If one day I become the God of Spring, I'll make the peach blossoms bloom together!
A short story.
I promised F a heartbreaking story. Readers who can't handle angst, beware.
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I finished reading it with extremely complicated emotions... What the hell kind of ending is this? ! Begging for a side story
Chapter 6 makes my heart hurt so much, eh
It's locked. ←_← It's almost reaching the highest point of abuse. How can it be locked? !
I am also considered a good sex friend of the little lady. As a sex friend, I must read this short article that was published a little earlier. Someone left a message again, and my eyes widened. Could it be that this is a piece of abuse written by a scumbag? This kind of revenge on society and revenge on love makes people fall into denying themselves, denying love, and denying the universe. The article is really deep in my heart. And it's not long, so I naturally decided to read it.
To be honest, the beginning is very boring. Some demanding readers once said that if the first three paragraphs are boring, they will not read it even if the rest of it is interesting. A beginning like this will basically destroy the whole series. But I don't know how. Look, how can there be an article that starts with a rich girl appearing and being graceful, but then it doesn't look right as you read on? After a moment, the heroine seemed to turn to the servant of the rich lady who was the heroine. How miserable this is. I seem to foresee that one of them will become cannon fodder. Cannon fodder is a role with a long way to go. Without him or her, who will be able to support the protagonist? (You can fill in this blank with single words, phrases, or sentences. It depends on the situation.)
When I was beating drums in my heart, I was just thinking about whether a noble and cool man was coming, and sure enough, he was not only arrogant but also entangled. As soon as this kind of man appeared, everyone knew it well, and this guy must be the instigator and must not have escaped.
What amazed me was that it turned out that this guy already knew the art of psychological manipulation and actually knew how to use other people to kill people. If this kind of mentality continues to develop, it would be nothing. It would be nothing if he could dominate the world for generations and make people cry and retreat. Such an opponent is easier for people to accept than Erkang who just points his nostrils towards the tearful Erkang. After all, a man who does not change his face after hearing "I love you so much that my heart aches" is so lethal that I had to purify my state of mind by the Diamond Sutra for three days in a row.
Everyone is familiar with the subsequent plot. A powerful ex-girlfriend appears, and the male protagonist breaks out while wandering. The golden gun is invulnerable and will last forever. "What kind of tearing of deep love and hatred occurs at the same time!" When I copied this exclamation sentence, my hands were obviously shaking. This was not enough. I followed it with the sentence "He He wants her to be mutilated with him, from body to mind, and suffer torture day and night." I discovered that I had traveled through time, not to a barren land, but to a suspected "Qiongyao Theater of Deep Sadomasochism". I could almost see Erkang pointing his big nostrils at me again.
Little lady, are you sure you're not writing the kind of poem that has an "ah" every few dozen seconds? = =
I am even more convinced that this is a magical story. The beginning is very plain, the middle is very fantasy, the waist is very bloody (horror), and the ending is very literary. Such an integrated story. To be honest, I didn't understand it a little bit - -, we are also old people, it would be better if the central ending can be summarized for everyone. I feel comfortable watching it, but with such a large jump, I feel it is a bit overwhelming. Also, my first feeling after reading it was "Is this the end?" Although it's not unfinished, why did I feel like it was an exercise in which I racked my brains to satisfy my desire to write? - -
All in all, I am "relatively speechless and can only cry a thousand lines" and open the Diamond Sutra to continue cultivating my state of mind. Little lady, you still have a long way to go.
Is this your first time writing about abuse? The handling of the characters' emotions is a bit stiff. The transition from disgust to possessiveness was very sudden, and I was surprised that the heroine would fall in love with the hero. Why did the heroine fall in love without the company of a long-lasting love? Although it is a short story, the plot is very rich and full, so I pay more attention to the emotional transition of the characters and the arrangement of the plot. Support the author, come on.
Relatively speechless, only a thousand lines of tears... So sad TAT
Qing'er~ I love and hate her at the same time.
So this is called self-inflicted. .
Um, that's a bad word. . Change it. .
Okay, one sentence to sum it up.
This is an article about Qingjun's transition from hateful to pitiable. .
Sister Chi, thank you for your hard work~~~ Study hard. .
Well. . I've been watching it before, but you haven't updated it~ I thought you were still busy, so I was so busy that I forgot. .
It didn't come up from behind. . This one comes up. . This article is finished. . Sigh. .
However, I feel that it was foreseeable ~ that abuse. .
Sister Chi, I didn't even know you were more literate. . I thought you were still busy. . You didn't even say anything to me. .
Well, although I have been busy~ but it was last minute on April Fool's Day. .
It seems that I haven't been here for a long time. When I came, I found that there was a new article, and then I found that the new article was finished. Finally, I found that it turned out to be so miserable, you are really suitable for writing short stories, haha! I went to take the exam some time ago, and I just finished the hard work. I really can't afford to hurt people who have to take the exam in a while... How is my crazy mother doing lately?
