Could Any Experts Give This Some Criticism and Advice? 有没有大佬批评指正一下

1. 1 当 When an Abusive-Novel Master Meets a Disciple from a Men's Virtue Class 当虐文师尊遇到男德班徒弟 Guang Xiangjun广香君Two Male Leads243k WordsCompleted Dual Male Leads + Cultivation Master-Disciple Story + Goofy, Warmhearted, Scheming Disciple as the Pursuer × Cool, Gentle, Kind Shizun as the One Pursued Being a shizun is a high-risk job. Being a certain Tang shizun is a downright deadly one. Li Lanqing was the shizun in a certain Tang sadistic romance. His outrageous little disciple, Ye Wenxi, dared to defy their master and take the lead. As they sank into reckless indulgence, they became entangled in all kinds of love and hate, tormenting e 3.9kReads9.3Score623Shelves

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   This one!!! I think that everything about Number One in the story about the two male protagonists traveling through the book, the master and the apprentice, is very reasonable. There is no forced change of the character's original personality, and the various supporting roles are not forced to match up with each other. In the end, you don't just get through the book and suffer it!!!

2. 2 我 I’m Already at the Nascent Soul Stage, and You’re Telling Me It’s Time to Start School? 我都元婴期了，你跟我说开学？ Miaomiao Jiang妙妙酱丷Urban5.3M WordsOngoing During his summer vacation, Ning Chen went traveling and accidentally stumbled into a teleportation array that opened once every two thousand years, transmigrating to the world of cultivation. After reaching the Nascent Soul stage, he returned, thinking the world must have changed beyond recognition. To his surprise, only one summer had passed... And so, among the incoming freshmen at Qingzhou University was an old monster at the Nascent Soul stage. “You have no idea how powerful a Nascent Soul 115.6kReads8.3Score12.9kShelves
3. 3 灵 The Supernatural Returns, and the Eternal Night Begins 灵异复苏，永夜降临 Qingyuan Vocational High School Prodigy庆元职高小天才Mystery2.4M WordsOngoing [Supernatural horrors descend + no System + fresh worldbuilding + survival + semi-infinite-flow + no do-gooder protagonist + not dark + supernatural abilities] In the best years of his life, amid the exuberance of youth, Su Yuan thought his days would remain peaceful and beautiful forever. Then a line of bloody text appeared on the blackboard during evening study. [In the silent night, a terrifying ghost appears outside your dorm room... How long will it take to kill you?] Everyone thought it wa 386.6kReads9.3Score39.4kShelves

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   🏙️When the world is about to fall into eternal night and weirdness is coming🌇, hope and despair are just a matter of thoughts. They test and make choices on the edge of darkness. For that glimmer of hope, they fight against the unknown fear and find light 🌞 and salvation 🌸 in a desperate situation. Every step is related to life and death. An adventure related to survival and faith begins.

4. 4 嫡 The Legitimate Princess Consort Died Tragically, Then Returned Reborn and Turned to the Dark Side 嫡妃惨死，重生归来黑化了 Jiang Damo姜大沫Ancient Romance1.0M WordsCompleted She was the daughter of a century-old military family, noble in status, yet she was cruelly betrayed by her fiancé and half-sister. Her face was flayed, her identity stolen, and she died miserably, only to be reborn and awaken as the princess consort of her former fiancé's sworn enemy: Qin Wan, a legitimate daughter who had been raised in a mountain village since childhood, timid, weak, and afraid of trouble? Ha! The noble daughter of a military family, reborn with peerless medical skills and ma 82.3kReads8.6Score7.3kShelves

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   [Love] [Love] [Love] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] The daughter of a century-old general was betrayed by her fiancé and concubine, and died in a miserable state. After her rebirth, she turned out to be the princess who was the archenemy of her ex-fiancé. She was still a timid and cowardly village girl. But with amazing medical skills, chess, calligraphy and painting, she comes back to take revenge! When the truth is revealed and faced with the two men from her past and present life, where will she go?

5. 5 薪 The Remaining Embers of Xinhuo 薪火余冉 Supreme Slime至尊史莱姆Sci-Fi & Apocalypse325k WordsOngoing Welcome, everyone, to read my work. There’s no System or cheat ability; the protagonist grows from nothing. The power system is well-developed, and the story isn’t mindless. I hope you enjoy it, and I’d really appreciate your support! 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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   "If you can't take mankind away from the identity of chess pieces, then try your best to smash the chessboard." Dong Xuan, who originally just wanted to live quietly, discovered the secret behind this disaster by chance, and where is the future of mankind... There is no system or saint, there is reason and logic, absurd and nonsensical funny art, a good book for newcomers to survive in the apocalypse. Those who like Cthulhu can also take a look

6. 6 快 Quick Transmigration: Clear-Headed in a World of Love-Brained System 快穿之人间清醒却绑定恋爱脑系统 Barbecue Caramel Potatoes烧烤焦糖土豆Modern Romance398k WordsCompleted [Apocalypse + Republican Era + Infinite-Flow + Interstellar + Alternate Universe + Divine Beasts] 1v1 [Zombies + Devoted Love + Older Woman/Younger Man Romance + ABO + Household Intrigue + Strong Female Lead] Skip this if these aren't your thing. Ouyang Yue has just graduated when her parents divorce. She sets off on a solo trip to clear her head, and accidentally binds herself to a quick transmigration System along the way. I thought I'd already renounced love and desire. Now you're telling me 77Reads—Score—Shelves

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   The author initially said that she wanted to pursue her husband in the crematorium, but the male protagonist quit and just fell in love with her.

