Origin of Immortal Monument

After reading Chapter 5, everything seems reasonable so far. There is currently no long-term foreshadowing in this explanation, and the introduction of the transition from mortal to immortal is not too abrupt. Damn it, 99% of fairy tale novels are fine. But it seems that not many people are watching [laughing evilly] (laughing) Supplementary comments at any time Tsk, I was wrong. I kept putting poison in the back and slipped away. I can't see a little bit of it.

It can be seen that there is a small poison (Ding Jingyao, who was saved in order to contact the world of cultivating immortals, this part is not very well written), but the overall logic is correct. There is no long-winded process, the writing style is on the high side, and it is finally not a novice. There is no need to watch it. There are too many small details that cannot be handled well. Starting from Ding Jingyao, everything will change. Let yourself go. Yo-yo

It is a traditional fairy tale novel with smooth writing and no major logical errors in the plot. The contradictions and conflicts are well written and can attract people to read. The protagonist behaves relatively rationally and has a firm desire to seek truth, but he also has emotions. Therefore, if you want to read extreme dark novels and saintly novels, you can go. Generally speaking, it is worth reading.

I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. Many of them are either systematic or selfish. The plot of Demon Town Pass is very good. Each character has his or her own thoughts and stance. The plot is unexpected. It is a book worth pursuing.

Spiritual roots are divided into metal, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, thunder, and ice spiritual roots according to their attributes. Spiritual roots are also divided into good and bad. Qualifications like Shan Ziyan's top-notch thunder spiritual roots are also top-notch talents in the entire world of cultivation. Can you see it? Please reply when you see it.

Super good-looking. The male protagonist is beautiful, principled and scheming. He is awesome.

Among Tomatoes, it is a fairy tale novel with very good symbols and logic, and a smooth plot.

The story of Taoist Friends is very interesting, the writing is fluent, the transitions are smooth, and the fairy tale has a bit of a martial arts flavor. I guess the author was born in the 1970s and 1980s, and I highly recommend it.

Except for the last few chapters, I read it word for word. The author was not satisfied with the work and finished it hastily. But the completion of the work is still readable. The flow of the plot and the style before and after are unified, and there are no major flaws. The protagonist's opportunity is also natural and there is no embarrassment of forcing it. It's just that Goldfinger is a bit weak and lacks participation in the plot. In the end, it was finished in a hurry and many Nascent Soul props did not appear. Including the divine tripod at the beginning. Didn't look at the power of the innate spiritual treasure. It's a pity.

Very good, come on, come on, come on, come on

I hope the style won't change too much in the future. The few books I've followed have changed, just like changing authors. The dialogue between the characters is not very good, and the plot can be advanced slowly. The author should write slowly and polish the book now that there are fewer people. Why did it end suddenly?

The description technique is very good and the characters are vivid and vivid.

So far it looks pretty good, the details are handled well, the plot and timing are reasonable, and there is no plot as blunt and embarrassing as Xiaobai's novel.

It's pretty good, suitable for old bookworms.

Yes, there are no poisonous points, the rhythm is normal, and the protagonist's character is not distorted.

I finally came across a novel in which the protagonists have fire spirit roots and wood spirit roots, but they don't make elixirs. It's rare, rare, really rare!

It's very interesting. I haven't seen such a wonderful article about cultivating immortals for a long time [smile]

The fighting is exciting and the plot is tense.

The author writes eloquently, the plot is vivid, the protagonist slowly grows up, and it is exciting

It has potential, the opening narrative is smooth, and the plot is reasonable

Although the author is writing a book for the first time, it is much smoother after fifty chapters than before. Come on, I hope you will. I also look forward to the day when I can see the protagonist ascend. [You taste carefully]

It's pretty good, keep it up [Like][OK]

It's ok so far, I'll wait for the review

The plot is reasonably reasonable

Not bad, very pretty

Well written, keep it up

Not bad, quite tasty

It's okay so far

Very good, please support [eating melon]

Good books recommended to everyone