A Chapter in School History

It feels like a complete mess, but thank you for giving me a wonderful start.

I'm crying. One chapter is locked, so I can't rate it.

The story ends abruptly when we see Slytherin getting better and ready to rise. . . . . . . . . . . Vomiting 1 liter of blood. . . . . . . . Sir, you are too anticlimactic. . . . . . . . . . . . . Continue to vomit blood. . . . . . . . . . . .

Hello, author. Maybe it's because I waited for it to finish and watched it from beginning to end. There are some things that I really don't want to complain about. I hope you don't mind. The first thing I want to say is the ending. I feel that your ending is very hasty and you didn't take into account a lot of setting up and foreshadowing. It just ended like that, and it ended inexplicably! And judging from this ending, what exactly does this story want to express? An awkward Slytherin kid finally admits he has a last name of Gryffindor? ! So that's my second point. Your story gives me the feeling that its structure is: accidentally encountering something, the development of the thing, the end of the thing, and then another thing happened before the end of the thing. Although this will not make the structure appear separate, it will appear very scattered, with no main line or main plot at all. It just goes on like this. So the further I went to the end - especially when I knew there were still a few chapters left before the end - the less exciting I became. So I just rely on your plot to support me. Your rendering power is very strong, and some of the plot settings are the most exciting. The most impressive part was the Slytherin group dance, which was so exciting. But it's a pity that there are not many similar plots, but that's fine, otherwise the highlights can't be called highlights, right? Of course humor is also a virtue that needs to be praised. I hope you won't be angry. After all, I am following your other article, and I sincerely hope that I can see better works. Good Wish

Thank you for bringing us such a good story. I am looking forward to the happy stories of the Big Four when they come back~ by the cat ghost who came here after chasing articles elsewhere

Ghiya's shine is completely overshadowed by the CP of HD and GS in this article. . . Cover your face. . . But it's very loving~~~Haha~~

Why do I feel like the main characters are actually Salazar and Godric?

The ending is inexplicable. If you had known this ending, you would never have spent more than seven bucks. Regret.

Sir, some short stories are still good writing even if they are not heartwarming or sad enough.

Why is there no extra five? ? Strangeness? ?