The first book that suffers from dullness in the early stage and coolness in the later stage is a double strength. The second training series is about being a good cub who is attacked. In the third redemption story, Gong was betrayed by his teammates and fell into the sea, but was rescued by the little mermaid. At first, he was wary of the little mermaid, but later he directly thanked his teammates who betrayed me. The fourth book can be regarded as half a cultivation series. It is very strong in the later stage, and the big tail will directly break your bones.
The female protagonist is a mermaid, and she got into trouble with the male protagonist at an auction, and the male protagonist made her his pet. The female protagonist shows her weakness to the male protagonist at the beginning. When the male protagonist is not around, she switches identities to start a career and look for people of the same race. The male and female protagonists battle wits and courage. Don't worry, Shuang Jiehe! ! !
**"Merman Has Fallen" Recommendation:** At the junction of the deep sea and the city, an undercurrent of survival, betrayal and redemption is surging. "Mermaid Down" uses a unique fantasy touch to perfectly integrate mermaid legends and modern suspense to build a world that is both magnificent and dangerous. When the fates of the indifferent mermaid subjects and human investigators are intertwined, the boundaries between hatred and symbiosis gradually blur. The author uses delicate words to depict the struggle and transformation of the characters, burying the fiery soul torture in the cold sea water: If civilization comes at the cost of plunder, whose prisoners are we? This work is not only a feast of visual spectacles, but also touches the hearts of readers with its meticulous plot and profound discussion of human nature. If you long for a fantasy and suspense work that subverts traditional cognition, "Mermaid Down" will take you into the abyss and witness the cruelest romance and the gentlest awakening. Brandy 99
The interrogation room was dimly lit. Yan Yu, a maniac who chases dogs with kitchen knives, smashed the table with both hands, and sparks popped out from his teeth: "It was Special Code Li Laohei who made the move first! I was in self-defense! Chasing him for seven streets is an easy task, so run slower and I will let him go!" The policewoman was confused: Li Laohei? That black dog? Crazy! **But the truth is - this fish seller is breaking the news! ** Do you think he really chases dogs? That's a chase! There is "bone-eroding black mist" Li Laohei hidden under the dog's skin! Things from the abyss, designed to eat human souls! Yan Yu those two fish chopping knives? Hehe, chop, chop, chop, chop out the "spirit-killing" power! The fishy smell can't cover up the blue flame beating on the blade! A desperate chase from the market to the alley? It's the first cry of the newbie "Sacred Hunter"! The anger in his eyes? It is the "Eye of True Sight" that can see through the disguise of demons! Do the police think he's crazy? Oh, when the "gods" crawl all over Shuanghe District, you will know that this crazy fish seller is the only savior! "Are you a fish seller going to kill a god?" Crazy!" - The kitchen knife chases the dog at the beginning, and the gods are killed with the knife at the end! Under the fish stall, there is a sharp blade that can cut through illusions; in the market, the craziest guardian awakens! Watch how a psychotic fishmonger uses a fish chopping knife to cut a bloody path in a city where supernatural powers are surging! *Click to see: The target of "legitimate defense" is an alien evil god dressed in dog skin! This fish sells lives! *
Okay, this text itself already has a vivid picture and a strong sense of atmosphere, and the description is meticulous. The following is a "beautiful" evaluation of it, focusing on its literary and artistic sense: 1. **The opening is picturesque and the artistic conception is clear:** * "The capital is in April when spring returns to the earth and flowers are blooming." - The opening chapter uses two vital idioms of "spring returns to the earth" and "flowers are blooming" to accurately outline the vibrant and colorful spring scene of Beijing in April, setting a bright and warm tone. * "In the early morning, the sky is as blue as washed with water" - a metaphor for freshness and refinement. "As blue as washed with water" visualizes the clarity, purity and loftiness of the sky, has strong visual impact, and creates a peaceful and beautiful atmosphere. "The rare good weather throughout the year" further strengthens this sense of preciousness. 