Modern Cultivation of Immortals: the Captain Is so Righteous That She Becomes Evil

The author really wrote it very well, and the skirt is really beautiful. There is the lazy and venomous An An, the gentle but sharp Song Ji, the super invincible Wu Wu who doesn't look at colors, the silly and sweet Chi Jingming, and the introverted and shy Qin You. Not only are the protagonists with different personalities, the fifth team is also very likable: there is the gentle sister Wen, there is Bai Yu who loves to play games, there is the Beking brother who looks like a pure love but is actually a blushing boy Xu Jianjun, there is the super reliable retired soldier uncle Zong Wei who knows how to adjust surveillance, and there is the weird Nangong Jiqi who is super insensitive to emotions. And the most lovable one, the one who made me sad and shed tears, the one who loved to swipe the bus senior card passed down from her grandfather to her mother and then to her when we first met, who cherished it very much, who opened a KTV and treated it as her home, who patiently taught the team members how to use a knife, who would hear An An being bullied and hurriedly called for help, who was told by An An that she could become a clothing blogger but said no, who sacrificed his life for his teammates, who was cheerful, generous and interesting - Captain Yu. Team Yu, please have a safe journey... ｡°(°´ᯅ`°)°｡

Maybe you like group portraits, passionate stories, etc., So I recommend you to read this book. The plot is wonderful, the protagonist has a hidden identity, a bit mysterious, but it also emphasizes love and justice, and is a bit gentle. There are also some supporting characters with very rich personalities, such as Captain Yu, who is willing to sacrifice himself for the team, and Wen Lan, who is also very gentle, really gentle, and likes to be a close friend, you really want to check it out Of course there is Song Song, Sequence 001, Fountain of Life, which is a healing type, equivalent to an auxiliary in the game, but Song is not that kind of auxiliary, and is also very strong. And Jingming, Chun and Jingming, should they be hiding something at the moment? His mental state should not be good, but he is very good. I really sincerely hope that he can get better. This character design is really attractive. Of course, there are Wuwu, etc., Etc., There are many people, there are already many appearing, but everyone is really colorful... To sum up, this is a truly passionate group portrait novel with wonderful characters and rich storyline. I sincerely recommend that people who like group portrait novels add this book to their bookshelf, you will definitely like it!

This group portrait novel really won my heart. It is mainly based on the "Grass Team" composed of six people, but the supporting roles are also distinct. There are no particularly inexplicable people who are causing trouble for the protagonist group, there are just collisions of their respective interests. The protagonist Lin Banan dares to think and do because she has the strength and confidence. After all, Daxia is behind her. But as the first person with luck in the world, she also shoulders a heavy responsibility. Of course, everyone around her has been assigned tasks, but she is the only one who has no authority to view them hahaha. Later, many people sacrificed for Daxia and Blue Star. As for the group portraits, of course they died and were injured... I hate the author for making me cry [crying] Fortunately, the author arranged for them to be resurrected in the end, so I can barely forgive them [blowing kiss] In my opinion, the author's writing is pretty good. "They reunited after the world was broken, and were reborn in the new world they created. When the morning light spreads over the cemetery, the chirping of cicadas is knocking open the door of midsummer. See you again, farewell and be well. "

A very good book, the plot is exciting and attractive without being procrastinating, and there are a lot of foreshadowings 👍👍👍The mystery and story of the protagonist always make people keep reading. The author's transition is also very interesting hahh Very good group portrait. I hope you don't stab me later. I'm so thin and I'll be dead with just one stab. As we all know, group portraits are dead, dead, dead (holding forehead and smiling bitterly) (whispering) The usage of "boy" and "sir" in the article shows that the author has thought about it, but in the early stage, "boy" was mostly used for men and "girl" for women. It will be more comfortable to deal with it in the later stage, including ["Sir" should not be called women], which is also very good for the protagonist to express. I would like to make a suggestion not to use "Master" to address women. The word "father" does not mean women nowadays. It is better to use "Master", "Master's Mother" and "Master's Wife". Why do "Master's Wife" and "Master's Mother" play the role of companion (affiliate) to the Master and a caregiver? I feel that the author is not very old, and he doesn't know much about women's rights. It's good to think about the manifestation of women's disempowerment in modern Chinese and express it in his works, but there may be some hidden words~ Come on

