Cyberpunk: Yang's Escape from His Family of Origin

Thumbs up, it's really good! Lao Yang is finally eating well! Lao Wei's mom is finally living a good life. Let Lao Hei Pi and Jin live together! The Demon Orb's cold treatment is still great! Keep it up! Like, comment, and share! A three-in-one combo!

It's well-written, but I feel the relationship between Lao Yang and Gloria is too abrupt, like fate. But then again, this is just a pairing created by netizens, and that's why everyone's here. 😏

When I first clicked in, I thought it was just another AI-generated short story about an overpowered protagonist, and I was prepared to finish it within 10 chapters. However, after reading the latest chapter, I realized the author is a dedicated writer who has both watched and played the game, and done their research. I didn't see any trace of AI manipulation (forgive my poor eyesight).

Looks good, keep updating! Boys, don't rush into a relationship just because of a beautifully edited photo. The person behind the screen and their true nature may not be the same as in the picture. Girls, don't mistake a guy's gaming skills for true love, mistaking in-game glory for real-life affection. Constantly compromising yourself to please him is pointless.

Anyway, it's something I wanted to watch. Maybe I automatically ignored the flaws, but I really didn't think there was anything wrong with it. That negative review felt deliberate, quite strange. The latest chapter is still great! If those two little hedgehogs don't get married, I'm really going to have to deal with them! 😡

It's rare to find a novel with an indigenous protagonist that I enjoyed reading so much. Perhaps it's because the character design itself is quite good; the author faithfully recreates the cyberpunk world, and the writing is also quite good. As for the plot, the author just needs to trust himself. With the two Edgewalker novels and the game itself, the story should be quite long to write 🥺 Keep going, hurry up!

This fanfiction about Lao Yang is unique on Tomato's site. Other fanfics either lack sufficient word count or are so out of character (OOC) that the only thing missing is the name "Lao Yang." From the beginning of the book, I wondered how Lao Yang and Gloria could possibly meet. After all, it's a stark class divide.

High quality, not AI-generated, well-paced and concise, with well-developed characters and no out-of-character moments. The only potential issue is that Mann and K shouldn't know Old Vieira, but that's for the sake of the plot. After all, they've been reborn, and a digital AI has been added. A minor deviation from the original story is just a plot device, so it's perfectly fine. The writing style and pacing are very skillful. So far, it's great, just not enough! [Requesting more updates!]

The characters are portrayed with great detail, and the plot is very logical. The author's writing is truly strong; it was a very enjoyable read. The romance is exceptionally well-written. Just imagining Lao Yang soon having a beautiful and capable wife and a sensible son makes me chuckle.

Boss, we respect your teeth! Okay, this is just my personal opinion and suggestion, purely subjective. First of all, it's excellent. The author's OOC parts and personal touches are barely noticeable, giving it a very original feel. I suggest adding more happy endings, whether for original or new characters.