2. **Contrast between cold and warm, full of tension:** * "The temperature is slightly lower in the morning, and the cold wind blows in through the car window" - using words such as "cold" and "whirring" instantly pulls the reader from the warm spring scene into the slightly cold reality. The tactile description (the touch and temperature of the wind) is extremely realistic. * "The drunken person was so cold that he sneered in the back seat" - the repeated use of "drunken" emphasizes the character's state, and the word "inclined" vividly depicts the unsupportable posture after drunkenness. The beautiful morning scene contrasts sharply with the embarrassed characters in the car, creating dramatic tension. 3. **Detailed description, precise and expressive:** * "The driver pressed the meter, and the timer began to tick the order." - The description of the action ("press") and sound ("dit") is concise and precise, which is not only the node of plot advancement, but also hints at the driver's professional indifference and exhaustion after the night shift. * "Wen Xiaohui opened his sour eyes and reluctantly climbed out of the back seat" - "Sour" accurately conveys the physical discomfort after a hangover, while "reluctantly" and "crawling" vividly depict the heaviness and powerlessness of his body. * "The driver glanced at the rearview mirror, a little impatient." - The perspective of "rearview mirror" is clever, not only showing the driver's observation, but also naturally leading to the description of Wen Xiaohui's appearance. The word "impatient" points out the driver's emotion, and the addition of the background (staying up all night on the night shift) makes the emotion reasonable and deep. 4. **Character portraits, stunning and decadent at the same time:** * "A fair and beautiful face is reflected in the rearview mirror" - "reflected" with a hazy feeling of a virtual image in the mirror. * "Although the eyelids are swollen and the hair is matted, you can still see the exquisite facial features, the sharp and thin chin, and the skin that can be broken by blowing" - the description is very layered. First write about the embarrassment ("swollen from drinking", "matted"), and then write about the essential beauty ("exquisite", "slim", "breakable with a blow"). The strong contrast highlights the character's characteristics. The description "can be broken by blowing" is particularly subtle. It depicts the condition of the skin in a very beautiful way, which is in sharp contrast to "swollen from drinking". * "Looks like a boy or a girl" - the finishing touch, which succinctly summarizes the core features of Wen Xiaohui's appearance, which is impressive. 5. **Emotional transition, natural and smooth:** * "Wen Xiaohui took a deep breath and said, 'How much is it?'" - "Take a deep breath" implies that he is trying to calm down or wake up. * "'46.' 'How much?'" - The concise dialogue, coupled with the "high pitch", instantly conveys Wen Xiaohui's surprise and possible sobriety. * "Wen Xiaohui yawned and cleared his throat, his voice sobered up by 12 minutes" - the continuous actions (yawning, clearing his throat) and the exaggerated expression of "awakened by 12 minutes" vividly depict the character's state change from chaos to instant (at least superficially) awake, full of real life and a hint of black humor. **Summary and beautification evaluation:** This text can be called an exquisite character sketch that combines meticulous brushwork and freehand brushwork**. It opens with a **poetic spring morning scene**, and then breaks the tranquility with **the touch of the cold wind** and **the cramped feeling of the space inside the car**, and creates a very tense narrative atmosphere with the strong contrast between warmth and coldness, beauty and ugliness. The portrayal of the protagonist Wen Xiaohui is particularly outstanding: **Through precise movements (leaning, climbing up), delicate appearance description (the contrast between the skin that can be blown away and the drunken state) and instantaneous emotional transitions (from drunkenness to high pitch to "sober")**, an image of a "boy and girl" with both fragile beauty and hangover embarrassment comes to life on the page. The driver's few movements (pressing the meter), perspective (rearview mirror) and psychology (impatient, night shift fatigue) are also accurate and serve as an excellent reflection of the protagonist's state. The entire text** has a relaxed rhythm, full and vivid details, a strong sense of picture and atmosphere, and the language is concise and expressive**, making an ordinary early morning arrival full of drama and literary beauty.
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