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Cultivation: The Immortal Path of Talismans 修仙：符道仙途
My name is Gu Changsheng, a cultivator of the Qingyun Sect. I practice talismans! I possess the supreme treasure, the Tongtian Lu, and can draw every talisman under heaven. I don't refine magic treasures or cultivate spells. I just have a tiny bit more talismans than most. With talismans as my path, I seek the Way and eternal life.
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The Cultivation-Crazed Chu Feng 楚风修仙狂
A Good-for-Nothing? An Ancient Savage God Sleeps Within Me (Huang) On the day Jinlin Academy held its entrance exams, everyone trampled Chu Feng underfoot and mocked him. The stone bead he had found by chance fused with the space between his brows, and he heard an ancient whisper: “Blood… still not enough…” At the examination grounds, the unruly little princess Qin Ling’er was on the brink of death. The dormant power within Chu Feng erupted, and waves of blood-colored energy swallowed the entire
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- 3 A Textbook Example of an Alpha Geek 非常典型的阿尔屁鸡 This is absolutely not a “very typical” story, even though it takes place in a world that looks like A Very Typical RPG! The protagonist, Lin Lin, lives in a large island nation cut off by eternal storms. The peaceful town of Creekvale is his whole world. He has a loving mother, familiar neighbors, and the dreams of adventure every boy should have. He possesses a peculiar ability called “Data Vision,” which lets him see information about objects and the status of other people. Well, to him a 383Reads9.4Score—14d adds
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Eerie Tattoos 诡纹
My grandfather was a tattoo artist, but the things he tattooed were seriously sinister…
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Dawn Is Coming, Fight Through the Night 黎明将至，战破黑夜
Countless astonishing supernatural events, a man-eating rainforest, a monumental war between two races, delicate prose, thought-provoking stories, and a series of astonishing events unfolding on two parallel threads. Come discover the treasures and delights hidden within!
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Shocking! This Bandit Raided the Female Emperor 震惊！这个悍匪劫掠了女帝
[Bandit] + [Faction-Building] + [Power Fantasy] + [Invincible] + [Villain] + [Decisive and Ruthless] Fang Tianyuan was originally the head honcho of the bandits on Mount Longhu, a bona fide bandit chief. But after the Strongest Bandit System Across the Heavens arrived, everything changed. What? You say you’re an empress? I’m robbing you! [Ding! Host has robbed the empress and obtained the Red Luan Soft Armor. It has been upgraded into the Ultimate Emperor Armor!] [Ding! Host has robbed the empre
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- 7 From the Start, the Temple Master Runs Off, Forcing Me to Inherit the Taoist Temple 开局观主跑路，被迫继承道观 A System that’s sometimes serious and sometimes completely off the rails, paired with an unreliable Host. Why was the System caught from the start? Why did Wenqu descend the mountain in the middle of the night? A Taoist who wants to slack off, but just can’t. 33.1kReads8.7Score2.1k14d adds
- 8 I Transmigrated into Journey to the West and Became the Monkey 穿越西游我成了猴子 Sun Cong woke up one morning and realized he couldn’t move. Then one day, he broke free of his restraints and found himself in a strange world, with a little cauldron inexplicably appearing in his sea of consciousness! Most importantly, he had burst out of a rock! And when he looked at himself, he’d turned into a monkey! A monkey that burst out of a rock? Am I Sun Wukong??? Should he join the Journey to the West, or build his own power and become a major player in the Three Realms? Taishang Laoj 1Reads—Score—14d adds
- 9 Honghuang: I Used Red Envelopes to Make the Jie Sect Invincible 洪荒：我靠红包，把截教养成无敌 [Primordial World beauties + invincible hero + magic treasures + exhilarating action] Qin Mu transmigrates into the Primordial World and becomes the Jie Sect’s senior disciple, taking his protective streak to the extreme. When the Three Xiao Sisters are targeted by Saint Zhunti, who wants to convert them and take them to the West, they turn to their senior disciple in tears. Qin Mu immediately leads all the Jie Sect Disciples in an assault on Spirit Mountain. During the Investiture of the Gods W 25.6kReads6.9Score1.9k14d adds
