The Paper Spirit's Eerie Craftsman

The article is very nice, it would be better if there were fewer bugs.

Why can't I figure out the author? I haven't read it yet. I prefer to sort out the general plot before starting to read. Are the protagonists Yun Qinghan and Yueyao? The supporting role is Shen Qingzhi? I just searched, are there two pairs of CPs? Yun Qinghan and Yueyao (Yue Ling) Yun Qinghan and Shen Qingzhi? Is this a 1v2 novel? I really can't understand it, because I don't watch 1v2, only 1v1, but the author's writing style feels very good. But I'm afraid of seeing half of it... What I searched for is that Shen and Yun are CPs, Yun and Yue are bonded in the past life, but Yun doesn't like Yue (love)? But I think the author's target is General Yun Qinghan x and the detective? Aren't the general and the detective two people? 😭

... Can anyone really understand this jumping plot except the author? Factory Yueyao who was still in the well before and didn't know how to jump

Wow, let me praise you first. The supernatural atmosphere and dungeon design of the whole book are really touching. Many scenes made me go numb while watching it. It was also very enjoyable to catch up to the end. However, I was a little confused when reading this paragraph from Chapter 42 to Chapter 43. Although it can be seen that the character perspective has been switched, there seems to be a sense of disconnection in the plot connection. In the previous part, the protagonist was still confronting the woman in the sarcophagus in the cave extending from the dark well. In the next section, she suddenly arrived at the ancient tomb. Another female protagonist was already fighting with the ancient corpse. The woman in the sarcophagus suddenly disappeared, which made me think that I had missed the order or skipped the chapter. I can understand that the intention here may be to create a sense of weirdness and information disparity, but because there is a lack of transition in the middle, the timeline and space transitions will be slightly difficult to connect. I feel that if one or two transitions could be added, or a brief explanation of how the characters came to the ancient tomb and where the woman in the sarcophagus went, the overall reading experience would be smoother and the sense of suspense would be more complete. Of course, this is just my personal reading experience. Overall, it's still very good-looking, especially the atmosphere and thriller are really strong!

Who is the CP here?

"Dancing!" "Catch a big bug for the author~ This paper man seems to have danced in Chapter 8?

"Finding the other half of the bronze medal" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ It seems that the other half came out of the evidence bag after the previous Wenma case was over?

I think we should consider changing the name of this article. The first four words are indeed a bit convoluted 🐶

"The final scene is in a dark and indifferent..." This is a big bug for the author~ dark look

"The clarity that sees through the illusion." This is a big bug for the author~