Journey to the West: Sending You to the Western Paradise

I thought the love line was between the heroine and Zhu Bajie

To be honest, I didn't see any emotional drama at all. It's a shame that I waited so long, but I started falling in love so hastily. .

It's very well written, I hope she will continue her work!

It feels a bit of a pity, really. Writing text is a very lonely thing. Only if you can withstand loneliness can you have a future. I won't say more. Writers, please don't fool me anymore... Although you feel like you have released the ending, it may be your outline, but it is not as good as the story.

... I think there is no need to write a new article... Filling in the holes makes people feel happy...

Personally, I think this article has potential. The title of this article is great, the characters are good, and the pace is good. However, each story is not very attractive. The most important thing is the author's mentality. Great masters all started from small transparent bodies. Apart from feeling that you are giving in vain, is there nothing gained? If you won't be happy writing your own article, then why bother starting a new one?

I have only read this last chapter, but I think it would be very good if the author continued writing like this.

Madam, there is no need to rush for quick success. Your literary talent of Chapter 20 is still at the stage when many people want to fatten it up, so you can't expect it to become popular all at once. At least I will write an extra 100,000 words and finish it, so that everyone will find it good-looking, and more people will follow me... The previous writing is very good, and such a way to finish it, doesn't it hurt people's hearts?

This…what is it…

Do I want to say this is over?