[Reborn!] The Empty Harbor

Three brushes are over. I'm sorry that I haven't left a message before, because I don't know how to use jj's client, and I'm not used to writing messages, but I really like this article and want to read it every once in a while. Because I really like tutoring and usually read a lot of novels, my taste can be said to be quite picky. As far as tutoring fanfics I have read so far, this one ranks in the top three in my mind, so even though this article may not be that perfect, I still want to praise Kong. Akong's portrayal of Squalo is really great, there is no collapse at all, and the extension is very natural. Squalo's image also seems to be fuller and more natural. In my understanding, this is the role of fan fiction, to make up for and improve the regrets in the original work or to develop it reasonably based on the original work. Therefore, I completely cannot accept a series of settings such as haphazardly changing the plot of the original work, imposing character relationships, forcibly bending characters, and soul-transmitting original characters. In my opinion, this completely loses the meaning of writing a fan. It is better to write a completely original article. After reading this article, I don't want to search for other Squalo fanfics at all. In my heart, his CP is Vitti, only Vitti. I feel really satisfied and happy watching it, and I have a feeling of completeness. But I was very disappointed, because A Kong only had two tutoring chapters, and Dino's one was locked again. Sorry, I vaguely learned that Akong was very angry about plagiarism, so he only wrote one or two fics for each anime. There are really too few fanfics that suit my taste, so even though I know it's inappropriate, I still humbly hope that A Kong can write another fanfic about tutoring. I'm sorry, if A Kong really doesn't want to, just think of it as my fart. I'm sorry that I accidentally wrote such a long article. It's all irrelevant and messy. Anyway, I just want to praise Akong. Thank you for bringing us this article. I'm really lucky to see it.

To be honest, compared to Visconti, a heroine like Odile is really unlikable. . . Anyway, I don't like her very much

Speechless =_=... I still have to be exploited by Odell.

Hey, forgive me. I hate betrayal.

I've read so many educational articles, and it's hard to find a decent article by Squarro. ^O^ But the one called O is a bit of a scene-stealer. The aura of the protagonist is inexplicably gone. We rarely write book reviews, but it's rare to see a well-written article by Squalo. I have to say a few words to express my inner excitement.

I've read so many educational articles, and it's hard to find a decent article by Squarro. ^O^ But the one called O is a bit of a scene-stealer. The aura of the protagonist is inexplicably gone. We rarely write book reviews, but it's rare to see a well-written article by Squalo. I have to say a few words to express my inner excitement.

So selfish, but that's how human beings are

It's really great, especially the last sentence www. I love your writing so much and it always makes me feel indescribably moved. I feel like I'm going to become your crazy fan hhhhh

Www. Although I feel great after reading it all, I always feel that the timeline is wandering between the 19th century and the 21st century. Maybe my understanding of the Pope has always been stuck in the 19th century (?ω?) But it is really a great article~! It really makes me miss it~

Really, I haven't seen such a work that makes people cry in a long time. The author has constructed a tutoring world of his own. Through the text, the figures of Vitti and his companions are vivid and vivid. This work resonated with me. Although I prefer the courageous, childish and innocent Visconti ten years ago, the huge contrast ten years later makes the overall image more successful. No matter whether the author wants to portray such a brave and strong girl who is not perfect but has flaws, it must be said that she has achieved success. Come on! Looking forward to writing better works!