I'm a New Writer. How About We Review Each Other's Books? 新人写书，互评好吗？

1. 1101 怼 The Clapback Championship: Sister Que, Stop Arguing! 怼王争霸赛：榷姐你别诤了 Little Little Little Butter Cheese小小小黄油芝士Modern Romance145k WordsOngoing [Sharp-tongued, flirtatious female lead (goes nuts at any time and has a flair for drama) × scheming, aloof, chaste male lead (emotionally stable) + one-on-one sweet romance with a fiery edge] [Livestreamed dating show + playful banter with trending catchphrases + watched by the whole internet + goofy antics + contrasting charm + laugh-out-loud comedy] (Enter at your own risk! Both leads are total goofballs. Plot-driven, not a traditional wish-fulfillment novel.) The first time Ye Que, a sharp- 7Reads—Score—14d adds

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   Come on, let's all stick together and keep warm! [Working on a deadline][Working on a deadline]

2. 1102 捡 I Picked Up a Zombie King to Raise 捡个丧尸王当崽崽 Red Zone红色雷区13k WordsCompleted I Picked Up a Zombie King to Raise as My Kid —Reads—Score—14d adds
3. 1103 我 My Top-Student Boyfriend Is So Easy to Placate 我的学霸男友超好哄 Little Fox Demon Wei狐妖小唯Modern Romance220k WordsCompleted When Lin Wei accidentally spilled a strawberry milkshake on Gu Yan's expensive white shirt, she thought her life was over. He was the computer science department's famously untouchable heartthrob, a top student with an extraordinary IQ. Rumor had it he was aloof and distant, and hated troublemakers and people who had nothing to do with him. But one stroke of fate's bug after another followed: they were assigned to the same elective-course group, ran into each other at the library, and got paired 1Reads—Score—14d adds
4. 1104 快 Quick Transmigration: The Office Worker Only Wants to Make Money 快穿：打工人她只想搞钱 Little Sweet Pepper, No Spice小甜椒不加辣Modern Romance123k WordsOngoing [System + Quick Transmigration + No Fixed CP + Clear-Headed Money-Making] Gu Jingxue, the ultimate overworked office drone of the twenty-first century, worked late to earn her perfect-attendance bonus and tragically died from overwork. When she opened her eyes again, she was bound to a wealth-gathering System and sent through small worlds on missions, earning money for every one she completed. [First World: F-Rank CEO Abuse Romance] (Complete) From the start, the scumbag CEO forces her to leave 2Reads—Score—14d adds

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   Honesty comes, mutual encouragement, mutual reading

5. 1105 s Sprunki: The Misfit Who Defies Labels sprunki：不被定型的异类 The Corrupted Pigeon King黑化鸽子王Eastern Fantasy328k WordsCompleted A Sprunki fanfic. Blood and death blanket this land, while the clouds of war drift over the city. Gray, the embodiment of a demon, scrapes by in the city's shadows. He's weak, so very weak... The supernatural, the uncanny, the gods, Golden Men, sinners, and a corrupt government of the original humans, “I offer you everything I have in exchange for your protection.” “Granted.” Under the protection of Black, whose moods swing wildly, and Wenda, whose mental state is unstable, Gray is safe, for now 87Reads8.1Score—14d adds

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   As a newbie writer, I really don't have much writing material 😭

6. 1106 我 I'm Li Long, and I've Got a Long Spear. Even Wolves Won't Stop Me 我李龙有一杆长枪，有狼也照打 Chen Songzi Loves Boiled Rice Noodles爱吃煮米粉的陈松子Urban1.6M WordsCompleted Li Long, the strongest soldier of the new century, dies a heroic death on a peacekeeping mission. By a twist of fate, he is reborn in the 1980s. In an age of famine when people can barely afford to eat, he puts his skills to use in the vast mountains, hunting bears, catching rabbits, and fishing. From then on, his family enjoys meat with every meal and fish every day. He also makes the acquaintance of a military leader, answers the call to enlist, and becomes a new-generation soldier king in thi 241Reads8.8Score10314d adds

