One Piece: The King of the World and His Army of Beauties

It is very real, and there are not many behaviors that other time travelers take for granted. Belongs to respecting the fate of others. Although he has a double standard, he admits that he is a double standard. This is the reality. There are really few people who can betray their own class. This is taken for granted. In fact, it's basically three days of heat. On the first day I was a superman, and on the second day I was a citizen of the motherland. On the third day, I don't eat beef

The rhythm is very good. He is the kind of Tianlong I need. He knows what he wants and has power. His strength is slowly and steadily improving. Okay, it's really to my liking. Your writing style is very good. Even if you don't write about the Celestial Dragons, it's still good to write a story about gods and heroes. The main theme is leisurely enjoyment, collecting beauties, and cultivating them, hehe (ºº )

I like this setting very much. It's interesting. The protagonist also has a brain. Usopp's mother, even that long-nosed woman will be accepted. This is too poisonous. Have you never seen a woman?

It's not toxic at the moment, but the author has never dared to destroy the original plot and has always wanted to keep it as it is.

Full marks! He has his own understanding of the power system and social logic of the pirate world, and he does not follow the fixed template plot in writing. Therefore, although reading refreshing articles does not require brainpower, the author's own social experience and life insights will make the work more comfortable. Water comes and goes and it becomes a nanny article [awkward laugh]

Did the author cut the world government too hard? According to what the author wrote before, at least the Four Emperors, the Revolutionary Army, the Navy, and a special race can fight against the World Government. Now the Revolutionary Army alone is enough, which is still not fully developed. You wrote in Chapter 26 that at least so many people can fight against the world government, but now the world government is just like this?

But the previous ones were relatively dull. They were basically about developing a supporting female character in One Piece. What was more interesting was the plot of Shanks being chased by a group of Celestial Dragons to become a pirate. The protagonist is a true double standard, but he admits that he has double standards and is not pretentious, which is rare.

I think it's pretty good First of all, the protagonist has planned the "main plot" from the beginning. And then execute it unswervingly The purpose is clear, the killing is decisive, and there is no distinction between good guys and villains. "The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing", "Kneeling and licking the protagonist group", etc. There are two best things about it. The Tianlong people start the game by maintaining the necessary appearance on the surface and being themselves in private. Then just accept the one you like. Even if you can't get along, just tie it up. The melon is not sweet, it just quenches your thirst. The main thing is respect, but don't care. The disadvantage is that the progress is too fast. If I write 500 chapters, I will probably be almost finished.

You have to keep working hard and add more of your own content. Don't always write about things in the original work that most people know. Write more about the development of the protagonist. There are currently 55 chapters. I've finished reading them. Most of them are things that are already in the original work. To be honest, it's just a rewrite of the previous plot. Add more of your own content. How can Oda write a fan like that? Otherwise, it would be no different from watching the original work.

To be honest, I never clicked to read this book because the rating was so low. I happened to watch it today. To be honest, I have almost never read a Pirates fanfic with a Draconian protagonist that is better handled than this one. The only one I had was a little impressed by the Holy Son of Sartan, but it was not as good as this one. Moreover, this book has undergone a lot of reinvention, from the characters to the background plot, it has been handled quite well. Looking back on this rating, I really don't know what to say...[What][What][What]😅😅😅