I finished reading it with extremely complicated emotions... What the hell kind of ending is this? ! Begging for a side story
Chapter 6 makes my heart hurt so much, eh
It's locked. ←_← It's almost reaching the highest point of abuse. How can it be locked? !
I am also considered a good sex friend of the little lady. As a sex friend, I must read this short article that was published a little earlier. Someone left a message again, and my eyes widened. Could it be that this is a piece of abuse written by a scumbag? This kind of revenge on society and revenge on love makes people fall into denying themselves, denying love, and denying the universe. The article is really deep in my heart. And it's not long, so I naturally decided to read it. To be honest, the beginning is very boring. Some demanding readers once said that if the first three paragraphs are boring, they will not read it even if the rest of it is interesting. A beginning like this will basically destroy the whole series. But I don't know how. Look, how can there be an article that starts with a rich girl appearing and being graceful, but then it doesn't look right as you read on? After a moment, the heroine seemed to turn to the servant of the rich lady who was the heroine. How miserable this is. I seem to foresee that one of them will become cannon fodder. Cannon fodder is a role with a long way to go. Without him or her, who will be able to support the protagonist? (You can fill in this blank with single words, phrases, or sentences. It depends on the situation.) When I was beating drums in my heart, I was just thinking about whether a noble and cool man was coming, and sure enough, he was not only arrogant but also entangled. As soon as this kind of man appeared, everyone knew it well, and this guy must be the instigator and must not have escaped. What amazed me was that it turned out that this guy already knew the art of psychological manipulation and actually knew how to use other people to kill people. If this kind of mentality continues to develop, it would be nothing. It would be nothing if he could dominate the world for generations and make people cry and retreat. Such an opponent is easier for people to accept than Erkang who just points his nostrils towards the tearful Erkang. After all, a man who does not change his face after hearing "I love you so much that my heart aches" is so lethal that I had to purify my state of mind by the Diamond Sutra for three days in a row. Everyone is familiar with the subsequent plot. A powerful ex-girlfriend appears, and the male protagonist breaks out while wandering. The golden gun is invulnerable and will last forever. "What kind of tearing of deep love and hatred occurs at the same time!" When I copied this exclamation sentence, my hands were obviously shaking. This was not enough. I followed it with the sentence "He He wants her to be mutilated with him, from body to mind, and suffer torture day and night." I discovered that I had traveled through time, not to a barren land, but to a suspected "Qiongyao Theater of Deep Sadomasochism". I could almost see Erkang pointing his big nostrils at me again. Little lady, are you sure you're not writing the kind of poem that has an "ah" every few dozen seconds? = = I am even more convinced that this is a magical story. The beginning is very plain, the middle is very fantasy, the waist is very bloody (horror), and the ending is very literary. Such an integrated story. To be honest, I didn't understand it a little bit - -, we are also old people, it would be better if the central ending can be summarized for everyone. I feel comfortable watching it, but with such a large jump, I feel it is a bit overwhelming. Also, my first feeling after reading it was "Is this the end?" Although it's not unfinished, why did I feel like it was an exercise in which I racked my brains to satisfy my desire to write? - - All in all, I am "relatively speechless and can only cry a thousand lines" and open the Diamond Sutra to continue cultivating my state of mind. Little lady, you still have a long way to go.
Is this your first time writing about abuse? The handling of the characters' emotions is a bit stiff. The transition from disgust to possessiveness was very sudden, and I was surprised that the heroine would fall in love with the hero. Why did the heroine fall in love without the company of a long-lasting love? Although it is a short story, the plot is very rich and full, so I pay more attention to the emotional transition of the characters and the arrangement of the plot. Support the author, come on.
Relatively speechless, only a thousand lines of tears... So sad TAT
Qing'er~ I love and hate her at the same time. So this is called self-inflicted. . Um, that's a bad word. . Change it. . Okay, one sentence to sum it up. This is an article about Qingjun's transition from hateful to pitiable. . Sister Chi, thank you for your hard work~~~ Study hard. .
Well. . I've been watching it before, but you haven't updated it~ I thought you were still busy, so I was so busy that I forgot. . It didn't come up from behind. . This one comes up. . This article is finished. . Sigh. . However, I feel that it was foreseeable ~ that abuse. .
Sister Chi, I didn't even know you were more literate. . I thought you were still busy. . You didn't even say anything to me. . Well, although I have been busy~ but it was last minute on April Fool's Day. .
It seems that I haven't been here for a long time. When I came, I found that there was a new article, and then I found that the new article was finished. Finally, I found that it turned out to be so miserable, you are really suitable for writing short stories, haha! I went to take the exam some time ago, and I just finished the hard work. I really can't afford to hurt people who have to take the exam in a while... How is my crazy mother doing lately?