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   Li Long, the strongest soldier of the new century. He heroically sacrificed his life while on a peacekeeping mission. By chance, he was reborn in the 1980s. In a time of famine where even food was scarce, he used his skills to hunt bears, rabbits, and fish in the vast mountains. His family then enjoyed a life where they ate meat and fish every day. He also met a leader in the army, and was drafted back into the military, becoming a new generation of soldier king in this world, continuing the story of training generation after generation of soldier kings for the country. If war comes, he will be called back! [Bookshelf added]

7. 1107 她 She Signed My Death Certificate 她在我的死亡证明上签了字 Xiao Que, Who Loves Fancy Date Buns爱吃花样枣馒头的萧阙14k WordsCompleted She Signed My Death Certificate —Reads—Score—14d adds
8. 1108 走 Leaving Haozhigou 走出浩志沟 Carl MuyanCarl慕彦Urban178k WordsCompleted The winter he was seven, Xiang Yang’s feet were covered in chilblains. Pus and blood stuck to his socks, and when they were pulled off, flesh came away with them. There was only one bowl of cornmeal gruel left at home. His mother gave it to him and drank cold water to stave off her own hunger. Everyone in the village said, “That kid’s life is over.” But he refused to believe them. From a poor boy who walked mountain paths barefoot to a factory hand whose feet swelled from standing on an assembly 55Reads—Score—14d adds
9. 1109 狐 The Fox-Keeping Handbook 《狐狸饲养手册》 Mo Fengbai墨锋白Modern Romance15k WordsCompleted A Fox-Raising Handbook —Reads—Score—14d adds
10. 1110 穿 Reborn as the Abused Novel's Female Supporting Character, I Give Up 穿成虐文女配，我摆烂了 Red Zone红色雷区14k WordsCompleted Reborn as the Villainess in a Tragic Romance, I Give Up —Reads—Score—14d adds
11. 1111 安 The Chronicles of Anton 安东志 Minor Official of the Border City边城小吏Historical697k WordsOngoing When Fang Muchuan was thirteen, he stood on the walls of Lin'an and asked Zhao Wenxiu, “Grandfather, what's beyond the mountains?” “Annan. And beyond that, the sea.” He had no idea that one day he would lead the elite soldiers of the garrison across those mountains. In the tenth year of Chongzhen's reign, the Ming dynasty was battered by storms. Garrison officers embezzled soldiers' pay and seized military farmland, driving soldiers and their families to flee in droves. To the north, the Jurchen 67Reads—Score—14d adds

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12. 1112 重 Reborn in 1970 and Kicked Out of the House, I Became the Richest in the Village by Stockpiling with My Pocket Dimension 重生70年被撵出家门，我靠空间囤货成全村首富 Xiao Que, Who Loves Fancy Date Buns爱吃花样枣馒头的萧阙Modern Romance7k WordsCompleted Reborn in 1970, Kicked Out of My Family, I Stockpile Goods in My Pocket Dimension and Become the Richest Person in the Village —Reads—Score—14d adds
13. 1113 克 The Tenth Stroke of the Klein Bottle 克莱因瓶的第十笔触 Mo Fengbai墨锋白9k WordsCompleted The Tenth Stroke on the Klein Bottle —Reads—Score—14d adds
14. 1114 穿 Reborn as the Female Supporting Character in a Campus Novel, I Formed a Villain Alliance 穿成校园文女配，我组了反派联盟 Red Zone红色雷区12k WordsCompleted Reborn as the Female Supporting Character in a Campus Novel, I Formed a Villain Alliance —Reads—Score—14d adds
15. 1115 掌 The Sect Leader's Path to Immortality 掌门修仙路 Yan Shuyu颜舒雨Eastern Fantasy192k WordsOngoing No golden finger. Just writing about what I enjoy, and doing my best. All criticism is welcome. The story of a low-ranking disciple leading his sect’s growth and growing alongside it. Just two people and their sect: how far can they go? 10Reads—Score—14d adds

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    The new book might need guidance from a big-name writer who's already flopped.

