The Jade Appraiser

The Claw Machine Party is the overlord among overlords. The submarine among divers.~~! Ouye~! Ahem... Actually, the internet speed at home is very slow, and I can never get the text and refresh and try again. So in this era of unstable mobile phone signals, I finally finished reading the text on my mobile phone, and I am deeply relieved. So I finally thought of replying [The text cannot be loaded in time, but the reply is still ok (don't start~!!)] Well, I'm not one to write about my feelings after reading articles, so now I'm just talking nonsense. Above. The stone gambler is really good, thank you for your hard work.

Finished with flowers~~~! !

Really pretty! ! ! ! When I saw this beginning, I quickly ran to the pirated article website to find this chapter. Hehehe. I like my wife's articles and the crispy duck she wrote. Woohoo.

I feel proud after supporting the genuine version! Let me tell you, I really like you~?

It's too fierce... Is this considered toying with people??

Wow~~~~~I thought about it, huh!

Wow

Oh... I finally came to watch the extra story... I was a little shocked.

Comment on the pros and cons of "The Stone Gambler" I feel that most JJ authors are relatively fragile and immature and cannot withstand blows. If the author of this article is not very able to take blows, I think you should not read on. I feel that I am a fair and objective person, and I will try my best to write reviews in a fair and objective manner, rather than making malicious complaints or expressing overwhelming praise. I like the subject of "Stone Gambling" very much, because it is an unknown territory for me, and everything in this "world" makes me full of curiosity. First of all, I really like the setting of the protagonist's ability in "The Stone Gambler". He can feel the energy and vitality in the wool, rather than "see" it directly. In this case, you need to continue to learn, enrich your own knowledge, and continuously accumulate experience through stone analysis, so that you can achieve higher achievements with this talent. Because I like the author's writing style, I deplore the shortcomings of this article even more. In my opinion, 30W words is a relatively small capacity, so I prefer longer articles. I mentioned the word count specifically because I felt that this article had a lot of content that was worth expanding on but stopped writing. The progress is too fast, and there are many missing details and descriptions in my heart, which makes it impossible for me to devote myself to this article. I am a person who likes to describe scenes in my mind when reading articles. If the author's description is not detailed enough or the atmosphere is not enough, my scenes will have gray areas. I don't like the scenes to be blurry. An article should have at least one focus, the emotions of the two protagonists, the process of gambling on stones, or the growth of the protagonist. However, the interaction between Bai Zishi and Vincent always feels a bit lacking, probably because too much emphasis is placed on Vincent's feelings about Bai Zishi, while Bai Zishi's feelings about Vincent are too little. I have a lot of dissatisfaction with the process of gambling on stones. First of all, Bai Zishi's gambling on stones went too smoothly. Life without setbacks is incomplete. When Bai first went to the stone gambling market, he immediately encountered a good piece of wool. But when he opened it, it had a glass bottom and a blue jadeite. It was really too eye-catching. Step by step, if such a good stone is discovered from the beginning, what surprises will there be in the future? After that, it was time to drive to Xue Fei. Although there was a surprise written on it, I didn't feel any surprise. Is it the writing style? Neither. When I saw Stone Gambling with Sivis, I no longer wanted to watch it. I think Sivis is worthy of admiration in terms of his calmness and freedom in dealing with his relationship. But Sivis's defeat was so miserable that I have to use the word miserable to describe it. If the outcome is a draw, I will be a little happier; if Sivis wins, I will also be happy; if Bai won not be so lighthearted after winning, I will be a little more relieved. I think it is unreasonable for a young man who has never gambled at the age of 23 to have such a good psychological quality. If irrationality is acceptable in novels, then fine. But I don't know what is missing, but it always makes me feel that Bai Zishi is outside the "world". This makes me less immersive and gives me a vague and unclear feeling. The ups and downs of the article are important. If someone takes a fancy to a very good stone first and looks for it in vain but doesn't find a good one, wouldn't you feel a pity in your heart? Then slowly feel relieved. If Bai sees good materials and deliberately chooses a few more bad ones to cover up his edge, and then experiences some things and discovers that he cannot survive in this world if he is too tolerant, then will "this world" become more realistic? If the stone gambling thing can be less elaborate, then the focus can only be on the emotional development of the two. But there is too little description of the progress between the two, which is a pity. I would wonder if the author has never been in love... So I felt that there was no "love" atmosphere in the article. . .

Although it is not easy to write a big H, but if you have originally planned to write such a heavy flavor, please don't write intermittently. If you want to write, write more freely. The current situation is a bit anticlimactic, and it is not enjoyable to read.