Battles of Yesteryear: Jinjiling

Oh my God, this book was searched by Amway in 2006. I was in kindergarten in 2006. I still have food from so long ago. When I see it now, I feel so lucky [crying]

Ji Shukun didn't blame the enemy's invasion, but blamed the strength of his teammates. He thought Nezha had no temper. It was not God who wanted the enemy to invade them. He was ungrateful.

I have loved the novel Fengshenbang since a long time ago I have always thought that Yang Jian and Nezha match well. I didn't expect to see this article here. I really like it.

I just saw this good article now, but it's not too late haha

——The man in plain clothes and soft armor stood at the door leaning on a gun. His dark hair was slightly scattered by the dusk wind. His eyes were not as shining as usual, but they were still as clear as water. Standing in plain clothes and soft armor, leaning on a gun, even though he was seriously injured, he felt a heroic spirit rushing towards his face. And those simple words contained some hidden meanings, so this young man with a sharp character and the most sincere and pure jumped into our eyes.

The literary evaluation of the original work of Fengshen is not very high, but we have to admit that it created a group of fascinating characters and used them to fulfill the fantasies of countless children for many years - for example, I... Tian Jieyue-sama's writing style is sophisticated, the plot is loyal to the original work, and the addition of details seems to be seamless. Nangong Shi sent an order to Brother Yang to "quickly borrow the escape method to return to the camp", and hinted to Xiao Yin to go out with Jiang Ziya to talk. Such details made the background of the original work and the emotions of the characters suddenly become more delicate and real. The somewhat rigid and rough narrative of the original work also became vivid and vivid in this article. Skill comes into play in the details, so I'll add this first comment first. . .

I really like this writing style and have been coveting this CP for a long time. I'm so lucky to be able to see it now! Adults, please continue to write other units, and you will definitely support it to the end!

Please keep writing the original poster. In fact, like the original poster, I have liked these two since watching the 1990 TV series Fengshenbang. I also secretly wrote it before, but I can't find the manuscript. If the original poster doesn't want to continue writing it, I will write it! (Hehe, sneering...) I also had the tendency to write about these two in my novel, but since I am not the protagonist, I really couldn't make room for it, so I just killed it... I thought the poster could be more explicit, I mean more direct in his emotional expression. In fact, I think there is room for them to show off wherever the two of them appear in the original novel (it seems that I really have a talent for doujinshi). For example, at the beginning, Yang Jian turned into a flower fox and marten, which made Nezha so happy that they went to grab the Seven Arrows Book and defend the city together. If Nezha came on the battlefield, Yang Jian would usually be the second one to rush up. I think Yang Jian's eyes were very focused on Nezha during the Yin Yang Mirror, and Nezha has always had more confidence in Yang Jian than Master Jiang. When collecting the seven monsters... Oh my god, please forgive my ubiquitous YY My talent as a fan is limited to this couple, and today I was lucky enough to find a fan.

After reading the modified version, now let's look at the original version

Tianhua entrusted Tianxiang to Nezha. I wonder how Nezha felt when Tianxiang died later~~Sigh