7. 7 空 A Solitary Shadow on a Desolate Mountain, Cultivating the Immortal Way 空山孤影修仙道 Can't Go Bald秃不了Eastern Fantasy191k WordsOngoing *Kong Shan...* tells the story of Kong Shan, a young cultivator blessed with extraordinary talent yet beset by misfortune, and his journey from mortal to immortal. As he pursues immortality, he faces countless trials and challenges, setting out to discover the true meaning of the Heavenly Dao. Blending a complex cultivation system, profound character relationships, and a plot full of twists and turns, the story reveals the cruelty and mystery of the cultivation world. Through countless crises, K —Reads—Score—Shelves

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   Mortal Flows to Cultivation to Immortality: The protagonist comes from an ordinary background, and relies on his own wisdom and hard work to continuously grow in the world of immortality, from the lowest monk to finally reaching the pinnacle of immortality. The story has rigorous logic and a complete cultivation system. It tells the inspirational process of how ordinary people can change their lives against the will of heaven. [Think]

8. 8 我 I Exchange Black Technology by Crushing the School Bully 我靠打爆学霸兑换黑科技 Meat-Eating Panda吃肉的熊猫Urban4.6M WordsCompleted [Academic Prodigy + Black Technology + Technology to Strengthen the Nation + War and Terror Bureau] High school student Song He gets the Academic Grudge System. As long as he can make top students lose their composure, he can exchange their resentment for all kinds of black technology. So Song He keeps driving the top students over the edge: “You snatch first place in the grade, and every other top student drops in the rankings. Resentment +10,000!” “You receive a special research allowance for 62.1kReads9.3Score6.9kShelves

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   I highly recommend this super exciting novel "I Redeem Black Technology by Beating the Top Students"! In this novel, the protagonist has a distinctive and unique image, full of charm and fighting spirit. He or she is not a genius in the traditional sense, but he or she has a fierce determination to refuse to admit defeat, and relies on his or her own hard work and wisdom to run rampant in a world filled with top students. The protagonist has a perseverant character, never flinches in the face of difficulties, and constantly breaks through himself in the face of challenges. People can't help but cheer for him or her. The storyline is full of ups and downs, full of surprises and excitement. In order to redeem black technology, the protagonist competes fiercely with top academics from all walks of life. Every competition is thrilling, full of collisions of wisdom and tense duels. Sometimes, the protagonist will counterattack in a desperate situation, which makes people excited; sometimes, he will get into trouble due to a moment of negligence, which will make the readers' hearts twitch. Moreover, the black technology elements in the novel are eye-catching. From magical smart devices to scientific inventions beyond imagination, these black technologies not only enrich the interest of the story, but also fill us with endless daydreams about the future. In short, "I Destroy High School Masters in Exchange for Black Technology" is definitely a novel that you can't put down. Whether it's the wonderful character creation or the gripping storyline, it's worth immersing yourself in. Open this book quickly and experience this unique adventure together!

9. 9 大 First-Year Internship—And You Went to Site 749 to Contain Monsters?! 大一实习，你跑去749收容怪物 Gaara's Sand我爱罗的沙Urban3.9M WordsOngoing [Decisive killing] [How could any monster be good?] [All monsters deserve to die] [Ruthless] During his sophomore summer vacation, Lu Ding had planned to use the time to take an internship and earn some living expenses. Who could have expected that the construction site where he interned would excavate a bleeding stone? The workers fled one after another, but Lu Ding charged in with a rotary hammer. After transmigrating to this world nearly twenty years ago, Lu Ding’s golden finger, the Monster 614.1kReads9.5Score56.7kShelves

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   Highly recommended, with high martial arts abilities and invincible excitement. The protagonist is a student on the surface, but secretly he is a 749 investigator who kills monsters decisively and without blinking an eye. His purpose is: all monsters must die!! Industry owner: If you join the 749 game, you can keep getting stronger by containing monsters. Containment is not about imprisoning them, but sentencing them to death, just to kill them [top post]

10. 10 黑 The Dark Age 黑暗纪元 Black Rice黑米饭Sci-Fi & Apocalypse2.1M WordsCompleted Black clouds blanket the globe. The sun has disappeared forever, demons from the abyss lurk over the human world, and humanity has entered its darkest age. When I awaken, the world beneath the eternal night will be mine. 315Reads8.1Score104Shelves

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    "Dark Age": A science fiction apocalyptic novel. In the background of the Dark Age with black clouds covering the world, the protagonist survives and seeks development in a difficult environment. Its grand worldview background and the protagonist's struggle process are comparable to "Eternal Seal".

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