This story doesn't vilify the heroine or whitewash the villains. The protagonist has no love interest, and there are no stupid Mary Sue antics to prove that I'm against Mary Sues or anything. Say whatever you want. If this story hits one of your triggers, then don't read it if you don't like it. This is just for entertainment. Have a laugh after reading. If you're only here to pick a fight, don't read it. If it makes you uncomfortable, I'll be uncomfortable too.
This story is pure fantasy and has no educational value whatsoever, other than misleading people. Readers under eighty, bring your own warning signs, or buy Lanbo or Lanbao. If anything goes wrong, the author takes no responsibility.
This is a story about a cute, lively, well-behaved, adorable little girl.
The little girl in this story has been officially judged to be slightly Mary Sue-ish. Still, this story isn't about sleeping around. Its main theme is the happy life of good brothers and sisters in a supernatural crossover world.
The little girl is a good kid with lots of money and the God of Wealth on her side.
She runs a general store called [Loli].
The little shopkeeper is a good kid with a big allowance.
Though a lot of the time, the little girl isn't a good kid at all.
Her awesome big brother is Kunimitsu Apple.
The shop also employs a powerful demon.
One is named Sebastian, and the other is named Ciel.
The little girl is the walking wallet of Miss Yuuko and Count D.
And so, life went on happily ever after.
The little girl's big brother, Kunimitsu Apple, is a serious and caring older brother, even if he sometimes comes up with nasty things to use as punishment.
The hired archdemon likes playing with the little girl and teasing her. Of course, the archdemon likes messing with his own little demon even more.
The little demon and the shopkeeper girl are partners in crime. Naturally, the little girl is always the one who ends up in trouble.
Whenever she gets the chance, Miss Yuuko charges a few million to the little girl's card, while Count D walks off with the [Loli] shop's fine cakes without paying.
Two money-sucking fiends.
The main characters are the little girl and her big brother. The major supporting characters are the little girl's head and deputy stewards, and the shop's staff.
I'm proofreading, so don't assume I'm updating.
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Author-chan, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. You don't seem to be very able to accept bad comments, so I won't write down the reasons for my negative score. It's similar to the previous one. Don't say it's unacceptable. I've read all the comments. When others say that your writing is not good, you don't want to change it. Why? This is the best way to change it, but you keep looking for excuses to shirk it, talking about settings, fandom, etc., And the person who helps you debate you just agree with this person. Since someone said that there must be some mistakes, you should be thinking about how to correct it, rather than thinking about how to find excuses to criticize your article. You have found all the reasons. . . Since you want to express this kind of meaning, just try to write it out as much as possible. If others don't see what you want to express here, that's what you need to improve. Saying so much is just a setting. Why is it written like this here? Why don't you revise the article?
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Cute Loli-chan~ I hope you can add some of "Lucky Star"~ This is a funny, complaining, and heartwarming anime~
Bingdian is jealous O(∩_∩)O
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Report from a new reader! After reading the text below, why does CP mean that there are no holy warriors?
There are already signs of puddles
Damn, when will we continue to update new content? I really want to know what will happen next.
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Author-chan, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. You don't seem to be very able to accept bad comments, so I won't write down the reasons for my negative score. It's similar to the previous one. Don't say it's unacceptable. I've read all the comments. When others say that your writing is not good, you don't want to change it. Why? This is the best way to change it, but you keep looking for excuses to shirk it, talking about settings, fandom, etc., And the person who helps you debate you just agree with this person. Since someone said that there must be some mistakes, you should be thinking about how to correct it, rather than thinking about how to find excuses to criticize your article. You have found all the reasons. . . Since you want to express this kind of meaning, just try to write it out as much as possible. If others don't see what you want to express here, that's what you need to improve. Saying so much is just a setting. Why is it written like this here? Why don't you revise the article?
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Cute Loli-chan~ I hope you can add some of "Lucky Star"~ This is a funny, complaining, and heartwarming anime~
Bingdian is jealous O(∩_∩)O
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers
Report from a new reader! After reading the text below, why does CP mean that there are no holy warriors?
There are already signs of puddles
Damn, when will we continue to update new content? I really want to know what will happen next.