I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家，第1次写满8万字，能不能有个人来评价下

I'd like to read something similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: Misty Clouds Defying Fate". It's the author's first time writing a story that's over 80,000 words, and now they want to work hard toward 400,000, aiming for that kind of length. They're bored at home after just finishing their first semester of college, and their writing style...