Soul Land II: I Awaken the Key of Restraint, and Choose to Slacken Off
斗二：觉醒约束之键，我选择摸鱼
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 275k Words
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Soul Land Fanfiction Without Unfair Bashing
Let's be objective. Ever since Tang San became a hot topic, people have been writing all kinds of mindless face-slapping power fantasies. Objectively speaking, even without his cheat, Tang San would have become at least a second-level god if nothing unexpected happened. Don't judge the mindset of a feudal sect using modern values.
Any Fanfiction for The Unrivaled Tang Sect?
I'm looking for a story where Huo Yuhao's upperclassmen weren't hurt by evil soul masters and still went on to compete.
Any The Unrivaled Tang Sect Fanfiction About Saving Huo Yuhao?
Looking for books similar to Douluo: My Wife Is Yuhao. In The Unrivaled Tang Sect, Huo Yuhao is basically the world's biggest punching bag. Even though he has cheats, he still suffers a lot and has nearly died several times. Tang San even looks down on him. Are there any stories where someone saves Huo Yuhao and helps him stay away from Tang San?
Any Fanfiction for Douluo Dalu 2: The Unrivaled Tang Sect?
I still haven't found anything good to read.
Reader comments 16
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Not bad. It's obviously different from other Douluo fanfics. The writing style feels obviously different. Come on. The writing style is quite good, but there are problems with the plot setting. The protagonist's subjective initiative is too low, and the character performance is not very likable. You can't write a book like this. To be honest, the protagonist is like a transparent person.
This book is not bad, and I also have my own opinions on the issues commented by other readers. 1. The protagonist uses Judas as a shield: The author said at the beginning that the protagonist has never played Honkai Impact 3, so he does not know the correct usage. Later, he did not use the Divine Grace Barrier until the end of the competition. 2. The protagonist is transparent: the protagonist has a bad personality, no system, not many highlights, and does not seize opportunities, which makes many people lack the sense of pleasure of the novel. 3. Female protagonist: This type of Douluo novel is popular for multiple female protagonists, but this book only has a female protagonist later, and it is not even a popular character in the original work. 4. Copyright and typos: Tomato has no copyright, so the author changed the name in the original work, but this lacks a sense of substitution. At the same time, there are often typos, resulting in incoherence. 5. Too fast pace: around chapter 60, time often jumps, resulting in a lack of content. The above are some major problems of this book. I hope the author will pay attention to it and remember to update more😄
Come on, author, the theme of Douluo in the Key of God is not common [laughter]
Come on the author, the writing is very good.
The author worked really hard to pass the review and not be judged as infringement by the system.
The writing is very good, but there are too few words.
When does the protagonist have his highlight moment?
It would be nice to see if you can post the names of the original characters in the comment area. Sometimes I see unfamiliar names and think they are original characters.
Update soon! Where is the author? One update a day. Author, you want to fly. [Pout] I'll tell you the number. 10 Updates a day.
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