Autumn Feather in a World of Anime

The writing... Is very childish...

I actually hate Magnum, it's so unreal.

All I can say is, I was shocked. . .

I am Han, and here I am Maojiang... You know who I am, right? First of all, congratulations on the completion of Nai's article, but after reading the comments, there are many comments with opinions... Everyone has a childish period, and Han's first article was not very good - Black History... The most important thing is to pay attention to the characters...

Yeah, yeah, the Chinese Valentine's Day special article is well written, finally turning 27 around~

What's the status of Jie Su Shen Ma? Warming the volcano (?), You were evaporated by the volcano, right? ! Damn it

There are only a few pure-blooded noble bodies left in the world!!! Are they just gone? !! Even if the bloodline is sealed, a vampire won't have multiple souls, right? ! A purebred body... Oooooooo~

Finally, I killed that thing (Aoi Jibura), nya~ But this way of death was too easy for her, so it's hard to understand the hatred in my heart, nya~

Actually, I don't hate Mary Sue, np, or anything like that. But, Su - Don't go too far with Su. What matters is the way of expression and plot arrangement. Be reasonable and smooth. The writing style needs to be improved ~ I have a suggestion, it's not derogatory (*ˉˉ*)

I think the plot is arranged too quickly The writing is too straightforward