[Reborn!] At Least I Still Have You

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She thought of the girl she strangled to death during tea time Refreshments should be changed to refreshments

Counting twenty lines of "flowers" of Kurokawa flowers turned into paintings

I'm looking forward to the text next time. . .

The mysterious Yuqinjiang... Answer?

I regret not giving you a score now. . . I'll make it up to you later I'm not in the habit of writing long reviews, so I just swallowed them all~ Tell me about your impressions of several characters~\\(≧▽≦)/~La La La I am a Erque fan, so it is undeniable that the Quege here is quite powerful. However, Brother Que, who is not collapsed, cannot be romantic at all, that is, he is just a ferocious beast! So I completely understand you. The character of the heroine after amnesia is inexplicably familiar, pink and naturally stupid [the cut is black Yuqinjiang~laughs] and so on At first I thought the heroine and Green Ming were listed together. I can only say that you set the stage very well and hid the plot very well~ I guessed it wrong. . . But I don't really love these two original characters. But compared to many original characters in fan fiction, it is already a very successful character. It feels like the background layout is quite large, but you didn't write the ending. . But this is fine I also suggest that you try not to write articles with a broad background in the future [unless you are ready to write a long article] People like stories that use small things to make things big. When reading fan fiction, I never miss the author's gorgeous settings. It's good to be able to justify one's story, but most of the authors I've seen can't do it, causing the original characters in the story to be incompatible with the original work. [Of course, Green Tea, the list of ability limits is very clever, which offsets this point] Although fellow tutors are tired of watching the Black Obsidian Incident, the Battle for the Ring, and Choice~ Actually, it's okay not to follow the plot... Write about daily life or something. It's okay to write big scenes if you want! Vongola must have experienced not only the above crises in the past 10 years, but also a few original ones Today's online novels include some that are exciting, some that are obscene, and a few that are touching. I appreciate your article, because the characters you write have will and passion, which at least makes me moved when I read them. As for the story and background, to me, they are somewhat unsatisfactory. However, the highlights of the characterization completely cover up the original flaws. This is the first time I've read a story about Brother Que that ignores Brother Que and only focuses on the heroine [Er Que is still too gentle and can't stand Bird] In short, I hope you can write lots and lots of love and lots and lots of stories. Because your story touches me. I believe it will also touch many people.

I just want to know why there are no comments Very well written Very touched Brother Que slightly collapses But the time traveler setting is very good.

You wrote so well about Hair! ! It makes me want to post something (face covering)

You wrote so well about Hair! ! It makes me want to post something (face covering)

It's a pretty good article~ but the number of words is a bit short.. The author is Sang Gamba.