I've Noticed a Major Problem with Novels Written by Beginners

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There’s just no pacing. It’s a pure play-by-play account, flat and straightforward, with no continuity between events. One chapter after another. How can anyone read this?

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1 The Top Player Runs Rampant Through Dungeons and Abducts the Evil God White Peach Wuwu Dragon1.1M WordsCompleted 97.5kReads9.7Score13.4kShelves
2 Unlimited Flow: When the Magic Stick Enters the World of Breakthroughs The Mountain Speaks Not, Twelve568k WordsCompleted 7.2kReads9.4Score1.1kShelves
3 After the Escape-Game Boss Transmigrates into an Infinite-Flow Game Little Zhezi543k WordsCompleted 12.2kReads9.5Score2kShelves
4 One Bite of the Horror Boss, and I Spit Out the Lovesick Fool! Rice-Loving Dumpling709k WordsCompleted 29.3kReads9.6Score4.5kShelves
5 After Slashing My Way Through the Instances, the Beautiful Boss Won’t Stop Flirting with Me Little Zhezi372k WordsCompleted 2.3kReads9.1Score453Shelves
6 Did You Find a Roommate Through Online Dating in Women's Clothing? Interesting Love Durian Coffee378k WordsCompleted 4kReads9.2Score785Shelves
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Does anyone know when this author will update? ! ! ! !
7 Quick Travel: the Way to Make a Living in March Wild Potato Spirit800k WordsCompleted 6.7kReads9.1Score539Shelves
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Highly recommend this book! ! ! This is a book that I clicked on and could not stop reading without skipping chapters. It is a fast-paced story about two male protagonists, the writing is also good, and the plot is logical. The hero can be a boy or a girl after time traveling. You can check it out if you don't mind. The ending of each world in the time travel is unexpected.
8 Entangled in the Misty Harbor Yun ZijinModern Romance400k WordsCompleted 50.8kReads9.4Score8.1kShelves
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How can there be such a soulful novel, ah ah, I am going to fall. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
9 How Strange! The Whole Cultivation World Is Fighting to Take Me as Their Personal Disciple Jiu Yue YuAncient Romance1.4M WordsCompleted 80.4kReads9.4Score10.6kShelves
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Thumbs up! Thumbs up! IQ is on the line, force is on the line, it's funny and exciting!
10 High-Martial Arts Dropout: I Handcraft a Mythic Gatling Gun The Ultimate Killing BlowUrban335k WordsCompleted 140Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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😍😎🥳 Hey guys, "Gao Wu Drops Out: My Hands Rub Mythical Gatling" is so good! Lin Feng bravely fought against injustice and used the forging function of the system to create a bright future. He shuttles through dungeons of different difficulties and challenges powerful BOSS. Every victory is exciting. A must-see for martial arts enthusiasts!
11 We Were Just Playing Werewolf. How Did I Become the Savior? Update Extra Chapters Like a ProUrban3.0M WordsOngoing 15.8kReads8.3Score1.4kShelves
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This is very good
12 Rain in Front of the Mountains: Starting from the Herb Collectors Can't WriteEastern Fantasy277k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
13 Unbelievably Wild! Six Uncles Protect the Little Firecracker, So Who Dares Mess with Her? Li YaoyaoModern Romance1.1M WordsCompleted 135kReads9.6Score18.1kShelves
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I think this is okay! Qianbao is not allowed!
14 Scared and Speechless Lantau TimeModern Romance25k WordsCompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
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🌙[Under the light of the convenience store, the healing and redemption of two broken souls] In the warm light of the convenience store late at night, Ke Jinnian always saw the girl writing silently in the corner. The scar on Wen Yuyan's wrist hides the past, but the words flowing in her pen are as hot as sparks - he handed over a copy of "One Hundred Years of Solitude", and she gave back a cup of still coffee, and the two lonely planets collided gently in the cold night. 🔪The sharp edge of fate cuts through the tranquility. When the cold light of the robber's blade suddenly appears, when the shadow of the scumbag follows him like a shadow, when the secret left behind by her father turns into midnight thunder, Wen Yuyan instinctively curls up into a thorn - pushing away every pair of hands reaching for her, even the warmth that Ke Jinnian stubbornly waits for is no exception. "You go." She hid in the deepest corner of the library, but she didn't know that someone was willing to stand in the rainstorm for eternity. ✨Undercurrent of healing and redemption Scars don't lie, but love can mend cracks. What drips from Ke Jinnian's soaked clothes is not rain, but the gentleness that tears away the disguise; what Wen Yuyan's trembling pen scratches is not just the paper, but the traces of the reawakening of the scabbed heart. In this two-way redemption, there is no hero to save the beauty, only two broken people picking up each other's starlight. 📖Must-see reasons ✅ Urban healing ceiling! The delicate brushstrokes reveal the fragility and perseverance of adults ✅ A mixture of high sugar and mild abuse! The ambiguity behind the scenes is more heart-wrenching than the direct confession ✅ Full sense of reality! Family of origin, emotional trauma, workplace difficulties... Every knife cuts into the painful points of life. 🌿**The words "I'm waiting for you" are more important than anything** Click to read, and in the warm light of the convenience store and the embarrassment of the rainy night, witness how two souls grow wings of healing from each other's scars. This time, don't be afraid to look back, there is always someone shining a light for you in the dark. (Reading tip: It is recommended to pair it with hot drinks, be careful that the details will make your eyes burn)
15 Xuelianzhen Corpse SisterModern Romance130k WordsCompleted 129.9kReads9.7Score16.7kShelves
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You can always trust publishing books! [Adoration]

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