Beyond Yang Pass, an Old Friend Awaits

I feel that the writing style is quite good, but the narrative is a bit slow. The first two chapters can be combined into one chapter, and the first chapter introduces the story of the male protagonist and his ex. In the second chapter, you can let Gong appear and write about the interaction between the male protagonist and Gong. Unless the plot has foreshadowing for the rest of the story, the first three chapters can be compressed into two chapters.

The writing style is very slow-burning, the writing is smooth, and the words are eloquent, but the conflict of emotional flow is not strong enough? Slightly slower pace

Little Couple 99 Forever Free [Spreading Flowers][Orange Candy] has arrived

Originally from Siberia, I really like road literature (?) Or natural folk scenery, let me savor it carefully😋Teacher, please write more and treat it as a tourist yummy [Okay]

The first one is already well written, I'm looking forward to the next one

The writing style is very good, and the writing is smooth and eloquent. Young couples also have tension when getting along, come on, come on 💪

It's too slow to gain popularity. Personally speaking, the memes are a bit boring and there is no conflict... For reference only