- 10 Sign-In Cultivation: I Became a Sword Immortal by Lounging on Mount Qingcheng 签到修仙：我在青城山躺成剑仙 At the summit of Mount Qingcheng, a youth in purple robes wielded a peachwood sword and sent peach blossoms raining down across the mountain with a single strike of the Swimming Dragon Art. His talent was extraordinary, and with nothing but the sign-in System, he mastered the Taiyi Lion Roar Art. One roar brought all the beasts to their knees. Yet, born with the destiny of a Celestial, he was fated never to leave the mountain, or the martial world would be thrown into turmoil. When the peerless 50Reads5.9Score—14d adds
- 11 From the Start, I Have a Fully Mastered Tyrant Body and Tear the Emperor of This Era Apart with My Bare Hands 开局大成霸体，我手撕当世大帝 [Emperor arc + Supreme from the start + source of chaos + neither wholly good nor evil + utterly selfish + nearly invincible + no female lead + System] Zhou Xuan transmigrates from Blue Star to another world, only to find himself inhabiting the body of a fully matured Tyrant Body in a dark forbidden zone! But this Tyrant Body is old and on the verge of death. Treacherous disciples and rebels within believe he is already dead and have risen in revolt, while Dark Supremes outside covet him as a hu 1.6kReads6.5Score10414d adds
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A Fictional Immortal Realm 架空仙界
“Letian” is an NPC in an online game, assigned the role of a monster beast kept by an immortal sect. His original fate was to be enslaved by the “immortals” for the rest of his life, but he’s determined to change his destiny through sheer wit... “Bai Qi” is the top disciple of an immortal sect in the game. His real name is Bai Qilin, and in real life he’s a brilliant student who can’t catch a break. He hoped the game would help him regain his “confidence,” but even “Letian,” an NPC, refuses to h
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The Underworld Detective 阴间神探
My new work is out! You can read it on Tomato Novel. I hope you'll enjoy it. Your support inspires me to write, and I'll do my best to tell every story well!
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- 14 Battle Through the Heavens: Soul Hall Cleaner 斗破：魂殿清道夫 One heroine, Xiao Yi Xian. Considering pairing Yun Yun with Xiao Yan. His soul transmigrated into the useless illegitimate son of Hun Miesheng, Hun Yu. His deadbeat father kicked him straight into the Hall of Souls. Other people transmigrate: god-tier Systems, cheating their way to the top. Me? I transmigrate with nothing but a soul, forced to slave away for the Hall of Souls. Are there other transmigrators? Is this the will of the world? Transmigrators? They’re exactly who I’m here to kill! To —Reads—Score—14d adds
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Chronicles of the Candle Dragon in the Ruined Sea 墟海烛龙记
Beneath the Divine Court, flesh and blood are ore! Cultivators have been reduced to mine slaves, extracting the "Ruinsea Crystal Clusters," which contain terrifying power. The price is irreversible crystallization of their bodies, until they become Ruinbeasts. The Divine Court monopolizes the life-saving "Blood-Cleansing Pills," maintaining its rule through enslavement. The youth Li Zhu struggles to survive in the Divine Court's crystal mines. When a devastating "Crystal Tide" erupts, his elder
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- 16 Mo Qingyan 1 莫轻言1 1Reads—Score—14d adds
- 17 Honghuang: Jieyin Stole the Supreme Treasure? The Western Teachings Are Finished 洪荒：接引抢至宝？西方教你完了 [Invincible in Honghuang + Investiture of the Gods + No System + Jie Sect + Transmigration] From the start, he transmigrates into the Primordial World, takes the Heavenly Court's three biggest troublemakers as disciples, and revives the Wu and demon races. Yuan Hong has just transmigrated into the Primordial World when he opens his eyes and sees Zhunti saying to him, "Fellow Daoist, I see that you are destined to join my Western Teachings." Yuan Hong jolts and raises his middle finger at Saint Z 110Reads—Score—14d adds