It's really super good-looking. Everyone's character in it is vivid and the characters are vivid. The first part is full of the high-spiritedness of the young people, the kindness of the elders, and the sincere feelings between the girls. Forget the last few pictures, they torture me to death. What kind of good family's group portraits are all dead, but maybe this is really the best way for them. The abstract and arrogant yet reassuring Lin Anan, the gentle and tolerant Song Ji who shoulders heavy responsibilities, the dull but yet sociable Wu Wu, the humble yet brave Qing Qinyou, the dazzling and bright Chi Jingming who guides sexual friends, the never-giving-up Han Yuchen, the somewhat abstract Yu Dui who is An An's leader, the gentle and motherly sister Lan, they like each other. Xiao Xu and Nangong, Teacher Bai who is a bit arrogant and has a talent for abstraction, Teacher Chu and Teacher Pei who compete for guardianship, Emperor Wen who loves to write unofficial history, arrogant Tao Ruhua, Chu Geng, Bai Yu... There are also some small characters with only a few strokes, each one is impressive, their lives are played out in front of me, this is a group portrait I like very much Generally speaking, this article has a relatively fast pace, but I can understand that people who really want to defeat you will not give you a chance to grow. When I first read this article, I thought that I would wait until the protagonist group grew to a very powerful point before they would face these cruel truths, but I didn't expect that they are still so weak and can only use so many lives to exchange for one person to break out of the siege and bring hope to mankind. I am filled with emotions. I hope it will be finished soon and don't feed me any more knives. Thank you.

The first choice is the characters. Everyone in the book has a distinct image, and even the supporting roles can be brilliant. Although the protagonists are all geniuses, not all of them have it smooth sailing, but have gone through hardships. Next is the plot. Everything is full of thrills and hope. So far, it can be seen that there are many hidden threads, which makes people look forward to the development of the story. Suspecting that Koike is a girl [Thinking] First of all, he lived alone in a single room, and secondly, he saw bandages at that time (although he began to suspect that he had a mental problem), but later he said that his mother kept it secret until now because of his indistinguishable appearance, and Yuyou felt that Koike's hands were soft and not like a boy's hands. (These are all personal guesses) [shy]

A very good book, the whole text is written smoothly and without lag. It is a group portrait with An An as the main line. Several other people are also talented in the summer, and they are a group of high-spirited teenagers. When Daxia was in trouble, they did not hesitate to choose to fight for Daxia What are teammates? They are friends, relatives, and comrades who in the end cannot even tell the mission. (PS Is there a second book? QAQ) …………………………………………………… "Withered branches and no leaves, ghost hands shade the sun." "The iron horse and the golden sword guard the country's gates." "Cut all your business with one knife, burn all your life blood with one knife." "As long as there is a spark of hope in the world, and as long as there is still a family that lights up the light, my sword will always exist." "The weeping willows do not cross the autumn, and the withered leaves fall into the stream and imprison themselves in the air." "The desert regains its atmosphere, and the east wind scatters the jade dust. The bright light brings dawn to the bamboo window, and the cold retreats to the spring in the willow garden. The fragrance of the green is memorable, and the warmth of the red stove is friendly. Bear with it for three or two days, and don't be a person who breaks your fast." "Go back to Daxia, go home." "When we return to Daxia, there is hope."

