No showing off, no brainless decisions, and don't have the protagonist level up every time they lose a fight. The protagonist and supporting characters should be intelligent, and the plot should make sense.
A mutated wind spirit root, he created his own cultivation technique before Foundation Establishment. He received spirit stones through the "golden finger" of the God of Wealth, Yuanbao. Ruthless and cruel, he cultivated in the demonic sect at 15, achieved Foundation Establishment at 24, Core Formation at 54, and Nascent Soul at 114. Fellow cultivators, can I still make it to the end? Thank you.