16. 1116 我 I Opened a Portal in the Desert and Put All of the Northwest on the Map 我在沙漠开传送门，带飞整个西北 Keep Going, A Yue前进吧阿月Modern Romance33k WordsOngoing Zhang Xiaohui, a woman returning to her hometown with a million yuan in debt, is walking in despair through Shapotou when she unexpectedly awakens the ability to teleport through space. She goes alone to Shenzhen and breaks into the high-end market with Ningxia goji berries, only to be framed by her competitors for selling counterfeit goods. Unable to clear her name, she has 137 stores open their boxes and inspect the products simultaneously, letting the truth speak for itself. In the midst of t 2Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Peer review bonus!

17. 1117 忘 He Can't Forget Your Face, and Now She Regrets It 忘不了你的脸，她后悔了 Xiao Que, Who Loves Fancy Date Buns爱吃花样枣馒头的萧阙6k WordsCompleted She Can’t Forget Your Face, and Now She Regrets It 3Reads—Score—14d adds
18. 1118 双 Tales of Shuang'an 双安奇谭 Mo Fengbai墨锋白33k WordsCompleted The Curious Tale of Shuang An —Reads—Score—14d adds
19. 1119 渊 Abyssal Calamity 渊厄 A Page of Draft一页草稿Mystery420k WordsCompleted [This is the author's first book, and I'm a complete beginner who only got into web novels last year. If you spot anything that could be improved, please share your valuable suggestions. Thank you!] [Infinite worlds | No padding | No invincible protagonist | One heroine | Modern urban martial arts | Supernatural abilities | Horror game] So calm it's pathological, so deranged it's extreme, with an intellect that crushes every rule. My name is Xi Yan. I'm trapped in the Abyssal Dimension. There ar 7Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Please give me your feedback [I'm almost crying]

20. 1120 综 Going Viral on Variety Livestreams with My Supernatural Skills 综艺直播，我靠玄学爆红 Red Zone红色雷区16k WordsCompleted I Went Viral for My Mystical Arts on a Variety Show Livestream —Reads—Score—14d adds
21. 1121 危 The Dangerous Housekeeper Only Wants to Be the Young Lady’s Loyal Dog 危险女管家只想做大小姐的忠犬 Fried Chicken Dipped in Yogurt炸鸡蘸酸奶Two Female Leads351k WordsOngoing [Ice-cold, beautiful housekeeper + broken puppy + sickly obsession + contrasting sides + two equally powerful leads + fated entanglement + happy ending] What matters most when training a dog? When you take the collar off its neck, the dog is always the first to lose its temper. Chi Shuang was just like that. She was Lu Xinlan's most loyal housekeeper, a blade that cleared every obstacle from her path, and a dog who willingly let her tighten the collar and kept her head bowed at her side. Wheneve 14Reads—Score214d adds

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    The new book might be a bit short yet, but don't worry, I'll update it very quickly. You can schedule it as often as you like. [Sending heart]

22. 1122 道 The Dao That Guides True Immortals 道引真仙 Extra Spicy Deep-Fried Cilantro油炸香菜多放辣Eastern Fantasy225k WordsCompleted Li San (Qing Xuan): a remnant soul from another world, a body born in the shadow gap, and a forbidden cultivation that crosses the divide between yin and yang. This is a path that begins in obscurity and winds through thorny trials at every step. With a soul from another world, he cultivates the arts of this realm, purges yin impurity, and draws closer to clarity. He searches for himself on the brink between life and death, and questions his heart between righteousness and evil. The Dao guides o 1Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Seeking guidance! Looking for discussion! Looking for Eastern fantasy/cultivation novels worth reading!

23. 1123 斜 The Slash Couple’s Sweet and Sizzling Rise 斜杠夫妇的甜燃进阶路 Qianjia Reads at Night谦甲夜读10k WordsCompleted The Sweet and Fiery Rise of the Slash Couple —Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Watch sweet romantic dramas here.

