Starting with Three Golden Fingers, Beginning in the Rocks Era

Suggested three Devil Fruits: Logia type → Dark-Dark Fruit; Paramecia type → Momo-Momo Fruit; Zoan type → Mythical Zoan type - Human-Human Fruit (Lucifer: Six-winged Fallen Seraph). Lucifer refused to submit to Christ, leading a third of the angels in rebellion. After his defeat, he fell into Hell for nine days and was depicted as the demon king Satan.

Overall, it's not bad. Kotoamatsukami directly altered Linlin's harem will, showing great decisiveness. The only problem is the three-fruit constitution; assigning the protagonist the Dark-Dark Fruit severely lowers his potential. Given the protagonist's system, talent, and strength, the Devil Fruit choice should have been one that elevates his potential.

I've discovered a very serious problem for you. The situation is obvious and dire. It will significantly impact your future royalties. Of course, as a devoted fan, I have no choice but to help. So, send me all your saved drafts, and I'll take a look and see where the problem lies.

The Dragon-Dragon Fruit (Mythical Zoan type, Nidhogg form) + the Ice-Squirrel Fruit (Mythical Zoan type, Azure Dragon form) + the Bat-Bat Fruit (Mythical Zoan type, Vampire form) + the Rumble-Rumble Fruit (Mythical Zoan type, Forest-Forest Fruit), etc. All of these fruits are currently unclaimed and can be obtained by the protagonist, or given to his woman.

You had all three choices perfectly fine, then you had to pull that sly, accidental slip-up. And to make matters worse, you didn't even mention the specific rewards for going all in. You can keep playing the Riddler game yourself. Who cares? I'm not watching.

Author, I have a suggestion. I have a guess: Charlotte Linlin herself probably didn't eat a Devil Fruit. It was the priestess who deliberately slipped into Linlin's pocket while she was unconscious; there are the priestess's clothes on the ground in the flashback! Her purpose was to control Linlin's body, similar to possession. Later on, this potential threat could be eliminated.

I've listened to over 50 chapters and there aren't any major flaws, except the protagonist's fighting power is too overwhelming. He can already fight a general on equal terms in those 50-odd chapters, and by chapter 200 he's already defeated the world's ruler, Im, to the point of devastation.

I'm here to read novels, not to read mind games. Just write the novels properly, don't throw in unnecessary details; it's pointless.

Hmm, it's pretty good. I've written over 30 pages about Devil Fruits, but I still haven't decided which Devil Fruit it is?

The book is really good, please don't stop updating it, it absolutely must be finished, and it can't have a bad ending!