There are no bad points at the moment. I have read a lot of novels of this type, and many of them are illogical. I hope the author's subsequent settings or worldviews can be logical. Many novels are exciting in the early stage, but fall flat at the end. It is at the end of the writing that my skills are tested.
"Never come to the other side." A man covered in blood said these words in front of Lu Kai and disappeared into white smoke. That night, a silver-white door appeared out of thin air - behind the door was the other side, a world where awakened people could gain extraordinary power by putting on a mask. The price is: only five years of life left. Lu Kai could have turned around and left, pretending that this never happened. But three years ago, my grandfather and sister disappeared behind this door. He has no choice. Put on the "Ashes" mask left by your grandfather and step into the other side. Others say he is the Chosen One, but Grandpa says he is the Watcher. Two identities, one must be false. But when Chen Long personally ordered him to be hunted down and the boss of "Yongye" changed his face when he saw his mask, Lu Kai realized that his identity was far more terrifying than he imagined. Twelve watchmen, thirty-six faces, two emperors... The truth is revealed layer by layer, and every answer points to the same question: Who is he? "The Thirteenth Watcher", suspense × battle × mystery of identity. Behind the door is an abyss, and also the answer. Open it and you'll watch it until the end. (Unhappy writing is not systematic, not reborn, not invincible, not a holy mother, not cold-blooded) (Please like, please comment, please book shelf, please give me gifts, please recommend books, thank you readers so much 🙏 ) (The author of this book is a student, and he usually goes to school, and only has time to update on weekends and holidays, so one chapter is updated every week with 4,000 words) (Except for the early stage, each chapter is at least 3,000 words, please feel free to eat)!
"The Game of Destiny" is not a novel that can be read in three or two chapters. Its rhythm is slow but firm, like a far-reaching chess game. The moves may seem ordinary, but in fact each step has profound meaning. This is not a "splendid novel" in the traditional sense - the protagonist is not crushed all the way, and the plot does not rely on external forces to promote the climax, but relies on the inner transformation of the characters and the connection between details to build up the overall complex structure bit by bit.
A message from Penelope Panagiotopolous, Director of the Pataphysics Department There will be no more forerunners disappearing into the darkness, no more screaming cries. This is how we kill the gods, this is our Longinus. A message from Penelope Panagiotopolous, Head of Pataphysics Department You don't need to know more. The Pataphysics Department is forever spinning.
The first book, I didn't expect that suspense detective novels could be written like this. It completely changed my view on cool writing. It turns out that reading cool writing also requires thinking. The whole book is not only light-hearted and humorous, but also has many unexpected plots that make people break their guard. It is a rare good book.