Little Interstellar Innkeeper

Score at the end. In fact, I quite like this book, but every time I see the part where I know the news about my parents and then watch their videos, I feel sad and cry. To be honest, my parents are really great and must be good people. After meeting their son, they also want to make up for it, but I just can't like it! ! Especially when the protagonist cannot blend in between his father and younger brother, it is particularly sad. So, I really want to see the two of them being tortured. . But forget it, after all they have made such great contributions to mankind. The author's ending is indeed a bit hasty, but at least the two protagonists have confirmed their relationship. However, when I wrote this final episode, I felt like I was back to the situation before the relationship was confirmed.

Dad is better, but I really don't like that Garcia. I always feel that his brain circuits are very weirdly miswired, and he can't think of things he should have thought of. For example, he knew that his grandfather was in poor health and knew that he was going to the insect zone, but he left without leaving anything. Didn't he never think that he would be trapped on the battlefield and not be able to come back? The author described him as so wise and powerful, he is the pinnacle of human beings, and he should have the brains to prepare for the worst. Yes, why did he leave so coolly? If he had expressed a little care for his son, such as leaving a special video for his son, or asking grandpa to hand over an N-year-old gift to his son, I wouldn't hate him so much. There are also things that should be ignored, such as not seeing his son after escaping from danger, but leading a large force to act with Luo. Although he was going to save people, I couldn't think of anything right. First of all, I just met him. His descendant (Luo), on one side is his son whom he has not seen for more than ten years. He only knows that he is alive but does not know how he is living. He ran to save others. What should he do with his son? Fortunately, Garcia saved his own son. If they were two different people, his son would have been abandoned by his father. Garcia is so sure that his son is living a very stable and happy life. Doesn't he need to rush to his son's side as soon as possible? Retreat First of all, if people must be saved, do you need to go out in full force, Mr. Garcia? As the pinnacle driver of the Zijin Shuttle, you send a team of 180 mechas to follow Luo to save people. You can just take your wife home to visit relatives. According to the plot, if you mention the idea of going back to visit relatives, Luo will naturally reveal that the person being rescued is your son. In this way, you can save people and see your son, and it also shows that you are not a scumbag father. Garcia, Garcia, what kind of brain do you have? Shouldn't you be responsible for these words and deeds? Is our lovely Guxi so wronged? (I am so irritable now that I have the urge to smash the table when I see Garcia on the stage. Is it possible?)

Not bad, but there are a lot of typos in the first few articles.

My younger brother never showed up even once to show off.

I like this article very much. Even though it was mediocre when I read it in one sitting, it was very comfortable to read. I don't think the author should worry about the lack of excellent writing. After all, although writing is also very important, the plot, setting and concept of the story are really the core of a good article, and the latter are basically already present in this article! : ) What attracts me most about this article is the atmosphere and images created by the entire story setting, such as the bits and pieces of Gu Xi and his grandfather getting along on the garbage planet at the beginning, or the process of Gu Xi finding the Paradise No., Etc. Even though the author's writing is in a period of stiffness and stiffness, it is easy to immerse yourself in these sci-fi but dreamlike atmospheres. The feeling of sailing through the stars is really, really great. It's attractive. In short, the feeling and picture formed in my mind after reading the whole article are very beautiful. I have read so many interstellar background articles so far, and my favorite is the feeling created by this article: lonely but beautiful, uneasy but expectant; and I have to say that the creation of this atmosphere is also attributed to the author's close integration of the protagonist Gu Xi with the entire story. I think this is one of the most charming aspects of this article. However, this story does have many shortcomings. For example, although I like Luo, his emotional change when he met Gu Xi made people a little unprepared. And although the description of the relationship between the two was okay, I always felt that their emotional running-in was still a bit insufficient (mainly probably because they were too pretentious at the beginning). In short, I think the author's handling of love in this article is a bit weak. On the other hand, after going to school from Gu Xi in the second half, the overall feeling is a bit confusing, because some branches have obviously appeared and expanded the narrow world view that was originally only within Gu Xi's personal scope, but most of these were not explained clearly in the end and continued to develop. In fact, if it had not been opened at the beginning Grandpa Shi emphasized that he had to go to school. In my opinion, this section was a bit cumbersome. Basically, except for warming up the relationship between the two, the other additional functions did not play its intended significance later on. What's more, the relationship between the two is not particularly highlighted here (I think). From then on until the end, maybe the author was too hasty, and the whole thing was really rushed. Even though I can understand the current ending, the obviously important part between Guxi and his family was handled too hastily (that is the key point!!!). In short, it was very depressing. QAQ I was really tortured when I received a letter from my father in Guxi and found out that he had a younger brother. QAQ Afterwards, I found out that the author really didn't handle this well, which made me even more resentful. QAQ Finally, I want to make a complaint. The title of this article is clearly Interstellar Little Librarian, but after looking at the whole article, I still feel that this title is too misleading. No matter how you look at it, Interstellar Little Captain (?!) Is more appropriate! After all, although the library is used throughout the entire article, the description is too detailed, and this part has not been explained at all > <! (I'm not going to tell you that at first I thought this was a story about a protagonist traveling around the stars with a library, so I watched it OTZ) Anyway, after saying so much, it seems a bit unclear. I hope the author doesn't mind, but I want to emphasize that I really like this article >////<. After reading it last night, I dreamed about the scene in this article when I went to bed. If I could draw, I would really like to draw it for you. Then, writing may not become a career, but I think as long as adults are still passionate about writing, if they have enough time and have some inspiration, I hope they can continue writing. It is not a problem to write more about writing. I believe that the next article will be more improved ^ ^

Ah, I sigh, I actually want to see the extra story about the inner confession of the demon [Someone who is not comfortable with being abused sighed...

After digging out the extra chapter, the last few chapters are also very awkward and I feel like I can't connect!

To be honest, the setting and the feeling of this article are very good. Although the content is delayed in some places, the writing is very smooth. However, the ending feels too rushed. The future life of the two people is not involved. It is a pity for the reader! ! ! I hope the author can write more, looking forward to it.

... Actually, now that I'm looking through the previous posts, I feel that your writing style is much better_(:з∠)_ If I write according to my current style of writing, I think it will probably be on the list? It's a pity that you don't plan to write it. I'm so sad.

This episode is obviously not over yet! What about the one below? ? ? >__<