Rebirth in the Apocalypse

I looked at the update time and it's really shameless. After reading the content again, it becomes more and more ridiculous.

Don't let Xiao Yiming be the male lead! !

The more I watch, the more annoying I get. The heroine is too virginal, and she doesn't even use the thunder element. She only lets people save her. Alas, I really shouldn't look forward to the next one. I shouldn't watch it.

Why do I feel that the female protagonist and the current male protagonist must be separated in the future? I always feel that the author has hinted many times before that the two of them will not be able to be together in the future. If you must change the male protagonist, you must write the new male protagonist in advance, otherwise the article will be incomplete, because changing the male protagonist temporarily is a taboo in writing.

By the way, the two people fell in love a bit suddenly... It feels a bit far-fetched But I still like it very much. I hope the author… Will write more articles! ! ! ! ! ! !

So pretty! ! ! , Come on! ! !

The more I write, the better... In fact, when I bought the article, I was just thinking that the author seems to have written with enough care, but his skills are not up to par. After purchasing the article, I discovered that it was wrong. It's obvious that the author's skills are passable, but he just doesn't care! ! ! Asshole! Give me more articles!

... It's obviously a trap for your sister. . . . . But the more I looked at it, the more I felt at a certain point (I just remembered now that point X would also be mentioned...) That there was no way to save it. . . .

In fact, the author's writing is much better than many of the things on the list... But there are still many shortcomings. Because of love, I hate that iron cannot become steel. If what I wrote is a bit extreme, please read it. For example, strength and weakness, this is understandable. The zombies that mutated in the early stage have weak abilities. If they become stronger and stronger, it is understandable for the author to write this. But if it is realistic, we can find that zombies have no energy supply and rely on consuming themselves to obtain energy. Therefore, the setting of crystals that become stronger and mutate is actually very stupid... But many articles write like this, and there is no way to be misled. And this article is not in the sci-fi style. . So it doesn't matter if the writing is off. It's fantasy... Maybe the crystal can provide energy supply and can be upgraded independently? There are many characters. Having too many characters is not a problem, but as an author, you have to figure out who to write more about... Sometimes the heroine's appearance rate is not as good as that of the daughter-in-law and the supporting role. The daughter-in-law turns out to be an uneducated bitch... The protagonist actually stays with such a tragic team for so long! Although the protagonist's friends are sisters, they don't have many lines! Not many lines! ! ! ... Many details are tragic. First of all, the aliens at the beginning talk about old friends and this life. . . He also vaguely wrote about the world of cultivation. Can you please just write a cultivation article... It doesn't matter if you don't write, readers don't care about it either. . . . Then when you get the news, can you please stop being so understated? Yes, the heroine thought she could get away with it. Lucky your sister, how can you still be a heroine with such an IQ? … It's useless to complain. As the protagonist, even if you don't do anything else at this time, can your parents make arrangements? Is buying more rice and noodles enough? Is that enough? ! Cheating! It's not like a flood is coming. . . . . Taobao is really awesome. . . Since it's so awesome, would you please write a few more words about why knives are so awesome? This is very important. Without the rationality of this article, it would be a tragedy! It's over! Don't ignore it after the golden finger is opened, okay... Since it is a living creature space system, please describe more about the internal changes in the space... You can just make up the words! It's okay to make up the words! ! ! ! ! Crystals... Since you wrote it, please ask the protagonist and his party, when they know that it can be used as money, first think of "why, what is the role of crystals" instead of "how to spend crystals"... There are many more that I won't write down one by one. . The article is reasonable, girl. . . . Ganba Dad, I hope the writing will get better and better, and the writing will become smoother. When are you free? Clear the relationship between the characters in the (temporary) male protagonist's team... Don't make the readers only know the names of everyone in the male protagonist's (temporary) team... We need to know why we bring the vase to the school belle, whether it is because of temporary pity or because of the relationship between the fathers, how the team members who have been together from the beginning need to be written together, and an understatement is enough. . . . .

Ah, I think this article is average. The heroine pretends to be noble. If she doesn't have superpowers, she can pull her up. Her friends are like this, and she is just like that. Looking at the way the protagonist behaves in the article, I can see that the author's level, character, and personality are just that. With such a little superpower, you don't take others seriously. Author you make me sick.