Overall: good looking Point-by-point comments The current appearance ratio of several protagonists is 2432:622:503:486:178:150 Lin Banan: Song Ji: Chi Jingming: Wuwu: Qin You: Han Yuchen As a group portrait novel, the proportions are a bit out of whack. Especially Han, my only impression of him is that he cooks deliciously, is versatile, needs to atone for his sins, and there is nothing particularly profound about him. The author's big idea may be that each person writes a volume, and then continue to evaluate this part after finishing it. The transition was a bit stiff in the early stages but improved in the later chapters. The plot is very compact, which is what I like very much (because many online articles on Tomato are very protracted). Although it may seem rushed, choosing the most representative scenes to describe them can highlight the character of the characters. A lot of foreshadowing has been laid, which will be reflected later in the article. "Lin Ban An" "Song Ji, the Ji of the clear breeze and bright moon" "The pool is bright, the spring is bright" "There is no illusion, there is no illusion in the sky." "Qin You, bless you" "Han Yuchen" "Superpower Sequence 003 Huang Liang Yi Meng, please, enter the dream"

This book is really one of the best among the group portraits I have read. Everyone in the team is very vivid. Ban An's arrogance, A Ji's carefulness, Wu Wu's escape, Qin You's growth, Jing Ming who is a bit damaged and cowardly, Wuchen's stay-at-home mother, and the personalities of various characters are the most popular in this book. The biggest feature is that there is no absolute supporting role, everyone has his own story, everyone is the protagonist. Anyway, I like group portraits. If you want to see more women and they are all powerful, this is the right book to read. But there is one thing to say.

This book is really, really good. I love watching the vibe between them. The young man was in high spirits. [Lin An, go forward, don't stop. ["So... It was me who planned their deaths. It was time and era, as the pusher, pushing the waves forward, pushing each young man to death. [A young man with a combination of luck and talent is high-spirited and high-spirited. [I once said that when I reach the realm of gods, I will kill you like butchering dogs. But now, how many tricks do you think I have used? The Charge is the most inspiring voice in Daxia. Do it knowing you can't do it. Go ahead and meet your grand death. [No one is sad, only the anger of sacrificing one's life for the country and protecting one's country. ["The building will collapse, and only the people guarding the building will die!" " "I would like to be that person. " "Da Xia Demon Slayer Division, fight to the death and never retreat! " "The horn sounds, please die for your country! " ] It was really sad to see all the characters I was familiar with die for Daxia. Fortunately, they all came back to life in the end. Finally, Lin Banan, you are so strong, I like you so much!

When I was eating, I happened to see a very sad place. I cried while eating. What a hateful author. What a hateful author. What a quack. I felt a lot worse. What a quack. But I support everyone to go see it. The charm of the group portrait comes from the loyalty of many young people gathered together. For the same goal, they will move forward even if it is like a small tree.

The writing is very good, although there is no cp, but I have one thing to say, I really like An Ji. The other teammates are also very good, the team atmosphere is very good, everyone is strong and humorous, and the upper management of some organizations are also decisive and can rush! They are all good, but the ending feels a little too rushed. I feel like I haven't watched the story of Caotai Team yet. And didn't the author promise to have an extra story about An and Song? Why not? What about the content of the timeline and everyone's psychological activities?

Okay, very nice Both the character of the protagonist and the characters of the companions are very distinctive. I like Captain Wen and Captain Yu, but I took away Captain Yu and deducted one point. Ah, when did my Bai Yueguang, who died at the beginning, bring Captain Yu back? I will add one more point. Captain Yu is really upset😭

It's been a long time since I read it, so I'm back to comment (by the way, is there any extra? Lin Banan impressed me deeply. He is a high-spirited young man who is responsible and a little bit sinister. He can be naughty occasionally (I still remember the words on the moon hahaha [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] Chi Jingming is my favorite character in the whole book. She disguised herself as a man and was taken advantage of by her mother and finally came out. She is tough, beautiful and handsome. She is also a 5G surfer [smirking] The interaction with Qin You also really poked me. "Spring and Jingming, calm." Although I can't continue to witness your story, I still want to wish you again: don't be held back by the past, you should move forward all the way, your future will be spring and Jingming. When I saw the end, I really felt like "Qingshan is lucky enough to bury his loyal bones" May the sea and rivers be clear and the world at peace (This is my first serious book review, so I don't know how to express it hehe

