Invincible Young Hero: The Old Man Next Door Is Conquest

Hh who was attracted by the thunder cover It's delicious. I love eating delicious food. It's friendly to people who haven't watched the original manga. It's fun to play with. You can tell it's made by hand. Of course it's got good reviews.

Surprisingly, it's not bad. More and more people will read it. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and try to write a complete outline for the long-term plan. Many good novels first set up a specific outline (such as the specific direction of the story, opportunities for character changes, etc.) And then fill in the story bit by bit.

Don't miss it when you pass by, brothers, you'll find something nice to look at. If you like it, please leave a review. If you like it, praise the author and tell her how happy you are. If you find anything you don't like, you can tell me. The author will read every review carefully!

This book uses a multi-perspective narrative, and the writing is quite good, especially the fighting aspect. In my opinion, the overall character design is not collapsed. I don't know if AI is used, but I can't see any traces of AI. The psychological description and entry point of the conquest are very good, and I feel that the rhythm is also well grasped. I can give a rating of 9.2. According to the current description, after the conquest Maybe he will be with a wife who has had a child before (as for whether to get married, I haven't seen it yet, it depends on the author). To be honest, I feel a bit strange in this aspect. I feel that if Conquest is a good fall, it should be surrounded by a lot of children, rather than reorganizing a family like Nolan, but I feel that it is within my acceptable range.

There are a lot of mistakes, but there are still too few books about Invincible Heroes. To give you some comfort, you can read the comments. Readers will help you find some mistakes and correct them. Invincible Heroes fan fiction is still a blue ocean. As long as you work hard, it is not a dream to get 9 points for your book~ Besides, your writing is also very good and you don't look like you are using AI [Blow kiss] 👍

This book plays Conquer in a lively and wonderful way, and it can also make people clearly aware of the process of Conquer from the original tyrannical old man to the existence of an ordinary old man with human emotions. It does not violate the original work, but also turns the character of Conquer into a kind grandfather. The evolution process is also very well written.

I want to laugh when I see this thunder cover

It's pretty good. There's no OOC at the moment. The writing is pretty good and there's almost no AI flavor. But the introduction is a bit too rough. Just by looking at the introduction, I thought it was an assembly-line AI article. Another bad point is that there is a lottery system. I hope that there will be no situation where you will draw whatever is needed for the development of the plot.

It's very interesting, and the AI ​​flavor is not strong. It's the best-looking Invincible Young Heroes fanfic on Tomato. Stick with it. The subject of Invincible Young Heroes will become more and more popular compared to the Black Robe Pickets. I hope you stick with it until that day.

*Also coming in because of the Thunder cover. *Looking at it all, the senses are good. Looking forward to subsequent updates.