My Fair Princess: Princess Xin Huan

What the hell is this? He actually became the new No. 1 Player. I really can't figure it out. How can I put it... Well, it's hard to understand how the Qing Dynasty had cameras? Author, how can your writing style be so childish? Why is the article so devoid of content? Why did people in the Qing Dynasty call their mothers mom? I almost cried when I saw it, it was so messy in the wind. Are you going to take the high school entrance exam? Why do I think you are about to take the elementary school entrance examination? So I can't figure it out. I'm just a reader, but this article has become the new number one. What's going on?!

The Eight Banners call themselves slaves to those in the royal family

First of all, this is my first time writing a long review. "Returning the Pearl: Princess Xinhuan" is something I have been following since the first article. It can be said that it is the first time I have followed an article completely, and I have been following it from the beginning to the end. Although this ending is very hasty, I did watch it all the way through. Like a child who first learned to walk, to a teenager who is now gradually able to run. I was attracted to him for the first time just because I saw it on the update list. I was fascinated by Huanzhu fanfiction during this period, so I clicked in. In the beginning, to be honest, it was really terrible. If it weren't for the author's passion for writing articles three times a day, I wouldn't have been able to read it. There are many messy symbols, no punctuation or wrong punctuation. , The number of words in one chapter is very few, and there are frequent meaningless exclamations. Coupled with the confusing character relationships, it was really confusing and confusing at that time! At that time, I was very venomous and bitter in my heart and criticized this article as useless, so when I wrote the review, I used words without mercy. However, adhering to the principle that it is not easy to attack the writer's enthusiasm, the first comment is to explain to the author the origin of the sentence "The harem must not interfere with politics" and some things that need to be paid attention to when writing Qing Dynasty articles. At that time, I didn't hold out any hope of having the Midas touch to make him completely better. But Xiaonian read my comment very carefully and replied seriously. In the subsequent articles, the changes can also be seen. At this time, this article was officially published. I feel that although this question is not a good one, the author is pretty good. He has a serious attitude, is willing to learn, and is able to apply what he has learned instead of going in one ear and out the other. Then, start following this article. From Chapters 4 and 5, there were still many people catching bugs and bugs, criticizing the connotation, logic, etc. Of the article. Later, such comments gradually became less and less, and when they praised the progress instead, I felt as happy as the author. It feels like my family has a child who is just starting to grow up. Because I followed the article, gave opinions, and watched the author's progress all the way, I saw that the article began to be fuller than before, that there were fewer typos, and there were fewer unreasonable places. The logic began to improve a little, and there were fewer things that shouldn't be there. The article was no longer so boring. Because he is progressing, growing, and absorbing beneficial nutrients. This is worthy of recognition. I don't know why Xiaonian ended this article in such a hurry. The ending is very sudden, hasty, and confusing. There are many hidden clues that are not explained clearly. For example, in this article, Qianlong, which makes people feel very much like a father-daughter story, appears more than the male protagonist in the first ten chapters, but then disappears so abruptly. Duolong, who was originally invisible and rarely appeared, suddenly became the heroine's favorite and even got married. For example, what happened to the new moon later, etc., Nothing was said... And, it always feels weird, why? Because the author always writes [what should be explained in the article] to [the author has something to say], and then, if you don't read [the author has something to say], readers will not understand it at all... For example, in the chapter where the new moon appears, the character of the new moon should be in the article Explain - explain through Xinyue's words, actions, and actions. However, after Xiaonian explained Xinyue's character in "The Author Has Something to Say", he basically did not show it in the article... Therefore, it should be criticized here. The reason why I say it is about a boy who can run, rather than a young man who can already run (I learned how to run, but I have not yet reached the stage where I can run myself.) Is because the author's writing style is still relatively immature. Although judging from the text, there has been progress, but it is only growing and has not yet matured. Because no matter from which aspect, Xiaonian is still very young! Study hard! There is another big taboo: Nowadays, Xiaonian still has the feeling of students writing essays - just write this essay on any topic given by the teacher. Why do you say this? Because you are writing a narrative - according to your copy, write a story for each content. There is no good connection between several stories. It is necessary to write about returning pearls, writing about plum blossoms, and writing about new moon patterns. Then Nai wrote these three stories separately! If it weren't for the fact that Xin Huan and Qianlong are characters in all three stories, then it would be okay to read them separately and say they have nothing to do with each other. But you can try it yourself - remove Qianlong and Xinhuan in your mind, and then read this article. Are they three unrelated stories??? So, Xiaonian, please pay attention - be integrated! Nai should remember: This is an article written by Nai, so you need to write these three stories so that people know that they are the same article, and they are three short stories in this article. Rather than being separated from Xinhuan, there are three unrelated stories, do you understand? We want them to feel integrated... Finally, I wish you can write better and better as you write, and don't let me down! (I've written so much, should I have enough words for a long review? Forget it, forget it if you don't, that's it!)

Such a sudden ending~~I am messy in the wind~~~~~~~~~~~··

Mother? Dad? Wife? Husband? It turns out that I have returned to modern times. It is a return without any warning... The ancient times are not over yet, and the modern era has no beginning... It is really... A mess...

The more I watch, the more I feel that there is an ambiguity between Qianlong and Xin Huan. They are definitely father and daughter... Father and daughter are more like each other, really. Duolong Xinhuan doesn't feel like a lover at all, and can't play with ambiguity and heartbeat. On the contrary, the Qianlong and Xinhuan you wrote are infinitely close to lovers... By the way, this article of yours feels more interesting when it's about father and daughter, but when it comes to normal romance, you can't see JQ...

[I ignored her and continued walking forward. I looked up at the sky and tried not to let the tears fall. Emperor Yongzheng, didn't you say that tears wouldn't flow down here? You lied...] Is Xinhuan so fragile? The fight hasn't started yet, and there's no stratagem, so why are you crying when you say it??

If it's not Baylor, why did he become Beizi again? [It's... Haojibeile from Prince Shuo's... Family...]——[Haojibeizi had a quarrel with the shopkeeper, and the fifth elder brother also came and said that he wanted to... Help Haojibeizi...]

By the way, is this article intended to be a long one? Why are the first 10 chapters about the male pig and the god horse all in vain PS: Duolong Weimao likes Xinhuan and Xinhuan Weimao likes Duolong??? There is no logic at all~~ps again: Xinyue is the villain???

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