A Curtain of Dreams: Fallen Blossoms Become a Grave

The overall concept is good, but the details are too vague and many are not explained clearly. The span is too fast.

It was written in such a hurry, and what should be explained was not fully explained, such as Fei Yunfan, Grandpa Luping, the matter between Luping and Daoming Temple, and who Xiaogan was. It was over without explaining clearly?? Speechless

Lu Ping's family members don't know her beauty. I'm really curious~especially what Chu Lian will do when she finds out~ Extra story... I wrote it too fast, so I didn't abuse it!!!

I should torture such parents severely!!!!

I just want to say it's a great idea Very tasteless article

Big update!!!!

Please update more, I really want to see it

Don't be careless and torture Makino Shancai to death~!

Great~~ say supportive

Only the dialogue and psychological feeling are a bit pale Please add some other descriptions For example, scenes, actions, expressions, etc.