Thieving Brothers

This is not a long article, it is of medium length, but the few characters that appear are written in a very three-dimensional and vivid way. The overall narrative of the story is very logical. Almost all thieves will be involved in the treasure, and all the mechanisms will be cracked in the end. However, no one can own the final treasure. This is almost a law. There are two brothers and sisters. Although one has been killed since childhood, he is in a cheerful mood. The other can be regarded as adhering to his father's ambition, so it is almost understandable that he is obsessed with the treasure house that took his father's life. I like the character of the younger brother. He is lively but not reckless. He knows how to stop it. If you know your senior brother, you are willing to accompany him to face possible dangers. Perhaps, for this junior brother, when he decides to go, he has already made preparations. If necessary, he may die for this senior brother's wish. Of course, it is best for everyone to be alive, hahahaha! The relationship between the two people was not described too deeply, but it was brought out occasionally. I really like this kind of feeling of constant involvement, the friendship that they grew up with. Although they always complained that the junior brother was annoying, they still kept each other by their side. I think even the senior brother himself felt that the junior brother was the person who knew him best in the world besides the master. When the master passed away, there were only two people who depended on each other. The last kiss was very warm, nothing pretentious~ It's just that I really didn't see Gongshou... Senior brother looked like Gong, but it seemed a little too awkward. Junior brother's protective posture was very offensive, but he seemed a bit seductive. I touched his chin, and it turned out that Gongshou was the legendary floating cloud! As for the supporting roles of the doctor, the profiteer, and the Xiong Fei couple, I originally thought that one of these people would definitely die. It is rare to escape unscathed on the way to treasure hunting. Most of them sacrifice all the way and move forward. It can arrange such a happy ending. The little sheep is quite innovative, and I like it!!! Hahaha~ The miracle doctor is willing to go down the mountain, nominally for his senior brother, but in fact he is looking for an excuse to end the cold war with the profiteers. And the profiteers deliberately drag him down the mountain, is it not because he wants to see him? People, sometimes they just need a step before they can continue walking, especially the arrogant ones, hehe~ Overall, I like Xiaoyang very much. The characters are very three-dimensional, and there are no bugs in the description and explanation of the environment. The short and concise story content is read at a tight pace, and it does not feel cumbersome at all after reading it. It is just that some of the explanations in thrilling places may be too ordinary, and the slightly Gulong style may also limit the explanation of details, but it does not affect the overall smoothness of the writing! I hope Xiaoyang can write a full-length novel sometime. I like this style of writing very much. I usually don't like to put on those fancy things to show off. Moreover, the character's character is very stable. It's rare to be consistent from beginning to end. It's so extraordinary. It's really something that makes people feel melancholy and resentful! There are still dozens of words left, and I have to scrape them together to meet the word count... Well, as expected, this is a long review, but I still feel a little reluctant to write it TAT Well, I would like to make some small comments. I personally think that the text in the action part can actually be more elaborate. Sometimes more descriptions can be used to let readers feel the atmosphere of the martial arts part. Simply using words to describe it is a bit too monotonous and does not seem to mean that much, because few people can directly express the actions and then YY in their minds~ Is that enough? Is that enough? It's really too much for me to break up with you again, cough...

I don't understand. I don't understand. Why can't I find the name on the profile of Da Da in Jianshu?

Finally finished reading it! I feel very sorry for the 17 chapters that have been locked... Immoral content cannot be seen →_→ The author's writing style is smooth, the plot is compact, and the dialogue and language in many places are just right. The cuteness is quite prominent, but you can still see the clues of emotion. On many levels, I am very happy to read this excellent novella. I really have a lot of love for Doctor Xue, probably because the author doesn't write much about it, but there are many highlights. I really hope to see the text of Doctor Xue. But at the beginning, I really treated Yang Wanjin as a fat member →_→.

Call me daddy! Call me daddy! Senior brother did not deny it!!

The jade cup was not allowed to be taken away! QWQ is such a pity... I always feel like it's almost the end...

Protagonist mode is on!! Plug-ins come into play!

I feel like I'm watching the ancient version of Tomb Robbers. QAQ It hurts just thinking about it.

It has a light smell and the emotion is not very prominent.

The article is good, but a bit short. : P Thank you author!!!

Martial arts is nothing more than these contents: treasure hunting, revenge, true love, and chivalry. The author narrates these contents in a short space of time, allowing readers to experience a wonderful martial arts dream. It is not difficult to see that the author has a special love for treasures. Another article "The Thief and the Thief" is also about treasure hunting. But "Brothers and Thieves" has a more mature grasp of this theme. The same bedroom, the body of the late father, and the obsession with cups (XD) are all highlights. In addition, the author was not good at writing romance in the past. He still took "The Thief and the Thief" as an example. The author showed more of the sympathy between the two people rather than the love between children. But the good news is that in "Brother and Thief Brother", the author obviously also realized this. In the hearty martial arts background, she also began to meticulously depict the emotional bond between the brothers. The relationship between the other pair of supporting characters is also quite attractive. Please be sure to write a sequel! The author's progress is obvious. The writing is becoming more and more concise and concise, and the plot is becoming more and more ups and downs. I look forward to another excellent work in the near future.