Type-Moon: Starting in the Fourth Holy Grail War, but Transforming into a Spirit

I hope the author can make some of the protagonists more rational and not have to worship and respect Saber so much. I hope it can be weakened appropriately. After all, the protagonist is a cherubim and has to be a bit strong. But overall it is very interesting and the plot is very innovative. It makes people excited and looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the author can work hard to continue writing.

It should be that Al has been used in some places. Al's words always say: not... Not... But, but it's okay. Well, the main problem is still Al. The author can actually change the description of this kind of AI a little bit. The main thing is what is not... Not... But, what is subtle and what is difficult to observe without looking carefully, such as frowning, smiling, etc. A small amount is okay, but most of the AI uses these descriptions. If it is like this, it will be weird even if it is not seen with AI.

After changing it, I was finally able to watch 🤦. Although it still has a strong AI flavor, at least it's not that poisonous.

The Fate/Zero route is so-so. I'm a die-hard fan of Ultimate King; I can't even walk past Saber. This chapter gets 2-3 stars. The Fuyuki Singularity in FGO is alright; it has some clever touches, but the portrayal of Mayuri is just average. The FA route is currently the best in terms of overall feel, and it's a chapter that integrates Date A Live and the Type-Moon universe quite well. However, we'll have to see what happens next, since this chapter isn't finished yet. But so far, the characterization of this little six is ​​better than the previous Mayuri characterization. Overall, I'd give it four stars. Keep up the good work! [Added to bookshelf]

It's not as bad as some people think, but there are definitely some problems. The protagonist is simply the protagonist; there's no question of who the protagonist is. It's more like someone who gained angelic abilities and had them rationalized based on the character of Yue. It's not entirely a role-playing genre, and besides, Date A Live characters are inherently difficult to portray. It's something to pass the time when you have nothing else to read; at least the values ​​and perspectives aren't problematic. I'd give it three or four stars—it's readable. This book is mediocre; it's not that bad, but it's not that good either. Those who gave it 1 or 2 stars are too subjective; the "large portion" wasn't enough. Actually, this book is still entertaining; it's decent, but not the best. The author said there will be a major revision soon, so let's look forward to it. I'll update my review after I finish reading the revised version. After glancing at the revised content, it provides a reasonable explanation and reduces some of the flaws, but it still doesn't quite deserve five stars. However, it's definitely worth four stars for now. I hope the author can continue to work hard. The current momentum is very good, and as long as there's no chance of the story being discontinued, it will surely create a masterpiece. As things stand, I hope the protagonist can experience some mental growth. Although, according to the novel, the protagonist has only been in the world for about 3 or 4 days, it's normal for someone with such great power to become arrogant. I'd be even more arrogant than the protagonist if I had that power. I mainly want to remind the author that the protagonist's mentality, or rather, from the protagonist's perspective, is indeed a little toxic in the early stages, but that's a normal phenomenon. Overall, this book has a promising future, and I will update the rating regularly. I hope the author will continue to work hard. 9.5 New Features Author, what's your current assessment of the protagonist's personality? ⊙_⊙ But if I had to give my opinion, I feel the protagonist is still drifting aimlessly, without a fixed point, completely detached from the story. He doesn't get angry when faced with cruelty, nor does he smile when faced with happiness. If I had to justify this, the only possible assessment would be that he is the pure and innocent lamb of God, which is why he was able to obtain the angel's disguise. I suggest that the most urgent task is to bring out the protagonist's personality and emotions. The book's concept is undeniably excellent. The rewritten section was actually quite good, and I felt the part where the protagonist encounters the ahoge (cowlick) was the most emotionally resonant. Perhaps because that section was criticized, the author began to avoid that style of expression. However, if the story continued along those lines reflecting the protagonist's personality, it wouldn't be a problem. They could have made it more believable that the protagonist is a hardcore CG enthusiast, which would at least somewhat justify the current character's portrayal, explaining it as collecting CGs without disrupting the plot. If the author insists on continuing with the current character design, the best suggestion I can give is to write the story from other people's perspectives, that is, insert a protagonist, but from a second-person perspective spoken by someone else in the story. This would at least alleviate the protagonist's rather hollow characterization; right now, the protagonist doesn't even have the typical otaku persona. #Sad In terms of plot description, since the protagonist is currently set to be invincible, less combat is acceptable. The depiction of daily life is more important than the portrayal of combat power. Hopefully, the author can add more daily life scenes; right now it's basically all main plot. Added in 9.13 The recent updates have given me many surprises. The author has made great progress; not only has the protagonist's personality and character design become more three-dimensional, but the descriptions of daily life and grand scenes are also absolutely delicious. The writing style is improving day by day, and it's truly a blessing to see the protagonist and the author progressing together! The only concern now is that the scene has become too large to be easily stopped. A slight mishandling could lead to controversy; for example, I've seen many comments suggesting burning Joan of Arc. However, I believe the author has already planned how the story will develop, and I hope this wonderful story can continue. As a witness, I would be overjoyed. [Sparrow's Masterpiece][Sparrow's Masterpiece][Sparrow's Masterpiece]

The front is a little dull, but the rhythm in the back is very good. Starting from the left and right of Alexander's exit, the whole thing becomes much more compact, and we can also see the serious battle between Kenneth and Kiritsugu. This time Diarmuid also accomplished what he always wanted to do. He left the duel with dignity and loyalty to the master. It was a dream come true. After watching a lot, I really wanted to see a good ending for Kenneth's group. Brother Flash is still a bit humorous, not developed enough, and may not be one of the main characters in terms of status, so I plan to retire it quickly. After a quick glance, the rating is so low, I guess I didn't wait until later. Give a five-star encouragement score to balance it out. If you have time later, you can revise the previous article, which will be even more perfect. Looking forward to the arrangement of the final battle and the ending of these characters who are still alive.

I feel like you must do a few things when writing about the author of Xingyue. The three kings must participate and blow saber and save Sakura. From what I have seen, all Xingyue novels are like this. Do you have any templates? Post them and see [what] And I think the protagonist's character is too plain. When I read novels, I don't look at myself in the mirror. When writing novels, don't make the protagonist's character look like a real worker 🤦

Yes, the plot is very reasonable. The character descriptions are also very good. The plot is also very interesting to watch. I don't know why, but I feel a sense of AI when I read it occasionally. It should be a question of my own experience. But overall it's a work worth watching.

It looks good, and generally speaking, the flaws do not hide the flaws. Speaking of which, will there be a follow-up to the fourth game? Does the author have any ideas to write a follow-up to the four battles in this timeline? For example, Dongmu's Great Holy Grail was stolen by America, and he fought a strange forgery of the Holy Grail War in North America. Then the protagonist, as an angel in human form, was entrusted by the church to be a referee, and he severely punished the Dead Apostle. It happened that there were many super-standard servants in that game, and it was a hearty mythical battle [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The protagonist is just Liya's licking dog