24. 1124 砚 The Princess’s Beloved Consort, Steadfast as an Inkstone 砚定安宁驸马的掌心宠 My Heart Soars On and On悠悠我心飞扬Ancient Romance274k WordsCompleted Ancient historical romance + bickering couple + sweet romance + clever leads + mutual devotion The heroine, Princess Anle Yang Ninger, is arrogant and domineering. She prefers a whip to makeup and is bold, spirited, and unafraid to love or hate. She's dumped from the start, only to become the most sought-after woman in the blink of an eye. The top scholar treats her like the apple of his eye... The two go from bickering rivals to protecting each other through danger, and gradually fall in lov 815Reads8.6Score10514d adds

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    Mutual five-star reviews within three hours, daily requests for updates

25. 1125 曾 Once, I Thought I Was the Other Woman 曾经，我以为我是小三 Keep Going, A Yue前进吧阿月8k WordsCompleted I Used to Think I Was the Other Woman 2Reads—Score—14d adds
26. 1126 死 Only After I Died Did I Learn My Adopted Daughter Told Him She Loved Him for Me 死后才知，养女替我对他说了爱 Xiao Que, Who Loves Fancy Date Buns爱吃花样枣馒头的萧阙8k WordsCompleted Only After I Died Did I Learn My Adopted Daughter Told Him She Loved Him in My Place 2Reads—Score—14d adds
27. 1127 欢 At the Festive Opening, He Said, “I'm Not Single” 欢乐开场他说，我不单身 Mo Fengbai墨锋白7k WordsCompleted A Joyful Opening: He Said, “I’m Not Single” —Reads—Score—14d adds
28. 1128 我 After I Broke Off the Engagement, the Crown Prince Went Mad 我退婚后，太子疯了 Red Zone红色雷区Ancient Romance21k WordsCompleted After I Broke Off the Engagement, the Crown Prince Went Mad —Reads—Score—14d adds
29. 1129 探 The Paranormal Investigator 探诡达人 Tan Is on Fire谭冒火了Mystery321k WordsOngoing My name is Qi Yue. I was born in the seventh lunar month, so that’s how I got my name. I’m a restaurant reviewer, and I’ve been doing this for five years. I made a little money in the first few years, but after the pandemic, the jobs became fewer and fewer. I wanted to switch to another line of work, but I didn’t know how to do anything else, so I had no choice but to keep struggling. With my pockets nearly empty, I desperately searched online for similar jobs. At last, I found a well-paid posit 6Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Just as people can be divided into good and bad, ghosts can also be divided into good ghosts and evil ghosts.

30. 1130 橘 Second Row, Orange Soda Flavor 橘子汽水味的第二排 Qianjia Reads at Night谦甲夜读19k WordsCompleted The Second Row, with a Hint of Orange Soda —Reads—Score—14d adds
31. 1131 阿 Aye's Spirit-Hunting Diary: Parking Space 77 in the Underground Garage 阿野探灵日记：地下车库77号车位 Wheat and Watermelon Rind麦子西瓜皮Mystery6k WordsCompleted A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Journal: Parking Space 77 in the Underground Garage —Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Short story, highly recommended!

32. 1132 穿 Transmigrate and Spend Every Night in a Handsome Man's Arms 穿越之夜夜躺进美男怀 A Dream in Zhuxi竹溪一梦Ancient Romance593k WordsCompleted [Romantic rivalry between men + one woman and multiple men + taming men + sweet romance] “What? You think you can use this handsome-man scheme to make me give up on entering the palace? ... This trick actually works pretty well! Don't worry. Once I'm in the palace, I'll do everything I can to get out. When I do, remember to wash up and wait obediently for me...” Weng Yu transmigrates into the Great Jing Dynasty as the beautiful but sharp-tongued and caustic legitimate daughter of the prime mini 938Reads6.4Score10714d adds

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    Five stars! Five stars! I've been following this since Chinese New Year.

