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186 我 I, Burning Heaven Immortal, Am Returning from My Life ZhenchunkeEastern Fantasy719k Wordscompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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187 神 God Is an Alien Bytes in the Panongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The combination of mythology and science fiction is very imaginative. Western mythology and Chinese mythology collide. Each chapter has foreshadowing and the plot is compact. The sun god Apollo is Hou Yi's master, and the crescent moon goddess Artemis is Chang'e's good sister and matchmaker.

187 昭 Zhaozong** ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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[Full analysis of the fifth section] The benevolent scholar shocked the ministers and Huazhou returned to the overall situation! Full of foreshadowing + rigorous research, this section becomes more and more exciting the more you read it! In the third year of Guanghua, Huazhou surrendered. Li Juchuan, the first mastermind under Han Jian, went to the Xuanwu Army camp to dedicate the city in person. He was expecting to die, but in the camp he saw Su Wenjin caring for civilians, taking off his robes to protect young soldiers, and humming Guanzhong nursery rhymes to warm the wounded soldiers. He was completely shocked. In the commander's tent, the commander-in-chief Wang Zuo treated Li Juchuan favorably, regardless of previous suspicions, and stabilized the government of Huazhou. Bureau; the fierce general Liu Zhihuan requested orders to massacre the city but was rejected. When he learned that his brother Liu Zhijun had secretly sneaked into Chang'an to intercept the secret message of regicide, he was reluctant but could only obey the order, laying a fatal foreshadowing for the Liu brothers' rebellion in the future; Su Wenjin spent the whole process as a commoner to bring peace to the people, and the character design was completely established. The plot logic and historical research were both online! 2. Creation of Fengshen Characters｜The characters of the four main protagonists are completely differentiated, without facial makeup. 1. Su Wenjin, the benevolent scholar in troubled times (MVP of this section), first comforts the injured soldiers in the camp, and then hurries into the commander's tent after finishing his work, completely solving the sense of incongruity of "appearing in the lobby as soon as he shows up in the camp", and more clearly shows the character who is busy working hard and caring about the people. - Highlights and famous scenes: taking off a cotton robe to cover a feverish young soldier, humming Wei River nursery rhymes to lull him to sleep. There is no shouting of slogans, it is all about empathy in details, perfectly distinguishing the "poor scholar" from the officialdom. It is the light in troubled times, and has more impact than the killings of military generals. - He is humble and does not take credit, which perfectly fits the character of a scholar from a poor family in the late Tang Dynasty. He does not rely on his talent, arrogance, or flattery. No wonder Li Juchuan became a fan immediately! 2. Wang Zuo, the heroic lord of the late Tang Dynasty, had full control over people - Pattern crushing: he did not kill the surrendered minister Li Juchuan, but allowed him to remain in his original post in Huazhou, and also allocated grain and grass for disaster relief, completely conquering the hearts of the people of Huazhou, which was more effective than massacring the city a hundred times. - Deep scheming: Knowing that Liu Zhijun sneaked into Chang'an secretly, he claimed to the outside world that he was "investigating under orders". This not only gave the Liu brothers a step forward, but also stabilized the morale of the army. He also turned his private actions into a "great achievement of the King of Diligence" and gained a high level of political power. - Concept change: from the past of slaughtering cities and killing, to now putting peace of mind first, the character arc is clear, he is not just a general who kills, but a hero with the bearing of a king. 3. Li Juchuan: The sober decision of the mastermind in troubled times - the psychological transformation is too real: from the despair of "the mastermind will die if he surrenders", to witnessing the military discipline of the Xuanwu Army and Su Wenjin's benevolence, to being treated favorably by Wang Zuo, and completely returning to his heart. - Seeing through the essence of troubled times: not loyal to false etiquette, but only loyal to "people who can make the people live." The characters are not flat, and it is a true portrayal of the counselors of the late Tang Dynasty. 