My Beautiful CEO Wife (GL) (Season One)

So angry! I want to rate but can't, please lock the article! ^^

Asking for a lock seal.

Because the seal cannot be graded... I'm really speechless

With it in hand, after a few lazy shakes, the author will start coding quickly! ! ! (Updated version)

The best parts were blocked and it broke my heart. Can it be unlocked?

Why aren't the companions updated?~ˉ

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

… Drifting by. . . . . . . . . . .

It's a pseudo-GL novel, isn't it...

(PS: The following suggestions are purely personal opinions and are not malicious at all. If you think they are useful, just listen to them. If they are not, just laugh them off. Please do not attack.) In fact, the author's creativity and plot are quite attractive, but there are also many shortcomings. For example, the fact that "Zhiqiu was a woman before time travel" only makes the novel slightly related to GL, but has no impact on the rest of the story. This is no different from portraying Zhiqiu as a gentle and kind-hearted but insensitive to emotions, a slightly more feminine man. What initially attracted me to the novel was Zhiqiu's tenderness and thoughtfulness like an ideal lover and the touching interaction between Zhiqiu and Ji Shixuan. Love that flows slowly and slowly is the most rare thing, but I don't know whether it's because the slow updates calmed me down from joy, or whether the author's writing style is changing. The rhythm that makes the article very comfortable has turned into a procrastination, with a kind of endless affectation. Almost every time the characters' expressions are described when they are talking and thinking, they are the same: a smile at the corner of the mouth and gentle eyes. . . The author really wants to create a warm and lingering atmosphere, but the dry and poor rhetorical description is holding him back. He still needs to strengthen his writing skills. To emphasize, for example, this is a bit of speechless rhetoric that I just randomly clicked on a chapter to write suggestions: " The tenderness in his eyes spread out from the corners of his eyes like fragments, and there was a trace of sadness in every layer. "At first glance, it still feels lingering and pathos, but if you read it carefully, let alone the incomprehensible description in the first paragraph, it is obvious that there is a language problem in the second half of the sentence -. -, "Layers" and "covered" are semantically repetitive, even if the meaning of "layers" and "covered" are repeated, is that "a trace" at the end just for me to complain about? At last! ! ! What often makes people admire the author is his bad qualities! ! ! There are many people who dig big holes in Jinjiang and fail to fill them. Those who persist in filling the holes are the most admirable! ! ! Come on, author! ! !