33. 1133 售 Madness at the Real Estate Office 售楼部也疯狂 Keep Going, A Yue前进吧阿月11k WordsCompleted The Sales Office Is Going Crazy 64Reads—Score—14d adds
34. 1134 我 I Was the Tyrant's Substitute for Three Years, but He Thought I Was a Green Tea Bitch 我给暴君当了三年替身，他却以为我是绿茶 Mo Fengbai墨锋白7k WordsCompleted I Was the Tyrant's Body Double for Three Years, but He Thought I Was a Green Tea Bitch 1Reads—Score—14d adds
35. 1135 阿 A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: Room 514 at the Old Hotel 阿野探灵日记：老宾馆514号房间 Wheat and Watermelon Rind麦子西瓜皮Mystery6k WordsCompleted A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: Room 514 of the Old Hotel —Reads—Score—14d adds
36. 1136 算 A Spark Beyond the Algorithm 算法之外的心动值～ Qianjia Reads at Night谦甲夜读15k WordsCompleted A Flutter Beyond the Algorithm~ —Reads—Score—14d adds
37. 1137 丹 The Pill Venerable Burns the Heavens 丹尊焚天 Golden Lotus in a Sea of Bitterness苦海照金莲Eastern Fantasy257k WordsOngoing Lin Yan, a great master of alchemy, was murdered by his closest friend. In this life, he carries an ancient, heaven-defying inheritance, defeats every prodigy, and ascends to the pinnacle of the myriad paths. “Chaos Seed, Green Lotus! That is the first primordial lotus to emerge beneath the eternal azure sky, born at the dawn of creation! It is the root of creation! A Bright Moon Rising Over the Sea! That’s the supreme manifestation of the Lunar Saint Emperor when that woman… no, that esteemed o —Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Can we peer review each other's work? This is my new book.

38. 1138 收 The More Demonic Beasts I Tame, the Stronger I Become 收服的妖兽越多我的战力越强 Great Mist Mountain大雾山Eastern Fantasy369k WordsCompleted “System, how many points does forced subjugation cost?” [Target detected: Blazing Lion King (mid-stage fifth rank, critically wounded), 2,000 points; Silvermoon Wolf King (early-stage fifth rank, near death), 1,500 points; Netherworld Python (early-stage fifth rank, near death), 1,500 points.] [Current beast energy points: 730. Insufficient.] Lin Ye gritted his teeth. “System, can I pay in installments?” [The System falls silent for three seconds…] [System alert: Insufficient beast energy poin 34Reads—Score—14d adds
39. 1139 县 Youth in a County Town: A Summer of Endless Cicadas 县城青春：蝉鸣不止的盛夏 Na Shi Feiyue娜时飞悦Modern Romance89k WordsCompleted My new work is out! Head over to Tomato Novel to read it. I hope you'll enjoy it. Your support inspires me to write, and I'll do my best to tell every story well! 2Reads—Score—14d adds

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    A true coming-of-age story of teenagers in a small county town in the 1990s. See if you see a reflection of your younger self.

40. 1140 老 The Boss Is an Iceberg 《老板是座冰山》 Mo Fengbai墨锋白6k WordsCompleted The Boss Is an Iceberg —Reads—Score—14d adds
41. 1141 阿 A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: The Woman in the Rental Apartment 阿野探灵日记:出租屋里的女人 Wheat and Watermelon Rind麦子西瓜皮Mystery6k WordsCompleted A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: The Woman in the Rental Apartment —Reads—Score—14d adds
42. 1142 我 How Am I Supposed to Date? 我该如何处对象？ Qianjia Reads at Night谦甲夜读52k WordsCompleted How Am I Supposed to Date? —Reads—Score—14d adds
43. 1143 笑 This Is Hilarious, I Pretended to Be a Male Student and Fooled the Dynasty’s Top Scholar 笑死，我装男学生骗疯当朝状元 Starch That Loves Potatoes爱吃马铃薯的淀粉Ancient Romance243k WordsOngoing [Female disguise + revenge by a legitimate daughter + absurd twists + political schemes and sweet romance + mutual salvation] (Former title: The Red Silk Mix-Up: I Deceived the Top Scholar for Three Whole Years) (Note: The heroine doesn't coast through an effortless power fantasy! There are moments of restraint, emotional pain, and tension. The tone is light and funny.) Fifteen-year-old Su Qingluan witnesses her entire family being slaughtered. After narrowly escaping, she cuts her hair, binds h 1Reads—Score—14d adds