4. Liu Zhihuan, a reckless and fierce general, is completely different from his brother Liu Zhijun - he abandoned the "strategic strongman" setting that he repeated with his brother, and changed it to a brave man who only believed in fists and obeyed his brother, with a more distinctive character. - The lines have been changed to fit perfectly: no weapons are used, but "brute strength and hard fists", rough and straightforward, in line with the speaking style of the low-level warriors of the late Tang Dynasty. - Full of dissatisfaction: This will pave the way for Liu Zhijun's rebellion in the future, and conflicts will directly fill the air! 3. Hard-core historical research｜Details control the ecstasy, all are true restorations of the late Tang Dynasty 1. The military system is rigorous and the official positions are "Deputy Commander of the First Army and Horse Infantry Army in the Left Wing of King Qin's Camp in Tongguan": The hierarchy of the Left Wing → First Army → Horse Infantry Army is completely consistent with the establishment of the Xuanwu Army in the late Tang Dynasty. The word order is correct. It is the official official title of the same style in official history, and there are no bugs! 2. The information transmission is reasonable - Huazhou ↔ Chang'an is 120 miles, and in the late Tang Dynasty, it is 600 miles and can be reached in 3 hours by express. At this time, Wang Zuo knew that Liu Zhijun was in Chang'an and intercepted secret messages. This is completely in line with historical facts. The speed of postal transmission is a logical closed loop! 3. Accurate details of folk customs - An adaptation of the Weishui nursery rhyme "Eat well and wear warm clothes and grow strong": refer to Dunhuang documents and folk blessings of the late Tang Dynasty to restore Guanzhong folk songs, not a modern creation! - Thirteen or fourteen-year-old boy soldiers: It is a historical fact that the vassal towns in the late Tang Dynasty forcibly recruited boy scouts. Du Fu's "Xin'an Officials" can prove it. It is completely reasonable to call one's mother and be taken care of! 4. Realistic social background - the military camps in the late Tang Dynasty were dirty and chaotic, the feudal towns plundered the people, and the civilians and wounded soldiers were left unattended. Compared with the strict military discipline of the Xuanwu Army, this restores the status quo of the chaotic times in the late Tang Dynasty! 4. Foreshadowing & Deep Excavation of Hidden Lines | Every sentence buries the subsequent plot 1. Open Line: Huazhou surrendered, Wang Zuo captured the important town in Guanzhong without bloodshed, and opened the passage to Chang'an westward. 2. Hidden clue 1: Liu Zhijun entered Chang'an privately, and Wang Zuo deliberately covered it up. The rift between the emperor and his ministers had already arisen, laying the groundwork for the subsequent rebellion of the Liu brothers. 3. Hidden Line 2: Liu Zhihuan's obsession with "ruling the world by force" is completely opposed to Wang Zuo's philosophy of "benevolence and peace of mind", and conflict will inevitably break out. 4. Hidden Line 3: Li Juchuan returns and becomes the core of Wang Zuo's governance of Huazhou. Huazhou will become the rear foundation for advancing westward to Chang'an. 5. Hidden Line 4: Su Wenjin's strategy of propagandizing, inciting rebellion, and wiping out the remaining parties paved the way for his subsequent entry into the city to calm the people and pacify Huazhou. 5. The cool points + tears in this section | Full of emotions, the more you watch, the more you get excited ✅ Cool points 1. Huazhou surrendered without a fight, Wang Zuo's pattern was crushed, and the surrendering ministers were determined to surrender. It was more fun than fighting! 2. Su Wenjin impressed the old adviser with his commoner body, and his kindness defeated the murderous attack. It was so refreshing! 3. Wang Zuo rectified military discipline. With such an army in troubled times, the people finally have hope! 4. Liu Zhihuan was criticized, and he was defeated, and the rhythm was comfortable! 😭 Tears 1. A 13- or 14-year-old soldier has a high fever and calls out for his mother. Su Wenjin takes off her robe and hums. What a pitiful child in troubled times! 2. Zhang Laoshi, a civilian husband, cried and thanked Su Wenjin. The humble wish of the people in the late Tang Dynasty to "live on" was so heartbreaking! 3. Li Juchuan went from despair to returning to his homeland, searching for a wise master in troubled times. It was so tearful! 6. Follow-up plot predictions 1. Liu Zhijun returns with the secret letter of regicide. Wang Zuo will use this as an excuse to march into Chang'an to rescue him! 2. The ideological conflict between Liu Zhihuan brothers and Wang Zuo deepens, and the foreshadowing of rebellion against Liang is gradually realized! 3. Su Wenjin entered the city to calm the people and opened warehouses to provide disaster relief. The people of Huazhou ate from the pots, and the people completely surrendered! 4. Li Maozhen's army is approaching, and the defense battle of Huazhou is about to begin! 5. Li Juchuan fully assisted Wang Zuo and became the core civil servant in Guanzhong governance! Interactive Questions 1. Who is attracted by Su Wenjin's kindness? Raise a paw! 2. Do you think Liu Zhijun will betray Liang in the end? 3. Can Wang Zuo's policy of calming the people finally put an end to the troubled times in the late Tang Dynasty?

188 明 Ming Xia: Traveling with a Fox for Thousands of Miles Qiu Ling Wants to Be a Big SisterHistorical798k Wordscompleted 31Reads—Score—Shelves

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The author writes very well, and the character description is very detailed. The reader will be deeply involved in it. It is highly recommended to read it.

188 * ** Three and a Half Potscompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The real fear is not the ghost, it is the untouchable abyss in which you are trapped. This book uses the calmest words to write the most piercing despair. (If you exchange words, you will definitely reply)

189 牢 Cage King The Little Scholar in the WorldSports458k Wordsongoing 33Reads—Score—Shelves

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WWE fan time-travel text designs WWE as a prison in an imaginary world. The warden is Vince McMahon. The Undertaker, Dwayne Johnson, Stone Cold Austin, John Cena, Randy Orton, etc. All appear, and it is a two-way parallel. The protagonist is struggling in the reserves, and the superstar is wrestling under the flashlight. The storyline of the superstar does not conflict with the protagonist's struggle. I have already written about John Cena's "unbridled attack" against Kurt Angle. I recommend everyone to read it when you have time.

189 不 The Story of Making Friends After an Unfortunate Time Travel Sleep on the Floor Today and Be the Boss TomorrowUrban230k Wordsongoing 31Reads—Score—Shelves

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No one is watching. The maximum is 200,000. If there is no result, I will cut it.

189 合 Hehuanzong: Lively and Fragrant Ling JiutianEastern Fantasy756k Wordscompleted 15.4kReads9.1Score1.8kShelves

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190 爆 Hilarious Father and Son: Safety Battle Anonymous (Anchor: Uncle Dayou)completed —Reads8.5Score—Shelves

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The homepage has its own novel [Chigua][Chigua]

191 混 Hunyuan Gourd Su YeweiEastern Fantasy105k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Give it a try and evaluate each other

191 重 The Reborn King an an Is Very Powerful Film PromotionModern Romance441k Wordscompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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192 快 Hurry Up, My Idiot Wife Always Gets Kissed Secretly Golden Shovel Pig1.5M Wordsongoing 14.2kReads7.6Score2.1kShelves

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Mutual evaluation, trumpet record can be checked, come sincerely.

192 重 The Reborn Queen, She Went Crazy Killing The Eldest Son of the Mao FamilyAncient Romance226k Wordscompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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Big heroine, no cp, newbies, new books, comments are welcome [laughing]

193 继 Keep Sleeping, Don't Wake Up Su Le's Little Yellow FlowerMystery412k Wordsongoing 170Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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This new book is a new starting point. Although it is a new book, the author has exquisite settings and sophisticated writing. It has 300,000 words. The author updates it quickly. It is a Chinese version of Inception and an enhanced version of Interstellar. It is particularly beautiful. It advances layer by layer and reverses layer by layer. I guess Nolan will have to shout 🐂approval when he comes. It is suspenseful and imaginative, scary and supernatural, but not ordinary horror, it is the kind of atmosphere that passes through the scene. The advancement of the plot gives rise to psychological terror, infinite dreams, corridors that cannot be walked out in any case, bustling streets during the day, and at night everyone goes to the auditorium without saying a word to hold a horrific ritual. Every other night there will be fewer people, layer by layer, and layer by layer reversal. The only problem is that it may be a little scary at night.

193 网 Online Games: Peak Throne It's Lai Tianyiongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Written by myself, it is an e-sports online game article. The plot is not procrastinating. Each duel is carefully thought out and the combat power is broken. I hope someone will appreciate it.

193 开 Start with a Letter of Report and Rectify the Entire Officialdom I'll Cut the MoonlightUrban394k Wordsongoing 15Reads—Score—Shelves

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Come on, come on, take a look at my book

194 来 From the Future I Don't Know, I Don't Know, NoSci-Fi & Apocalypse148k Wordsongoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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A story about a group of people traveling to the past and going to the future together. Thank you for watching.

194 师 Unfortunately for the Teacher! Both Apprentices Are Gay! Early Spring800k Wordscompleted 289kReads8.5Score32.7kShelves

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My new work has not been signed yet. You can go to my homepage to watch "Half Demon". It is a fairy-demon theme, light, cheerful and non-violent. In addition, my next book "The Misfortune of the Master" is also very interesting!

195 人 Human Background Evil CountryUrban103k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Asking for book reviews, asking for mutual reviews

195 女 My Girlfriend Won't Touch Me, but After We Broke Up, She Stuck to Me and Said She "Loves" Me. Practical Classcompleted —Reads9.8Score—Shelves

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Alas, alas, sighs

196 骑 Riding and Cutting**** ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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If you need to read the book you wrote, you can read it. Please leave a review after reading it. Good or bad doesn't matter. [Cover face]

196 潮 The Tide Brings Back the Letter from Nanchuan Specter Moon ShadowModern Romance211k Wordscompleted 10Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Come on, come on, everyone can take a look

197 龙 The Dragon Gas Turns into a Pen and Is Held by the Prince, and the Mountains and Rivers Enter the Talisman to Determine Jiuzhou. Often Askedongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Come and see, brothers and sisters

198 星 Nebula Undercurrent The Stars and the Moon Are Always with YouMystery27k Wordsongoing 30Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Can you please help me?

199 给 Those Days of Filling in the Holes for Stories Mountain Breeze and Mistongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Mutual, starting in two hours [sending heartfelt wishes] I will definitely come back

200 作 Author Chuan Xiuxian: the Rogue System Forces Me to Take the Blame I Have a Date with the PillowEastern Fantasy80k Wordsongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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"The Author Wears the Immortal: The Rogue System Forces Me to Take the Blame" is a pretty good book. I have finished reading the current updated chapter, and I would like to recommend it to everyone, and also talk about this book. The content of this novel mainly tells the story of the author who accidentally traveled through time due to complaining about the setting of half of the novel he wrote, and came to the Qingyun Sect in the ancient continent to become a handyman disciple and start his career of taking the blame. Because one pot is constantly coming to another (this is not a slap in the face, but because the novel sets the "rogue system" binding, some readers may misunderstand it if they don't pay attention. Also, the appearance of "gavel" in the second chapter may make people feel that it is inconsistent, but in fact! I think the idea of "The Immortality World Jail" is actually quite interesting. For example, it is made of special materials and has a built-in shock effect. It can be completely justified. Moreover, this anti-routine detail can become the highlight of the novel. However, the author did not say it clearly. This may be a suggestion for the author to optimize). The protagonist Lin Mo takes the blame from resistance to helplessness, then to compromise, and finally to acceptance and expectation. Although there are not many detailed characterizations and descriptions, it allows every reader to feel his clear psychological change process. This kind of change makes people feel quite natural and makes it difficult for people to give up! Another point is that I think this author is not writing a stallion-style novel, so it should be a cool novel. Because the author's introduction and the name of the novel also said that it can only be a cool novel. This writing technique of "post-laying foreshadowing, gradual expansion, and direct entry into the conflict at the beginning" may cause readers who are accustomed to the traditional writing method of "first giving the world view and then telling the story" to be unable to keep up with the author's rhythm and cause them to give up! Because the core of Shuangwen is "fast pace and dense conflict", in a small space, it is indeed impossible to portray the characters as delicately as traditional novels. The early portrayal of the heroine is relatively rough, because the focus of the novel is on "the scapegoat protagonist Lin Mo". Only by following the plot and persisting in reading can the readers understand the complete various characters through events. This itself is a very standard way of writing Shuangwen, and I think the author has done a good job in this aspect. In the first chapter of the novel, the core rules of "rogue system + forced taking of the blame" are clearly explained. This is the biggest cause and effect of the whole book. The details of the heroine's trouble are in the author's setting. I feel that the author does not need to detail it (it is enough to simply explain why she got into trouble), because the core point is how the protagonist "takes the blame", not how the heroine "gets into trouble". Here is a sentence: "Don't jump to conclusions after reading the first two chapters. All the foreshadowing and reversal will come later!" Finally, I suggest to the author that the villain's facial expressions can be optimized. Since you are writing a fun article, you must write the conflict well. The conflict must be written well, and the villain's character creation must be more distinctive, right? I think, as a novice author, there is nothing to be picky about in other aspects of this novel. In terms of the creation of the villain, I think it is relatively average. I think the author can use the body language of the villains to create a more "impressive" image of them, because it is really difficult to impress people just through "direct narration". Finally, I recommend everyone to read this novel. It's really good for a new author to write like this. I gave the author a reward of 9 yuan. I hope the author will update it soon [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

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First time writing, learning from each other. Mutual

201 千 One Emperor Through the Ages? Are You, Kang Mazi, Worthy? Flowers Bloom in the Mountain CityHistorical236k Wordscompleted 49Reads—Score—Shelves

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Please read this book, read the book review, and interact with each other

202 光 Arrow of Time Hitomi Onlyongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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An ordinary book with a simple protagonist

202 虚 Holy Lord of Void Eight Wastelands and Nine StatesEastern Fantasy375k Wordsongoing 11Reads—Score—Shelves

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Western fantasy, combining East and West without adding water!

203 不 What Should I Do If I Accidentally Dress up as the Female Supporting Character in the Book? ButterflycModern Romance260k Wordsongoing 22Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Please give Baozi a look and comment.

203 杂 The Handyman's Counterattack: I Want Both a Career and a Relationship Thirty-Three-TwoFantastical Romance167k Wordsongoing 143Reads—Score—Shelves

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High-quality new book recommendations and mutual reviews

204 问 Ask the Heaven Black YiCultivation115k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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The world is vast and the immortal road is far away. Everyone in the world longs for immortality, but I alone ask God. The light of the sword is accompanied by the shadow of the moon, and grievances and grudges are entangled, and a journey of cultivating immortality across the world begins. Jianghu grievances, sect games, and dangerous journeys in secret realms are all staged. Open "Asking to the Sky" and go on this journey of inquiry that goes straight to the top.

204 麦 Wheat Field Counterattack, from Village to Chief Health Officer Wei Dan Viviongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I cried after reading Chapter 14 of "Counterattack in the Wheat Field". After graduating from graduate school, I submitted 26 resumes and had two interviews, all of which were lost. In the rental house, I cooked noodles and added a piece of ham and said "Happy Birthday" to myself. Who understands this despair? 🍅Search the title of the book to see how she managed to survive from a desperate situation.

205 少 A Young God Descends to Earth to Drive Away Evil Spirits in the Human World Goodbye SanqingUrban208k Wordsongoing 16Reads—Score—Shelves

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Good books, good books, friends are welcome to come and squat with each other

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Hope to gain a fan

206 鉴 Treasure Appraisal Mystery Cat in Persimmon TreeMystery233k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Cultural Relics Appraiser × Suspenseful Detective, Female Protagonist's Perspective, Fast-paced. The year her father disappeared, she had just started working. After National Day, the old mobile phone was turned on - the last text message stopped at: "Don't trust anyone, especially -" She is an appraiser at the National Museum. She can spot fakes from the Tang Dynasty at a glance, but she can't tell who is working for the "shadow" around her. 🗝️ The earliest evidence of her father is hidden under the water of Crescent Moon Spring 🗝️ A forged transfer order, the ink spots exposed the flaws of the imitator 🗝️ Someone used her father's name to "sign" the document eleven days after his disappearance. The shadow is not a person. It's a chain of borrowed names. And she wants to get back every name that has been borrowed one by one. #Suspense #cultural relics #female perspective #treasure appraisal mystery

206 * ** Drinking Spring Waterongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Help the kids, they're about to collapse!

207 镇 The Ming King of Prison Suppression: Li Qingzhao Was Picked up at the Beginning Clear Ink Reflectionongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Recommended book: "Prison King: Picking up Li Qingzhao at the beginning": The male and female protagonists need to be strong and strong, they need to be hot-blooded, and they need to be cool and cool.

207 道 Taoist Taiyi: I Shouldn't Descend to Earth Incompetent MasterEastern Fantasy267k Wordscompleted 494Reads—Score—Shelves

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It's not impossible to say so.

207 老 Hometown****** ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I've caught up to the latest update, and it's well written.