[A Curtain of Dreams] Time Reversed

Well, I was excited when I first saw "Yilian Youmeng". I don't have many qy ​​fans anymore! Then I read the copy and found that it was an ancient style that I loved so much, so I decisively accepted the order! First of all, I only read the ones before joining v. Please don't mind. Text below. After reading the first few chapters, to be honest, I was a little disappointed. The language is not sophisticated, and sometimes the first person is used to refer to other people's psychological activities. But your psychological descriptions are very delicate. Although the number is a bit large, the structure of the characters is still very good. From time to time, poetry-like sentences will appear. The writing style is actually very good. I am a little bit confused as to why the articles you wrote are not so satisfactory. But after reading it, it became clear that you, the author, can actually write very well. The first part was probably due to your lack of experience, but the second volume has obviously become more mature since the second volume. The format is no longer like a poem, and the third person is less likely to be used, which shows that the author is growing up. I don't know why you use the first person. In fact, wouldn't it be more convenient to use the third person? But there is nothing that can be changed now, so this point will not be discussed. Well, because I only watched the scene before entering the vagina, I didn't see the so-called revenge, but I believe it will be very good. This part must be the climax. (Unfortunately, I ran out of jj coins...) Since "revenge" is the climax, is there too much in the front? The climax part that follows does not take up much text, so it needs to be detailed properly... (This guy is showing off his elementary school knowledge again...) The subject matter is very novel and rare. I personally think it is very good. The writing style is very delicate. It leads out the people who want revenge bit by bit. I don't know what happens next, but it should be revenge one by one. After all, I have been talking about revenge before. Well, it seems that dividing lines and blank lines have been used to distinguish the first person and the third person, which seems not to be obvious. It is very possible for a quick reader to ignore a blank line, and then he may think that your writing is messy. One person's psychological activities will jump to another person's psychology. Some methods can be used to make the division of personal changes obvious. At first I thought Lu Ping didn't have a boyfriend and was just taking revenge or something. Then Situ suddenly intervened. It seemed a little weird, didn't it? I guess the author probably thought of giving Lu Ping a home later. Situ's existence has never been introduced before (please forgive me if I have introduced it but ignored it), and then suddenly a seemingly very powerful person named Situ appeared. It is a bit unexpected, right? After all, who knew that he would be the male protagonist in the future? Shouldn't the male protagonist appear from the beginning... (Okay, please ignore my personal opinion) In fact, when I read the original novel, I preferred Ziling (facepalming), but after reading your article, I fell in love with Luping. The Luping who lives again is indeed different. As my title said, "the feeling of heartbeat", Luping has experienced it again, and her thoughts must have matured. I feel this, which means that your writing is successful. An excellent article should make readers fall in love with the protagonist and feel immersed in it. Although there are some small mistakes in the middle, you have achieved both of these points. This is why your click-through rate is still so high even though you have negative reviews. Very well written! I covered my face in embarrassment, could you send me the txt version or something... Just ignore it. ——By [Cheating Changping Pu] Stranger Reincarnation

After reading the first chapter, there really wasn't anything that interested me to continue reading. The style of writing at the beginning reminded me of distant new concept compositions, with unnecessary moaning. The text and sentence fragmentation make me feel very pretentious. Don't like this. But I still thank the author for submitting the article, and I hope the author doesn't mind what I say. Let me encourage you with flowers~~ [Receipt the article and leave a comment]

Previous fandoms didn't have a good explanation as to why the two sisters, who were both favored at first, later became a treasure and a loser, but here it is finally explained. No matter how bright a daughter is outside, she will be ignored when she comes home. A child who can cry will have milk to drink. Even when the weather is calm, there are already turbulent undercurrents. However, the perspective is so confusing. (Lu Ping) clearly refers to the first person as "I", but as if she can read minds, she casually switches to other people's inner descriptions...

Qiong Yao's second generation? Fortunately, I didn't read all of it.

I like it~~ I like the light and warm feeling of Wenbao~ Although some of the content in this article is somewhat similar to that of an unknown article, But it is undeniable that you have your own unique style! Keep up the good work!

= =The setting of the male protagonist in this article is too similar to that of Yilianyoumeng step by step. At the beginning, many contents are very similar - - It doesn't matter, just watch Wenma, just watch it, it's lively, hehe~ I really don't understand here. That Xiao Chu has already gone to France to study for a PhD??? Zi Ling is only 15 years old. Lu Ping seems to be about the same age as Xiao Chu. Xiao Chu is only a few years younger, only 18. That Xiao Chu is a genius. Even if he is over 20 years old, he has already completed his Ph. D. Degree and returned. Besides, he has been staying with Zi Ling more than 2 years ago. When will he go to study abroad? In his dream? I just have to mention this. He is majoring in architecture. Just say that this is his major~~ Because I care about time, age, etc., So I looked bored, how can I count these days

Please update more "Miss Qin" after it's over, please~~

In fact, it's really... Quite refreshing..., I just came out to see the bubbles.

... It's been a week

NND, why is that NC Lian acting like a nuisance? Lu Ping has such a good temper, if I had done this, I would have slapped her away.