This book is wonderful, the characters are very well drawn, each character can slowly integrate into his heart, and give you a critical blow at a sudden moment. The knife about Captain Yu appeared several times from beginning to end, and it hit me a few times. Especially at the end, the departure of each character is also very consistent with the character and has its own characteristics. It is very consistent with the plot, but it is difficult to accept. The country feels that all the people in this country are not afraid of losing their lives and are fighting for the country. There is Instructor Duan who was infamy at first but kept silent, there is the magician who has the same heroine but a different power but always stands by An An, etc. The characters are all very well portrayed. It is a pity that the familiar characters were not rewritten at the end. Colors, such as King Chu, paintings, and some impressive characters, which makes me feel regretful. But all in all, I think this book is very beautiful. The above is a personal evaluation. If there is anything inappropriate, that is my problem.

Very good (✪▽✪)👍I like it very much. It is a passionate group portrait. Each character has his own consciousness and emotions, with good and bad sides. In the early stage, it is passionate and wanton, and in the later stage, it is cruel to dogs, but the ending is good. In the finale, everyone was resurrected, and it wasn't that sad. Another ending in my imagination is: even if Xiao An becomes an immortal, there is no way to resurrect everyone, so let Xiao An pave the way for Da Xia, then go home and lie down, teach groups of teenagers like her team, and prevent them from falling into the same pain as her. At the end, when Xiao An left, she saw her teammates wearing the uniforms she chose. It was the same teenagers back then, with the sun behind them. Everyone walked towards her while chatting and laughing, and stretched out their hands to pick her up: "Captain, long time no see!" (I think this ending will definitely make me burst into tears ಥ_ಥ)

Super good-looking❗In addition to the protagonist, there are many people I like: Bai Yu, Wen Qilan, Song Ji, and Nangong Ji. And Captain Yu! ! ! Her character, her appearance, just like Lin Ban said, a sick beauty [laughing]

Super Invincible Cosmic Thunderbolt Explosion is beautiful Great work, please don't give up on writing [I'm about to cry] [Sending my heart] Good looking. Love to watch. Come on [love][love][love] I love it beyond words

It's very interesting. Chapter 48 contains the first knife, so be mentally prepared. There are too many knives. After thinking about it, I decided to deduct one star.

Gee, I always feel like I have seen many words somewhere, and the foreshadowing is buried deep and shallow. For example, the female version of "I Killed Gods in a Mental Hospital" should be based on this book. It should be a novice author. Come on, three points are content and two points are encouragement. I hope I can write a better and unique article of my own.

It's so beautiful. I like the group portraits the most. The Caotai team, the instructors, and the students were all great throughout the summer, but the last few chapters really made me cry. They were a closed loop of time and their mission. They were so high-spirited, young man! [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

"The building will collapse, and only the people guarding the building will die!" "Daxia Demon Slayer Division, fight to the death and never retreat!" "The horn sounds, please die for your country!" "Ban An, I'm back." "We are back." The encounter between young people is a high-spirited one. The sun poured into the boy's chest, and the wind swept up the laughter and shadows of the seventeen or eighteen-year-old. They reunited after the world was shattered and were reborn in the new world they created. When the morning light spreads over the cemetery, the chirping of cicadas is knocking open the door of midsummer. See you again, farewell and be well. The teacher's writing is very good, I like it very much [sending my heart] [almost crying] in the end it was really 😭😭😭😭😭😭 but they all came back [almost crying] [almost crying] Explosive🔥🔥🔥[Sending Hearts]

It's good-looking, a little bit like the Demon-Suppressing Pass. The last sentence, where is my extra? Where is my An Ji extra story? Where is my Yu Wen extra? Where is my Xu Nan extra? Where is my autumn leaf extra? Where is my Jingyou extra? @Zhouwendao

The first half of the whole article is funny and contains countless foreshadowings. It is the process of young people growing up, and the final outcome is a life-and-death battle in Daxia. It is the interpretation of countless heroes that "loyal bones are buried everywhere in the green mountains." Fortunately, the final ending is good. The heroes used their blood and tears to gain peace in Daxia. "Fight with one punch to avoid hundreds of punches." Their subordinates have been well performed. From them, I can feel the revolutionary martyrs who sacrificed their lives during the Anti-Japanese War. I wish them in the article a happy life and good friends! I hope those unknown heroes in reality will be reincarnated and see China's prosperous and peaceful times, He Qing Haiyan!

