There's No Stopping Me from Loving You

It's so fun to watch (∩_∩)

Big, The long review I'm planning may not be published for the time being. I have the final exam next week and I'll come back after the winter vacation. When will the new article be published? I like both of the pre-collected articles very much! Looking forward to it!!!

Supplementary points, you have to keep working hard for new articles, I'm optimistic about you!!!

This may be a long and venomous review. It took me a week to read "Moe You Can't Negotiate". [Please look down on this as a promise that has been owed for a long time - by Buddhist readers] First of all, I think the characteristics of the characters are not obvious enough to attract readers. However, in the first three chapters, I only saw large-scale psychological descriptions, which are confessions and background explanations. The plot never showed anything that interested me. It's just like watching a show. Everyone likes to watch something more exciting. Girl, try moving the Randian and Cuteness points forward. The first three chapters, overall, are not very satisfactory, and I can't really read the highlights. Let me briefly mention a few points: 1. The girl's writing is good, I'm sure of that. Writing style is just like Xiao He. As the saying goes, Xiao He succeeds and Xiao He loses Xiao He. So when the writing style is not enough to support a long novel, girl, you have to think carefully about it - can you tell the story more beautifully and passionately while ensuring the quality of writing? Looking at the first 10,000 words, there is no cute point that makes me shine [Family Story], nor is there any bad point [Why is it so weird]? To sum up, it is not enough in terms of attraction and rhythm. This is a taboo in online writing. Most readers are impatient. If they are asked to read 30,000 or 50,000 words before drawing a conclusion, they will not be able to do it. Therefore, the first three chapters or the first 10,000 words are the key to success. 2. The story has a visual feel, but it is flawed, or a bit stereotyped. The main characters are just written fake characters instead of real people. The dynamic effect of the whole picture is very unnatural, just like the computer or mobile phone is stuck [Girls can refer to the books on writing courses to help.] But the supporting roles are very busy. If you don't mind, girl, I suggest you pay attention to the difference between the protagonist and the supporting role in the future. It is not only the division of roles, but also the growth process of the protagonist. Three. The heroine, to be honest, her appearance and psychological activities, as well as the too long background explanation, make the readers a little crazy. Girl, you highlighted the loveliness and persistence of the heroine in the early stage of writing, but in the middle stage, you made a mistake. As for what the mistake was, I will tell you quietly. Four. From the fourth chapter, the whole story finally has a detailed context. So, dear girl, why not write out the conflicts in the first three chapters to highlight the issues?? Why?? 5. I can see that you are trying hard to tell a good story, girl, and this is an old article. I see that your new work has improved a lot. [So, I actually wrote the above words with joy. Please look at my sincere eyes O(∩_∩)O] 6. Let me mention one of the key points that I am most concerned about: That is the description of the characters. Girl, you focus too much on psychological activities. This way of writing has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it has a strong sense of immersion, but the disadvantage is that it is easy to feel sleepy after watching it for a long time. Today is the era of fast reading (let's not care whether this article is new or old). Girl, you need good writing to complement the characters and plots, right? In terms of plot, there are many reference books. Girls, go buy them and read them hard. You must work hard and work hard again! I will continue to follow new articles. I hope your writing will be popular and create brilliant results!

Everyone has a period of youth and vitality. There may have been quarrels or confrontations, but they were all for better growth. When I saw the words and stories I wrote a few years ago, I realized there were too many shortcomings. Human nature is complex, and as we grow older we understand the mysteries more and more. Isn't it actually a good phenomenon for an author to create characters for others to comment on? It's better than the current silence in the comment section. As for my future wishes, I will make one in 2018: Take it easy and be a Buddhist person. ——Share encouragement with readers and friends who have supported and encouraged me. I wish you all scattered around the world: a happy and successful new year!

Ran Ran come on. There is progress in each article, and I am happy to see your writing become more and more refined! Xinwen will continue to support you, good friend, for life!

This "scandal" concocted by irresponsible journalists seems to have found a breakthrough? Yes or no?

When will the next article be published?

Return visit. . . The author of a large work must be a perseverant person. And I must be very fond of novels. I admire it, O(∩_∩)OThank you

Stop pretending to be chic when it comes to baby shoes. They say girls who fall in love are fools, but it turns out everyone is no exception. If it were me, if I was in the mood to watch a football match, I would have gone to question him...