
[Shuten Doji] Drunk for Eternity
[酒吞童子]醉千古
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
57Favorites
8.0Score
4.4kClicks per chapter
8Comments
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It's so enjoyable to watch. Come on.
Kaiwen said, it's not midnight, it's dawn, and then he said it's midnight... Silently [She tossed and turned uneasily for a long time. The more she thought about it, the more unsettled she felt. Finally, she got up and touched the child's forehead out of nowhere. Then she fainted on the spot - it was as hot as a dead person! The strange thing is that the child is still lively and active as usual the next day]... In other words, if you touch your child in the middle of the night and the child has no temperature, if you don't get up quickly and take him to the "hospital" or something, how can you wait until dawn? Silent... Breeze on Two Sleeves: Nowadays, most people are likened to people who are honest in officialdom, do not take bribes, bend the law and are strict with themselves; Well, apart from these shortcomings, the girl's writing made Mr. Fungi very comfortable and gentle. The descriptions are very detailed and the layout is also very good. It is a pleasure to read. It's just that the paragraph about Runping losing everything didn't make me feel very sad or shocked. It was still very gentle. I wonder if the girl deliberately wanted to write it like this, or?
Khan, this is another fan, and it's from Japan. I'm really not familiar with this aspect, but I accepted GN's article~ I read this article as an original work. The writing style is very delicate and has a very gentle feel, as if a breeze is blowing on my face, with a touch of sentimentality, which is very beautiful. The only thing is, if the author hadn't said it was about Shuten Douji, I wouldn't have known he was the protagonist. Because a long paragraph of description was used to describe his mother. In my opinion, although that paragraph is very beautiful and good, it is not very useful in expressing the theme. Just personal advice. Ah, the author also said that this is a side story, maybe it is different from a stand-alone short story.
Read "[Shutun Boy] Drunk for Eternity" Since I haven't read the author's "The Girl with the Knife", I read it completely as a stand-alone novel. I'm not very familiar with ghosts, so I searched Baidu for a while, but I still can't connect with the article... Please forgive me for my stupidity and ignorance. I just want to express my feelings about reading the article to the author. When I first read the article, I read the copy first and noticed that the author said that this article was written with great care and exhaustion. I immediately had a special feeling for this article. I feel that the author has put his own feelings heavily on this short article. I really like this thick feeling. The first half of the article is very delicate, clear and light, exuding elegant sadness. A Japanese-style garden suddenly appeared in my eyes. Delicate and delicate, it is contained but not revealed. As you read the text, it's like adding water hitting the bluestone, crisp and melodious. The artistic conception created by the words is very beautiful. Runping at the beginning gave people a sense of surprise and mystery because of his silver eyes. Luobo even felt a little panicked because he didn't know what Runping would do to Qinghe. As the article continues, Runping is like the name, as smooth as jade and as flat as the wind. He is a eccentric young man. When he met Lan Ji and expressed his feelings, his arrogance towards Mo Li seemed to have changed from Run Ping to the King of Ghosts, but he was stern but not ruthless, and majestic but not dangerous, because although he was the King of Ghosts, he was still Run Ping. Reading further, it seems a little too tight, like a chronological narrative, and suddenly it loses the feeling it had before. Some feelings of loss when the climax has not yet arrived and suddenly slipped. It always feels like the author ended it in a hurry in order for Runping to transform into the Ghost King as soon as possible, or as the copywriter said, it took too long to write and was too tired to support Runping? Although it is a short story, it is full of emotions. Qinghe's love for Qiu Lan is like the dependence of an ordinary woman on her husband, but it is also mixed with the sadness of not being loved alone after being captured by sweet words. Guang Jiyuan's dignity and jealousy as the head wife, her self-deprecation and reminders when she is always accompanied by Qingdeng, are indeed aristocratic. Master Qiulan, although he loved Qinghe, he could not dote on him alone. He married Lanji but ignored him. A house where everyone exhausted all their emotions is vividly visible. Finally, let's talk about something I don't understand. The encyclopedia says that Shuten Doji is a virgin killer and a fierce ghost. So when Runpei was the ghost king, was he the one who killed Mori brutally? Is the attraction to Lan Ji also because Lan Ji is still a virgin, so the special smell of Shuten Doji that she exudes invisibly attracts Lan Ji to like him? I hope Kuang Lai can explain it to the ignorant carrot...
I really like the light feeling at the beginning, so I wrote a post-reading review, in Luobo's building, I wonder if I should post it here? I have a few questions that I would like to ask Kuang Lai to answer for me~
The first half is very gorgeous, and the second half is more elegant. Although it is a story about Shuten Douji, Dell Man, you clearly wrote it as a ghost with a human heart, which is very lovely! The details are so beautiful! It's really not like a side story, it's just a stand-alone short story!
So beautiful! The first half is orderly and the plot in the second half is tense. It's really hard work to do the details well...
Good article [face covering], Japanese monsters are my hobby... Indicates that this is the fourth floor [holding face] Come on, author, I am a good boy who is not a bully...