Extra story, I love being together, stay together with me, confess your love to me, and we will be happy together till we grow old. It's very beautiful. We all live together in the end. I forgive you. The abuse you gave me in front of me hurts my heart [I'm about to cry]

An article that suits my taste very well First of all, the stance is accurate and people put national interests first. It can cultivate patriotism and make us trust our motherland more and love peace more. Secondly, the creation of the characters. Every character is flesh and blood. The emotions of the protagonist group are also very clear, very down-to-earth and full of fireworks. Every hero in it is worthy of admiration. This is also a microcosm of the heroes who protect the home and the country in reality. With you here, we really feel at ease. I really like the heart-warming communication between the girls. The teamwork is handled very well. The youth spirit is so loved! Once again, there are several pairs of CPs who are very good at talking about each other. Then it's not purely sweet, it's also sadistic. The author's transition is very interesting. Finally, the writing is also worthy of scrutiny. I like the gentle style very much. A small mention here is that the pace is a bit too fast later on, and there will be a lot of foreshadowing. This aspect is also handled very well. Overall, I like this novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard and meet a better you. I believe this novel will not stop here. Then the mountains are high and the rivers are long, we are destined to meet again

The rhythm of the whole story is very well mastered, including the ending, and the plot is also fascinating. Oh, I love watching this kind of setting where the protagonist has great charm. The pick-up king Lin Banan is still working hard hhh. The heroine is strong and decisive in killing. She is not an aggrieved character. It is very enjoyable to watch. The character portrayal and character growth of other members of the heroine team are also very good, but the disadvantage is that the ending is too hasty. I personally am not the kind of person who particularly dislikes sadistic plots. A good plot always involves some knives. I won't go into details about the big knives in the following chapters. I personally accept it well. The knives are reasonable and acceptable. However, the last chapter feels like it is forced and affects the perception. There is also a feeling that the author wants to finish it quickly? It feels a bit similar to the rhythm of "Charlotte", but the ending is too hasty. I think it would be better if there were a few more chapters at the end to transition. I will deduct one star for now. Also, when will the teacher prepare to write the wedding extravaganza between Song Ji and Lin Banan? (Doge)

It's really beautiful! ! First of all, there are many female babies and they are very strong. I see that the author has worked hard to care for the characters. The characters have souls and are not flat. The content setting is very interesting and makes people want to read more. He has built a very magical world and written a good story. I love An Ji so much! ! My best friend, my best friend! ! Best friends are the best! ! Seeing the metaphor of mandarin ducks in the extra episode, it seems that xql is too good!

The two words "good-looking" have a good ending. In the early stage, it was mainly funny and heartwarming. An Ji was really good at fighting. In the middle, everyone's secrets were gradually revealed. An Ji was really good at fighting. In the later stage, especially in the last twenty or so chapters, everyone sacrificed themselves one by one and I looked stupid. Fortunately, An An became immortal and resurrected everyone, and everyone's CPs are alive and well. Once again, An Ji is really crying, especially when I see the extra chapter An Ji (daily), I really want to cry to death. My cp has come true [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Looking forward to the wedding extra

An instructor who would drive them home; A captain who takes the bus and swipes his senior citizen card; A squad where everyone has a hidden identity; A literary emperor who recorded history; A piano emperor who likes to play the piano; A Buddha who sacrificed his life for his country; A painting emperor who painted the mountains and rivers of China; A group of warriors who defend their homeland; ……………… A very good book, a group of high-spirited teenagers. ——2025.11.2