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    Please, please! [Almost crying] I'd like some feedback and guidance. [Almost crying] #Crossdressing #ImperialExamNovel #SillyAndSatisfyingNovel #MutualLove

44. 1144 吾 My Three Wishes 吾有三愿 Mechanical Wang机械汪Ancient Romance787k WordsOngoing [Mad Queen x Reclusive Power Behind the Throne] [Past and Present Lives] [Sweetness and Angst] [Fated Redemption] [Alternate World] (This story focuses on [Two Powerful Leads Growing Together] and [Profound Devotion]. Sweetness and angst intertwine. This is not a mindless power fantasy, so read with care if that's not your thing!) In their previous life, in the modern world, the two parted forever on a snowy night! He sat in a wheelchair dusted with snow, and his three wishes ended in regret as 59Reads7.7Score—14d adds

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    More than thirteen hours, mutual love ❤️

45. 1145 前 My Ex Is Impossible to Shake Off 《前任他太难缠》 Mo Fengbai墨锋白6k WordsCompleted My Ex Is So Hard to Shake —Reads—Score—14d adds
46. 1146 燎 The Blazing Plains Chronicles: Armed with Farm Tools, I Topple the World 燎原纪之扛着农具掀翻世界 Dream Mage原梦法师Eastern Fantasy200k WordsOngoing A page full of absurdities, a handful of bitter tears. I cannot abide injustice in this world, nor bear to hear the sorrows of humankind. A few words, rambling nonsense, dreamlike mutterings: all to tell the tales of this world. So, dear readers, listen as I tell them, slowly. 1Reads—Score—14d adds

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    A rural boy! From a tiny shrimp struggling to survive amidst the onslaught of large fish, to leaping over the dragon gate! His journey of triumph, wielding a hoe and shovel, and using a sickle and axe to overturn the world! [Heart emoji]

47. 1147 阿 A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: Spending the Night in a Haunted House 阿野探灵日记：凶宅试睡 Wheat and Watermelon Rind麦子西瓜皮Mystery6k WordsCompleted A Ye's Paranormal Investigation Diary: Spending the Night in a Haunted House —Reads—Score—14d adds
48. 1148 不 I Won't Be a Superstar 不做大明星 Mechanical Wang机械汪Modern Romance651k WordsCompleted [New King of the Dark Web vs. Powerful CEO] [Both Leads Are Inexperienced] [Showbiz] [Elite Families] The dark web’s new king goes undercover as “QQ,” a little-known performer, and joins Fanxing Entertainment. Beneath his delicate, stunning looks is a hacker’s mind with an IQ of 162. His direct superior turns out to be Shen Linxing, the iron-fisted CEO who controls half the entertainment industry and the close friend who “disappeared” from his life when they were young! He joins the company to h 182Reads8.2Score—14d adds
49. 1149 姑 The Shen Family of Gusu: The Most Beautiful Woman in the World 姑苏沈家，天下第一美人 Mo Fengbai墨锋白18k WordsCompleted The Shen Family of Gusu, Home of the Most Beautiful Woman Under Heaven 2Reads—Score—14d adds
50. 1150 凤 Phoenix Soars Through the Nine Heavens: The Good-for-Nothing Princess Consort Is Too Arrogant 凤凌九霄：废柴王妃太嚣张 Stars Hang Over the Wilds, a Boat Drifts Across the Ferry Alone星垂野渡无人舟自横Ancient Romance194k WordsCompleted My new work is here! Welcome to read it on Tomato Novel. I hope you enjoy it. Your follows are what keep me writing, and I'll do my best to tell every story well! 2Reads—Score—14d adds

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    I'll reply to every comment from you all!

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