- 18 Transmigration: I Was Forced to Become a Sect Leader in Another World 穿越：我在异界被迫党宗主 [Transmigration + System + Sect] Adventure blogger Huo Di'e falls off a cliff while filming a video and transmigrates to another world. After awakening a System, he is forced to become a sect leader. In the end, after building up his sect, he discovers the System's secret... —Reads—Score—14d adds
- 19 Master of All Skills 全技大师 What? A Supreme Immortal Aperture Physique? I only get one chance, and they made me this useless body? Damn it! No! I'm different from them. I have a hidden quest built in! 438Reads—Score—14d adds
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Evil God Moran! 邪神墨然！
Why does the headless ghost in the hospital keep praying at midnight? Why does the skin-stealing ghost in the desolate mountain village wail without stopping? And why does the long-haired female ghost in the studio apartment shriek in the middle of the night? None of this is a distortion of human nature, much less a collapse of morality. It’s just that… someone’s having an episode! In an age when horror has returned and vengeful ghosts run rampant, Bai Yuan, dressed in a hospital gown, smiled ca
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- 21 Historical War of Nations: The Yellow Turban Rebellion from the Start 历史国战：开局黄巾起义 (History + nation-versus-nation war + famous generals + livestreaming + national destiny + political scheming + passion) The historical nation-versus-nation war begins. Having lost its historical records, Huaxia forfeited the initiative and spent twenty years mired on the battlefield, losing all its accumulated strength. Li Chen, who transmigrated here, is inexplicably chosen as the sixteenth contestant. Bearing the name of Huaxia, he enters the battlefield to fight for a glimmer of hope. Lookin 67.3kReads9.0Score5.3k14d adds
- 22 EN Another World: My Life Has Cheat Codes! 异世界：我的人生开了挂！ [Vampires, werewolves, technology, potions, ghosts, biohumans, divination, puppets, and every terrifying element you can imagine: this world has them all.] Lin En transmigrated into such a bizarre otherworld and became an apprentice at a potion shop. "Something is wrong with that man! He never uses anesthetic when performing surgery!" "That shop is a scam! The moment you go in, they find a pile of illnesses even if you are perfectly healthy!" "But wait, isn't that shop supposed to be the bes 138kReads9.6Score16.9k14d adds
- 23 Chen Buqi, the Little Taoist 小道士陈不欺 Hello, everyone. My name is Chen Buqi. My professions include Taoist priest, locksmith, cook, phone repairman, driver, and tomb-raiding consultant…. I have too many to list them all. I was raised by my master and martial uncle! They were both incredible! I only learned that after coming back from my first year out in the world. Because I liked to play around, I also squandered a lot of techniques that people would have envied! Fortunately, I devoted myself to physiognomy and mastered two special 152.6kReads9.1Score13.6k14d adds
- 24 The Crown Prince's Grandson Who Disappeared for Eight Years 消失八年的皇太孙 Zhu Ying is implicated and sent to the Imperial Music Bureau, where he becomes a menial servant! To his surprise, his true identity is Zhu Xiongying, Zhu Yuanzhang's eldest grandson, who supposedly died eight years ago! An eagle bears jade in its claws, while swallows cannot escape! The sun and moon shine over the land, and the four seas submit! You say Zhu Yunwen...the Jianwen Emperor... He merely deposed the eldest grandson! You say Zhu Di...the great Yongle Emperor? He's my general in the 30.2kReads8.9Score3.1k14d adds
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Tales of the Mysterious Night in the City 都市玄宵录
He rose from humble beginnings. His family couldn’t help him, so he had to rely on himself. His parents gave him one chance to awaken. He went from being clueless and adorably naive to becoming a top powerhouse on land. It’s pure wish-fulfillment. Lin Mo, I am the Millennium Snow Soul. I won’t let you defile this body! Lin Mo, don’t listen to her! I’m Su Qingxue, and I’m the one in control of this body.
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