Shattered Jade

If only we could return to those days, to that time, when the world was full of romance and we were young. If only we could look back on those years, remember what came before. Flowers bloom and fall in the blink of an eye. I've revised the whole story. Ah... I really think the writing is awful. So many parts contradict each other and don't flow well. I guess my skills just aren't good enough yet QAQ. I'd sincerely love feedback and suggestions! Criticism is welcome, as long as it isn't random hate (like weird comments such as "change the pairing" = =). Sob, I really hope everyone will offer their opinions and suggestions. I truly want to improve QAQ And thank you so much to everyone who came to read the story, and especially to everyone who likes Qingxiao (bows). A novice writer with no talent for blurbs, this is the shoddy work of Y, a Qingxiao-focused fanfic for Chinese Paladin 4 (though you can also treat it as a sequel). I'm firmly flying the Qingxiao flag and won't budge (laughs). Click here to download the TXT files for "Shattering the Jade" and "[Shattering the Jade Extra] Together with You." Please go easy on my shabby writing QAQ Click here for "[Shattering the Jade Extra] Together with You." Please go easy on my shabby writing QAQ You may repost anything I've written, but please contact me first and tell me where you're reposting it QAQ I don't check JJ very often. If you can't reach me, message me on Weibo or add my QQ at 498934357 (and say why). <- Who would repost your writing, idiot? Lastly, I have to clarify that the title "Shattering the Jade" means breaking a piece of fine jade so it can't be put back together. It does not mean losing one's virginity, you idiots QuQ!!!! You can also interpret it as "a piece of jade that has been shattered" 0 0 Theme: