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1 Cultivation of Immortality: Fu Dao Immortal Path Deer and CraneEastern Fantasy217k WordsOngoing 44Reads—Score—Shelves
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No one is watching, and there is no feedback. Please give me a thumbs up!
2 Chu Feng Is Crazy About Cultivating Immortals Flame DanceEastern Fantasy507k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please give me a beating, Immortal Madness
3 A Textbook Example of an Alpha Geek Ten WatersicknessSci-Fi & Apocalypse938k WordsCompleted 435Reads9.4Score—Shelves
4 Eerie Tattoos Daoist of JiangnanMystery3.9M WordsCompleted 15kReads5.8Score1.6kShelves
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It's suspenseful and supernatural, with a twist in the plot. You won't know who is behind it until the end [Like][Like][Like]
5 Dawn Is Coming, Fighting Through the Night Ji NanSci-Fi & Apocalypse152k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I recommend everyone to take a look when you are bored. There are 4,000 updates per day.
6 Xuanhuan: Ridiculous! This Sect Is Full of Bandits Flower Snow TearsEastern Fantasy838k WordsCompleted 588Reads6.7Score130Shelves
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💭Wander in the world of words and follow the protagonist's footsteps to explore the unknown. Each chapter seemed to open a window, allowing me to see another possibility of life.
7 My Master Is the Supreme One, the Supreme of the Supreme The Cat King Rules the WorldEastern Fantasy1.4M WordsCompleted 43kReads8.6Score3.2kShelves
8 Journey to the West: Sun Wukong Was Born with the Universe Cauldron Old SeventeenerEastern Fantasy313k WordsOngoing 3Reads5.8Score—Shelves
9 Honghuang: I Used Red Envelopes to Make the Interception Sect Invincible Big KittyEastern Fantasy2.0M WordsOngoing 34.4kReads6.9Score2.4kShelves
10 Sign in to Cultivate Immortality: Destiny Sign Locks Qingcheng Mu SiyuEastern Fantasy1.7M WordsOngoing 63Reads5.8Score—Shelves
11 Infinite Plunder: From Forbidden-Zone Supreme to Immortal-Realm Butcher A Child in Their Twilight YearsEastern Fantasy471k WordsCompleted 3.3kReads6.5Score154Shelves
12 Overhead Fairyland Tong Lao's Heart-Nurturing HouseAncient Romance1.6M WordsOngoing 37Reads9.0Score—Shelves
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Hmm... It's also classified as fantasy, but it's a little different.
13 The Underworld Detective Old Nine of the Daoist SectMystery1.9M WordsCompleted 95kReads9.4Score11.7kShelves
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In this world, strange cases happen every day. The most prosperous bun shop, its bun fillings are made of human flesh. A mansion in a prosperous area with blood dripping from the walls. The beautiful school belle who dies in the university will take someone away every time she dies. Is the legend of the zombie baby in Building 7 of the hospital true? China's last ghost work uses autopsy techniques that have been passed down for three thousand years to take you directly to the scene of the murder: there is no ghost in the world, and a skilled hand can rectify the injustice. Serial killers, sex addicts, blood suckers, necrophiliacs, people with demon eyes, all the mysterious cases of the Public Security Department!
14 Fighting Po: Soul Palace Scavenger Weeping and AbandoningEastern Fantasy106k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
15 The Story of the Candle Dragon in the Xuhai Sea Mo Qingyan 1Sci-Fi & Apocalypse62k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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In a dark novel, why do you think the protagonist is so perverted [laughing and crying]
16 Mo Qingyan 1 Mo Qingyan 1Eastern Fantasy105k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
17 Honghuang: to Seize the Treasure? the West Has Finished Teaching You MysteriousEastern Fantasy384k WordsOngoing 66Reads5.8Score—Shelves
18 Time Travel: I Was Forced to Party with the Master in Another World Dragon of LingshanEastern Fantasy192k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
19 Master of All Skills Alligator RavioliSports2.2M WordsCompleted 288Reads5.8Score—Shelves
20 I Get Stronger by Eating Ghosts Three Winds 11Mystery3.1M WordsCompleted 152.3kReads9.3Score16.1kShelves
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Very good, you can take a look
21 Historical War of Nations: The Yellow Turban Rebellion from the Start Lazy Fish Never Turns OverUrban1.8M WordsOngoing 65.4kReads9.0Score5.3kShelves
22 Aren’t You an Evil God? Why Does Seeing Me Lower Your SAN? A Salty Fish cEastern Fantasy5.9M WordsCompleted 144kReads9.6Score16.3kShelves
23 Chen Buqi, the Little Taoist Big Sister LiMystery4.3M WordsOngoing 106.7kReads9.0Score7.2kShelves
24 The Crown Prince's Grandson Who Disappeared for Eight Years Borrowing One Hundred Thousand ArrowsHistorical5.1M WordsCompleted 45.3kReads8.9Score4.5kShelves
25 Urban Xuanxiaolu Write and Shed TearsUrban295k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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