
The Dragon: A Mismatch of Stars
天龙之参商错
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 228k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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76Chapters
205Favorites
8.8Score
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1.6kClicks per chapter
398Comments
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This is an article that I endured to read. I have a really bad habit of reading the article to see the ending. The dominant plot is probably less than 10% of the entire article. It is like writing a guide to completing tasks in an online game. I just copy the chat records while playing the game and make slight modifications to make up most of the article. And when I read it, I felt very impatient. The so-called misunderstandings and coincidences were too far-fetched. The move or having a roommate in the first half of the article was all accidental, but later on it became the trigger for everything. If the author just wanted to raise suspicions, I think it not only failed, but the idea of letting the male protagonists also fall into such a deliberate misunderstanding was even more failed. One is the president of a large company, but what I see is a person with little ability. He may have quite a lot of momentum, but he has always been led by the nose. From the beginning to the end, he has never done anything that would please people or be considered in front of others. The language expression also tends to be procrastinating and the words do not convey the meaning. It's a very simple explanation. I have to say, I don't understand what you said, I don't understand what you mean. Why the hell did you just say no? What Qiong Yao accent did you have to talk about for a long time before you got to the point? I find it intolerable to the author's deliberate expression to cause misunderstanding. This isn't too bad. The most embarrassing thing is this one. As a otaku, the author probably wanted to create a person with a gentle personality, but from the beginning to the end, I felt that he was just a virgin, pretending to be a hypocrite. The plot of the breakup was too fake. After a few months, they started chatting and hooking up again. It felt like the breakup was just for the sake of the plot. When facing a challenger, you have too much self-consciousness. Why should you catch up with him? Are you pretentious, and your feelings for someone are just superficial and you want to stand shoulder to shoulder? This feeling is correct, but at least you should have an understanding of your own weight. Everyone has development in their own field and lives the life they want to live. If you have to catch up, don't you bother me. In front of other people, she is like a holy mother. She doesn't care about anything and forgets everything. It's really frustrating to see her. I also really don't like the author who keeps shouting abuse. I don't think I am sincere. Those so-called misunderstandings are very weak and make people feel powerless. They are too deliberate. Once or twice, it is fine. Once the article touches on reality, it is all a deliberate plot. It is a failure to create suspense and so on. There are also authors who like to explain at length what they want to express by writing this way. In fact, I think it is completely unnecessary and redundant. This is just your own understanding when you write. You need to specifically explain that you can only say that you did not express what you wanted to express in the article, fearing that people will have unnecessary thoughts when reading it. However, the first reaction in the reader's mind when reading is the most real, and it will not change because of your explanations. I think the author, if you have the energy to put so much into the author's words, you might as well think about how to write it when you write the article. We are not taking a Chinese class and we need the so-called standard answers you gave us for reference. Finally, I would like to say that the Tianlong guide you wrote is good, but the others are boring.
6.28 Ah, the final exam is coming up, so I didn't come to see it -. - I came to see it today and it's actually finished. Speaking of which, I feel like I'm more diligent in waiting in the post bar... As expected, I still like reading slow-burning articles = =.
He expressed that he hated Wudang Xuanwo the most. . Wide tears. . . Shun, why did Abi marry a monk~~Abi should marry Xiaoyao~~The evil will float away~
There is a lot of land now. . I have planted 2 pieces of land with Loulan. . . But I didn't help Gong upgrade~ Resentment. . . .
Turtle daddy. . . . By the way, we went to farm dragon turtles, and an uncle was very happy when he got an adult dragon turtle and a dragon turtle egg. . Then, we called him Turtle Egg. . . .
I was looking for various Tianlong Danmei articles, and I came across the adult's article which had just been finished. I also write Tianlong Danmei articles, and I felt so kind when I saw the adult's article~ Sprinkle flowers O(∩_∩)O~
Isn't this just "the first one"? I thought there were "the second one", "the third one" and "the fourth one"...
To be honest, sir, I was in trouble when I was writing the topic, um... Entangled. Speaking of which, the process of jumping into the pit was very confusing. I have always liked martial arts, so I accidentally fell into the martial arts pit of the adults, and then started reading the adult's article before I could climb out. To be honest, when I read this article, I felt inexplicably warm in my heart. Well, to use an old saying, it was like it was happening around me. Hehe, I think I was half an online game fan back then. The key was that I always played online games as a stand-alone game, and most of the friends I met were acquaintances, so over time I lost interest in reading novels. After reading the adult's article, I suddenly found that the soul of online games in my body began to burn again, whir Then Manjusri and Qi BOSS, honestly I like their characters very much. Neither of them are procrastinators, which makes me feel very, very good, because I always feel that it is troublesome to drag them over and over. Well, actually, I am like this, so I know that this kind of personality is really annoying. Furthermore, the two people's personalities are really cute. Of course, I found that many of the supporting characters in it are also very cute, such as Bi Luo, Ya Yun and Yan Lu. In fact, Sir, you said that the following article is not abusive. I don't know if it's because I'm less abusive or something. The last two people are where Manjusri said they broke up. I feel like my heart is twisting. 5555555555 Sure enough, it's better for me to be more cruel? T T Generally speaking, people are still chasing each other, but I don't know why. Well, actually, I think Manjusri will be a very promising person in the future. Although the BOSS is more aggressive, I don't know why. I always feel that in a few years, Manjusri will also be able to counterattack. Well, I am talking about magic~~~ Actually, I am talking nonsense... Tears Returning to the two people, I feel that both Manjusri and BOSS are very real people. Although BOSS is BOSS, he is not like the sky and the earth in some novels, and Wenshu is also a slightly shy, serious and good boy who has not left school. Hmm... Although I don't have any position in saying that Manjusri is a good boy. Then I think Manjusri is actually really brave. If it were me, well, it's exactly what he said, same-sex, online dating, cross-border, any one of them would make me give up directly or even stop playing this game in order to forget it. Phew Speaking of which, there is another place that also tortured me. When two people met for the first time, the boss went to the wrong room and there was a misunderstanding. When I met someone Lin, ah, I really thought that the name Shenshang was not wrong. The two of them really kept missing each other. So I started to automatically think about how the two people who had missed each other would get back together in the future. Who would have thought that when they met in the bathroom, they would go the wrong way again. At that time, my mood was so bumpy that it felt like riding a roller coaster. Hey-hey. In the end, the two of them really match each other. I have a good sense of CP. Let me just say a few nonsense words - are you ready to write about their future development? To be honest, the ending was not satisfying... I really want to watch the next part~~ Well, I was actually looking forward to Miss Wenjuan's reaction, well, I am indeed evil (evil smile hehe). Well, actually, strictly speaking, this is really not a review, it's not a review, this is my nonsense, nonsense... (Wagging tail) In the end, I just hope that adults will dig more holes and fill them in more. Recently, many of my favorite authors have left... T T, sir, you will be my spiritual food bird in the future! ! I wish you all a happy heart. Your body is the important guarantee for filling holes~~ This is really not a comment (I am a messy bird in the wind...) I'm crying, I posted it yesterday but why didn't I post it... T T
Yeah, yeah, yeah, the love story is over Ah, it's my first time to follow an article, but fortunately, the adults are very fast in filling in the gaps. They don't delay and they often update twice. I'm so happy to read it. Has a new pit been opened for adults?
Just look at the name, add the tone, and you can basically be sure. By the way, I am planting now... Then I read Wenwen, not bad...