose a name that was so similar to a game gang. I have to say that the name of the gang always feels lower and not as powerful as the names of the forces written in QD's articles. Next comes the most important plot. A good plot can support an article, especially in such a long article, a good plot is necessary, otherwise there will be no desire to read. Xiaoyue, except for Plants vs. Zombies, I have never played or watched any of the games and movies you wrote, so I just read them as originals. The introduction you wrote is very good and thoughtful, but sometimes it is too much and sometimes I feel a little incomprehensible, especially the first chapter. , It will be very confusing, and there is also an introduction to the protagonist's skills after getting them at the beginning, and another introduction when using them. As a result, I really love and hate it when watching Dandantang. That chapter is my favorite chapter, and it is also the chapter I have the least patience to read. The span between each plot is a bit big, but Xiaoyue you managed it very well. You didn't change the style of the article because of the plot itself. There's no need to talk about the writing style. It's absolutely OK. Such a huge structure seemed to be written with ease, and there were no major fluctuations or bugs. One more thing I want to say. I don't know if it's because Xiaoyue is almost finished. The last few chapters are a bit confusing, and I feel like I'm not up to the task, so I have to feel a little regretful. Finally, I wish Xiaoyue's second part of this book will have good results and bring more surprises to readers. Also, I actually prefer Nai's book "Adou Can Afford to Help" [PIA Fei] Produced by the cheating Changping Shop [Fushengzi]

It's very interesting. The second part of Fattening is in progress.

I used to like to read Qi Qi (I don't know if I will be harmonized), but the only drawback is that the protagonist and his gay friends can only have sex by themselves Xiaoyue's writing is so good, Qi (worrying about being harmonized) Dianfeng and JJ's gay love~~~~It's perfect Come on, come on~~~~~Waiting for the second part

This article is very beautiful. This is a must, otherwise I wouldn't want to write a long review. All right. . . This is my first time writing a comment on jj, please take care of me. When Xiaomon reads an article, he first looks at the writing style. Those who have not graduated from elementary school, and those who are obviously novices and still like to pretend to have high IQs, all pass. Then watch the plot. I personally think that looking older at three years old and older at eight years old is also feasible in novels. Whether there is anything new or not can be seen in the first chapter. Whether the author can grasp the overall situation and whether he has enough grasp of the characters is basically understood at a third of the time. In today's era of literary scarcity, where there are countless online novels that have to be thrown away after reading only one page or three chapters, Mon spent three whole days without leaving home, eager to finish reading "Rebirth in the Secret Realm". Therefore, the quality of the novel is very guaranteed! Absolutely beautiful! As for what makes it good-looking, I won't go into details. I believe there are countless comments that have already praised it. Mon prefers to find problems. At the end of the novel, Dr. Z proposed the theory of infinite space overlap in 2100. I wonder if he meant to pay tribute to Dr. Z? Enough with the nonsense, let's start with a formal discussion. Since it is a novel written by Mugenliu, it is inevitable to make some comparisons with Mugenliu's founder. After all, the big mess back then will always be a thorn in Mon's heart. The secret realm exists to help evolution, and the decisive battle between the two major forces in the secret realm resulted in differences during the evolution process. Why do they need to evolve so urgently? This is the answer that Infinite Horror has not given. At the end of this novel, a reasonable explanation is given. Because of the overlap of infinite space, humans can only survive by evolving. Seeing this, mon's original reluctance, which he thought was about to end, turned into anticipation for the second part. Mon doesn't know if there is a replacement ending for Infinite Horror after Z, and he is not in the mood to watch it again. Even if there is, please don't mind if you are a fan of Z. What Mon is talking about here is the first ending of Infinite Horror. Although it's not a big mess, Jiang Pei's words at the end are really a failure. I believe that the author also felt a sense of powerlessness when he wrote it. The beginning of the second part says that there are black holes everywhere, and many people disappear because of the black holes. So is it possible that these people have entered the secret world together with their bodies? At the end of the first part, Jiang Pei said that they entered this world in a dream. That is to say, some people enter it physically, and some people enter it in a dream. At the end, Jiang Pei's dream may be incomplete. As I said before, the time in the secret world and the real world are similar. In the first part, Yan experienced two lives in a secret realm, and only one day and one night had passed when he woke up from the dream. Chu's method of entering the secret realm should be the black hole, and he entered in front of Ye Wentian's tomb. And Ye is also in the secret realm, as is Zheng who was killed by Yan. Then Zheng and Ye merged again. I hope these can be reasonably explained in the second part. Then when it comes to this last name. As the guardians of the secret realm, the Lei tribe, why do they have the surname Jiang? They are derived from the secret realm, and the secret realm is the product of the law. After giving them a name, it will make people think that they are domestic slaves created by a certain doctor, which always gives people a weird feeling. A small suggestion about the end of the novel. Laws should be more vague, more majestic, and more elusive, rather than being so anthropomorphic. Mon thought it might be appropriate to put the first chapter of the second part here directly, leaving a suspense, and then explain it indirectly in the second part.

I haven't read the article yet… Ugh! ! ! Consider writing a long review after reading this article. So what... I just thought about it and didn't want to write it. Nowadays, people are too lazy to talk about it, so it feels better to say it^_^! ! ! If I don't write it, everyone will despise me...

Xiaoyue's writing is so good. It's great to watch the second part again.

Part 2, I really want to watch it o(><)o