The Supernatural Returns, and the Eternal Night Begins

It's really beautiful, with real emotions, and the weird helplessness faced by a teenager who is still a student. And I don't know why, this book doesn't feel like it is protected by a strong protagonist's halo like other books, it's very real. (When I read horror and survival novels now, I subconsciously feel that the protagonist's halo is awesome and I can definitely pass the level, and then I don't feel scared at all)

He is not a buddy, although he is a bit of a knife, but the character of the male protagonist really pokes me. Now he is killing decisively at every turn, which makes me feel darker. Moreover, the description of his abilities is also very handsome, and the brotherhood is also very touching. Woo hoo hoo, Taoist brother, let's go.

Advantages: The characters are distinct, the text is concise and smooth, the plot is coherent and non-toxic, with a kind of humor that occasionally makes people smile, and the emotional advancement is excellent, without any abrupt plot. Every plot point is remarkable. Disadvantages: Slow heating. The author's writing is very good, but the reveal of the worldview is too slow. The first large copy of more than 90 chapters has not yet been completed, and the emergence of the organization is also a little slow. It's a very good novel, but if it's rated below eight, it's a bit confusing. It would be much better if the author could optimize the rhythm or adjust the structure. I like books that get to the topic quickly and have a clear world view. This book was almost too slow to get into the topic at first, but the excellent plot kept me here, and I kept reading to the latest chapters. Come on! The author has great potential!

I found it on the home page and saw the latest updates in one go. It's really nice, especially the group portrait descriptions and activity trajectories. They are very smooth and reasonable, and they are completely immersed in it. Everyone's growth feels that the world view is very rich, and I can still feel the sense of youth in high school in this scary atmosphere. The boys' fights and jokes made my body spots look damned a lot. The level of surprise is as good as the ferocity of the players. I hope I stick to it and it won't end [Start][Start]

Must be five stars. After reading it, I feel that this book does have the potential to become a hit. I have read many novels of this type, and this one ranks among the top 5. The emotional scenes are also amazing. As a grown man who has been killing fish at RT-Mart for 20 years, I shed tears twice while reading it. I was really moved. Although it is very disappointing to write about ghosts disappearing after death, I feel that the oppression of ghosts is not enough. I hope the author can give the protagonist abilities while balancing ghosts. The latest chapter has a vague meaning that the protagonist is ready to cheat. Don't make the supernatural novel turn into a fighting novel. Several confrontations kill ghosts. It still feels oppressive that ghosts cannot be killed. Overall, it feels like a mysterious resurrection. There are not many books that can be popular without regret. In short, just don't blur the boundaries between life and death and suddenly resurrect people. Finally, I hope the author can write more, it's not enough.

I have just read Chapter 10 and the first night has just passed. I can see that the author is very talented and writes super well. In Tomato, there are too few of this level. Most of them are self-help articles. I am really happy to see this article. Of course, it would be better if I didn't read this book when I was home alone at two o'clock in the morning [smile][smile]

Good book Talking about the male protagonist alone, the male protagonist has a boyish temperament. If you see this kind of person, you will feel very happy when he is the protagonist. You have to have force value, you have to have brains, and you don't get tired of pretending. You just bring in Long Aotian, who feels cool but not very stereotyped. He kills decisively in the face of the cruel reality but still silently remembers all the ordinary people who sacrificed. There is no problem with the character design. There are group portraits as well as group portraits. To be honest, it is not easy to write the protagonist well. The supporting characters are also written with flesh and blood, which really tests the author's writing skills. In particular, the male dormitory group may be especially vivid because the author brought in real friends. Who didn't imagine that when they were in the second grade, they would form a group with their friends and start to have special powers. In the end we locked Song! ! The heroine Bai Yueguang in my heart! ! ! Seeing her die seemed to take me back to when I was in high school in Dragon Clan 3 and saw Eriki die in that dry well. The youthful feelings between boys and girls in high school are the most embarrassing thing! ! Especially at the moment when Lao Song died, I still felt unfinished! ! ! There will be many possibilities for them in the future, especially what abilities and stories Lao Song will have, but these all came to an abrupt end! ! Even later, when the male protagonist in the dream finally wanted to redeem his regrets and spoke the truth (that's what I guessed, right), the old Song in the dream died again. What a great swordsmanship, author😃 But to be honest, it is this swordsmanship that makes readers feel uncomfortable the most. Come on, Lao Song, win the resurrection match.

It's really good-looking, the characters are full-bodied, and there are a lot of laughs. But I saw earlier that the author has been complaining that the book traffic is not very good, and he doesn't want to update it. I just want to say that this is a vicious cycle. Irregular updates will really reduce readers' desire to read, thus leading to worse book traffic. I hope the author can figure it out soon [rolls eyes]

The atmosphere of terror is very strong, and you can feel the sense of despair. The description of human nature is also very good. Some people are greedy for life and afraid of death, while others are trying to survive. The character of the protagonist is very real and there is no personal heroism. Each supporting character also strives to play his or her role in the supernatural world.

As far as the 59 chapters I have read so far, the potential is still good. From the perspective of character portrayal, it is barely successful. The scene description is not detailed enough. I suggest you read some European and American books for reference. Of course I'm referring to horror movies, don't think about those messy things [smile]