The Missing Younger Brother

Late book review! It's the first person and bone that I like. The style is very comfortable. Character I really like Xu Yu's character design. Very cute and cute. The author is very aesthetic when writing characters, and the shaping of Shou is better than Gong. Style When I first read this article, the most obvious feeling is that the writing style and first person have advantages. I like the ending style of be the most in the whole book. Do you feel like the author is good at lyricism? There are also many lyrical and narrative parts in the text. The sentences are well written and make your eyes light up. But maybe some connections and overlaying could be added before and after. Description The description of ambiguity and intimacy is very good! Impressive Story The story between the two people is very good, and the plot set up with nodes and turns is also wonderful. It would be better if the foreshadowing could be strengthened to make the connection between each plot smoother, and then the story could be unfolded. Emotion The emotional foreshadowing and development were not written, and it felt like it was progressing very quickly. It was not the progress of the story, but the emotions, as if two people suddenly fell in love and got together. The emotional line is not very clear. The little princess's past family hardships should have had a profound impact on her character. Perhaps the story of the two of them being dependent on each other as children and their separation could be written as memories of the two to strengthen the shaping of the character. For a person who has a profound sense of inferiority in his character, he may not be comfortable with his new life, and he may be cautious about trying it out. He may also suspect that this is also a trick of fate. If he is proud of his brother, may he feel inferior because of the gap. Xu Yu was accused by his adoptive father and was accustomed to being beaten. The article said that he had accepted his destiny and lost his passion for life. He was already a walking corpse. So maybe the psychological defects caused by the difficult days were engraved in his bones? People who have suffered enough will have low self-esteem, disbelief, overthinking, sensitivity, and avoidance in the face of passionate love. They will worry about being dragged down and want to retreat, and they will want to progress and study so that they can grow up to match their brothers. He will try to catch it at all costs, but he will also leave decisively after being injured. The article writes that Xu Yu has no memory of getting along with his brother when he was a child, and he also forgot that he had such a brother. If there is an impression, Xu Yu may be able to comfort himself with those pitiful memories. He will love, hate, and blame. Memories are also torture for people. Fortunately and unfortunately, Xu Yu forgot. This is a stroke of fate. In the article, if the brother could ask Xu Yu if he remembered what happened when he was a child, and if he could tell the forgotten Xu Yu about the past, the relationship between the two people might be written more deeply. In the main text, there is very little mention of their childhood and their respective growth after separation (you can see it in the author's remarks), which may be the reason for the abrupt emotional development. The complete story is missing one link, the cause and effect, and the reader cannot have a more complete, comprehensive and clear understanding of their story when reading the text. ✔Under the care, protection and love of her brother, Xu Yu grew up healthier, gradually became more adaptable and generous, and truly became a coquettish and sensible princess who met her brother. It would be better if this change (the line of Xu Yu's growth and transformation) and the hardship of his brother's entrepreneurship could be written more clearly and prominently. Also, when my brother catches Xu Yu, maybe he can explain to him and resolve the misunderstanding of playing with emotions? End The ending was written a bit hastily and suddenly, the perspective is not clear, and there is a lack of transition. If the author explains the article in his words, it is better to write it into the text as a story. The extras have new ideas and highlights. It's difficult for two miserable children to be together, but luckily they will be happy in the future I'm not too old, but the level and the overall quality are very good. Although it is immature in some places, it exceeded expectations and I found many bright spots in the article! Looking forward to better works after more experience. If there are any mistakes in my comments, I hope you don't mind. Come on, baby!

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