A Pocket Dimension at Your Fingertips
空间在手
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 227k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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There are some parts of this article that are not clearly written. Maybe it's just my personal opinion. I feel that the connection in some places is not very clear. I always feel that I am looking at flowers in the fog and cannot understand. Shou's character is too holy. They are both spiritual cultivators, and they are your servants, not your masters, yet you still want to wink at them, and you don't even dare to get angry. Also, Scum Gong is a demon cultivator who can't bear to deal with you. You are so affectionate, but Scum Gong's parents have killed a person on a plane, and he doesn't even dare to fight back. He's so cowardly.
What a mess, There are many things that are not explained clearly at all. The Holy Horse, the Three Pure Ones, the Holy Horse and the Four Saints. Confused. !
I bought them all, but I can't watch them anymore. The more I write, the more girly I get Graduated from college at the age of 22, worked for 2 years and turned 24 There are many expressions and ways of speaking that should not appear on a 24-year-old man. There is a big gap between the character the author initially defined for the protagonist and the character he wrote later. From the very beginning of the V article, there is a suspicion of aliasing The male lead 1 also has a big problem with his writing. All he thinks about all day long is 'Xiao Shou, you are so cute. You are so cute, Xiaoshou. Xiaoshou, you are so cute Are you annoyed? A 24-year-old man can be naive, but he must not be cute in the eyes of readers Of course, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and it is understandable to think that no matter what kind of attack you receive, you will find it cute. But if a 24-year-old man is equated with being cute, petite, weak at heart, with transparent skin, big eyes that flicker, and a small cherry mouth Once the equal sign is drawn, it means she is a girl! ! ! By! ! ! ! ! Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My mother was hit by the thunder and could not avoid it.
Looking forward to the special offer! Extra story...
I feel like the plot is a bit too fast and the ending is a bit unfinished. But thank you to the house.
It's a mess, it's a mess... It's all covered in one paragraph It's so bad, it's so bad... It's obviously just a running account It sucks, it sucks... I feel so bad after watching it It's so bad, it's so bad... It's a curse to draw circles
I want to say that when I read this chapter, I thought I had traveled through time and reached the starting point. . . . The style is very similar to a book I have read called Buddha is the Tao. . .
Come on! Keep writing
Will this book be printed? ? Will there be a full version? I've seen the plot jump so fast before, there should be others... Hope there will be a full version looking forward to
Urgent update! This! I'm too busy not to update it for a month! OTZ